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and the comparisons to the
professional media texts
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Video
 What am I going to keep?
• The bright colours
• The costume changes
• The split screens
 What am I going to change?
• The shot variations – I’m going to add a lot more
different shot distances such as extreme close ups etc
to make it more interesting
• The editing pace – speed it up to make it more upbeat
• Add more locations – to make it more interesting
Digi Pack
 What am I going to keep?
• The bright colours
• The individual Photos
 What am I going to change?
• Fill in dead space to stop it from looking so empty
• Add glitter to make it stand out more
• Use bigger text to make it easier to read so that
viewers are drawn into reading it
Website
 What am I going to keep?
• The bright colours
• The format of it
• The images
 What am I going to change?
• Fill in dead space to stop it from looking so empty
• Link up all the social media

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How i am going to act on feedback

  • 1. How I am going to act on feedback and the comparisons to the professional media texts Rough Cuts
  • 2. Video  What am I going to keep? • The bright colours • The costume changes • The split screens  What am I going to change? • The shot variations – I’m going to add a lot more different shot distances such as extreme close ups etc to make it more interesting • The editing pace – speed it up to make it more upbeat • Add more locations – to make it more interesting
  • 3. Digi Pack  What am I going to keep? • The bright colours • The individual Photos  What am I going to change? • Fill in dead space to stop it from looking so empty • Add glitter to make it stand out more • Use bigger text to make it easier to read so that viewers are drawn into reading it
  • 4. Website  What am I going to keep? • The bright colours • The format of it • The images  What am I going to change? • Fill in dead space to stop it from looking so empty • Link up all the social media