The document describes revisions made to a poster advertising a Beyoncé album based on feedback. The initial poster did not clearly indicate it was for Beyoncé, with her name in small text at the bottom. Feedback said the new design looked professional but didn't identify the artist. The poster was updated with Beyoncé's name in large white text down the side so viewers instantly knew the album. Further feedback confirmed the revised poster clearly showed it was for Beyoncé and would make people want to buy the album.

1. on my posters second draft

2. My old poster

3. My audiences thoughts
 ‘I like it. I think it looks a lot more professional now’
 ‘I can’t really tell whose album your advertising’
 ‘I like it but I think it needs to be clearer whose album
your advertising’
 ‘I think it looks a lot better now’
 ‘Much better and much clearer, it now looks like
something professional’

4. And correcting my poster based on my audience feedback.

5. From the feedback that I
got I could tell that my
new design was a lot more
professional and better
than my last design.
But one comment that
kept on cropping up was
that you couldn’t tell
whose album I was
advertising as Beyoncé's
name was right at the
bottom of the poster in
tiny writing so I decided to
change this.

6. Changes I made
Beyoncé's name
 I made changes to the poster
so you could clearly see that
this was a Beyoncé album. I
used a white coloured font to
place Beyoncé's name down
the side of the poster so that
if you were looking at the
poster you would know
instantly if that the album it
was selling you was one by
Beyoncé.

7. On the new poster

8.  ‘This looks much better now as I tell who is selling me
their album.’
 ‘This is definitely better’
 ‘I like it even more now, I would definitely buy this
album based on this poster’
 ‘I tell instantly whose album this is’

9. My new poster
This looks far better than
my very first draft and I
think it is definitely and
improvement on my
second. But most
importantly my audience
like it and they would buy
that album based on that
poster.