This document provides an action plan and assessment for a photography student named Josh Brown on various assignments. It summarizes the student's work on tasks relating to types of photography, iconic photographers, practice images, an image plan, exhibition title/layout, and images produced. The assessor provides feedback on each task, generally praising the student's work but noting some areas for improvement. These include adding more detail about the subjects of photos for one task, uploading a required timeline, and commenting more on the choices made for images and on received feedback. The student signs to acknowledge the action plan and commitments to act on the advice. The assessor awards a Merit grade and signs off.

1. Unit 9 Photography Techniques
Candidate Name: Josh Brown
Assignment 1 – Types of Photography and Research
Evidence Grade
Unit 1:
P2, M2, D2 & P4,
M4, D4
Task 1- 3 (plus HL – Timeline)
Techniques
some Dist
Unit 9
P1, M1, D1
Task 4 – 8
Planning your images/exhibition
Blog Dist
Assignment 2: Creating Photographs using skills
Unit 9
P2, M2, D2
Task 9 - 10
Production – Images Produced
Blog Dist
Assignment 3: Evaluation / Evaluation
Unit 9
P3, M3, D3
Task 11
Step by step and evaluation
Blog Merit
Action Plan (to improve grade):
Task 1: Types of Photography – good choice of photos explained well.
Task 2: Icons of Photography – great choice of photos with annotations explaining your choices.
Task 3: Photographer – good powerpoint on your photographer, you could add detail on who the
photos are of and when they were taken.
Home Learning: Timeline – where is this? Please upload now uploaded, excellent detail well done
Task 4: Practice Images – great practice images, well done!
Task 5: Image Plan – good initial ideas
Task 6: Collage – great information on your topic and a clear collage showing your area.
Task 7: Exhibition Title/Plan – good draft of your exhibition layout and title ideas.
Task 8: Schedule/proposal – good plan for your project. Watch your spelling as a few errors.
Task 9: Images – great collection of photos edited well.
Task 10 &11: Exhibition/Evaluation/Feedback Questionnaire – your evaluation is well detailed and
shows your production journey well. However you need to add in why you have chosen to take the
photos you did. You also need to comment on your feedback. What have you learnt from it?
Student Action Plan
I understand the contents of this action plan and realise that it is up to me to act on the advice
given. I will…
Student Signature:
Date:
Assessor name: AJO
Date:24/11/14
Assessor signature: AJONES
Merit