This document provides a review of two rough music video edits by Alex Nesbit. It identifies several issues with clips in the edits and ways to improve them. Issues noted include clips being too long or dull, unprofessional elements like gum chewing, low quality or static footage, and elements that look amateur or don't serve a clear purpose. The review provides feedback on lip syncing, lighting, blending modes, and using locations that allow efficient filming. Overall, the review aims to evaluate rough edits and identify ways to enhance the professionalism and storytelling of the final music video.