FMP Evaluation
Carter smith
Production Process Evaluation
Research
• A strength on my research is that I can gather important information and images
that are needed to complete my work and improve it. Another strength of if my
research is that it helps me improve on my Photoshop.
This helps me create more
important ideas that can help
me finish and create my final
design and product.
A weakness of my design is that
is can be very time consuming
always using Photoshop rather
than other applications.
• Another weakness of my design is that the time being used to create
Photoshop designs and products could be used in other les time
consuming products like texts and written information.
Planning
The strengths of my planning is that it makes a better
final product because I can edit and improve my final
product and design.
Another strength of my planning is that the final
product will be improved because if I plan it step by
step I can change little details to fit my needs and what
I want from the final design.
The weakness of my planning is that some on my work
I didn’t plan in little details. This made certain things
difficult to finish because of the little details.
A way I could have improved on this is that I should
have planned everything whereas I didn't’t plan
everything.
Time Management
• I managed time decently because my
Photoshop work and final design was
finished near to the being of the project
because I did it at home as well as at
college.
• I could have improved on time
management by doing more work out off
lesson and not wasting time by doing
small edits.
• If I had more time to expand my work I
would have produced music to go with
the album and imagery.
Technical Qualities
The similarities of my album compared to these albums on the right are that they are all dark and
mysterious, this is because it focuses on one image that is standing out and will draw your eye to
the Image.
The album
cover is
mysterious
and dark
like my own
creation.
The vintage
look gives it
a powerful
image.
Aesthetic Qualities
My work that I have produced is creative
and unique for what I aim for because
everything is different and isn’t copied to
anything. I also used the rule of three, this
means that the main image is behind the
side image of myself.
The strengths of this image is that it is well
done in the fact of editing and Photoshop,
this is because everything was edited, from
the birds to the image of the car. I would
improve the colour contact because it can
be seen as being to dim and dark.
One of the biggest strength of the design is that the colour contrast makes the Photoshop I
have created more in depth and more realistic, this is also because I used the rule of three.
Meaning the main image behind myself isn’t covered completely and the man is correctly
placed for the best location according to the rule of three.
Audience Appeal
I have a unique product that has
a unique design. This makes my
imagery different to any other I
have created and produced.
This has given a appealing look
for a audience that most things
haven’t. the bright colours with
the dim imagery is a perfect
contrast for a different design/
image.
From my questionnaire I have changed and modified the image
and the editing behind it. This gives the audience part of what they
wanted by giving them what they want. This improves the look and
the needs of the audience.
The contrast of the dark
with the light colours
makes a unique look of
the image.
This unique look
would change if the
imagery of myself or
the colours were
different but there not
because this contract
makes it different and
this is what I am
aiming for. This makes
the photo unique for
album cover I have
decided to make.
Peer
Feedback
Feedback 1
• What did you like about the product?
– It is very cool and different from existing products
what are around from. It shows a very clear
narrative to the audience.
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
-could more technique detail to it to make it stand out
from other album covers.
Feedback 2
• What did you like about the product?
– The creativeness behind it because its not just
copying someone else, totally original.
– Its also combining 2 things that usually go well
together, carter and explosions.
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– I think it could have more content included in the
album cover because there is literally 2 sides to an
album cover.
Feedback 3
• What did you like about the product?
– Its got a very unique style to it and the fact that he
has included himself shows that he can be
independent.
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– None
Peer Feedback Summary
• What do you agree with from your peer
feedback?
– I agree that there could be more on the image to
make it more bold but I wouldn’t change it because of
the original look.
• What do you disagree with from your peer
feedback?
– I disagree that there isn’t any improvements because
there is some improvements that could be made. Like
increasing the boldness of the Image.
Peer Feedback Summary
If I would have changed my
design/product I would improve the
colouring and also change some of
the imagery. This could make the
album cover a improvement from
what it is.
The feedback given has given me
ideas about what to change to suit
there needs. This means that I could
change or add some imagery.
The main point I gained from the peer feedback was that the colours
should be different because of the dark tones within the image. This
could make me change my design and choices for colouring because the
colour change could improve my work and make it a better design and
overall a better piece of work.

7. fmp evaluation

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    Research • A strengthon my research is that I can gather important information and images that are needed to complete my work and improve it. Another strength of if my research is that it helps me improve on my Photoshop. This helps me create more important ideas that can help me finish and create my final design and product. A weakness of my design is that is can be very time consuming always using Photoshop rather than other applications. • Another weakness of my design is that the time being used to create Photoshop designs and products could be used in other les time consuming products like texts and written information.
  • 4.
    Planning The strengths ofmy planning is that it makes a better final product because I can edit and improve my final product and design. Another strength of my planning is that the final product will be improved because if I plan it step by step I can change little details to fit my needs and what I want from the final design. The weakness of my planning is that some on my work I didn’t plan in little details. This made certain things difficult to finish because of the little details. A way I could have improved on this is that I should have planned everything whereas I didn't’t plan everything.
  • 5.
    Time Management • Imanaged time decently because my Photoshop work and final design was finished near to the being of the project because I did it at home as well as at college. • I could have improved on time management by doing more work out off lesson and not wasting time by doing small edits. • If I had more time to expand my work I would have produced music to go with the album and imagery.
  • 6.
    Technical Qualities The similaritiesof my album compared to these albums on the right are that they are all dark and mysterious, this is because it focuses on one image that is standing out and will draw your eye to the Image. The album cover is mysterious and dark like my own creation. The vintage look gives it a powerful image.
  • 7.
    Aesthetic Qualities My workthat I have produced is creative and unique for what I aim for because everything is different and isn’t copied to anything. I also used the rule of three, this means that the main image is behind the side image of myself. The strengths of this image is that it is well done in the fact of editing and Photoshop, this is because everything was edited, from the birds to the image of the car. I would improve the colour contact because it can be seen as being to dim and dark. One of the biggest strength of the design is that the colour contrast makes the Photoshop I have created more in depth and more realistic, this is also because I used the rule of three. Meaning the main image behind myself isn’t covered completely and the man is correctly placed for the best location according to the rule of three.
  • 8.
    Audience Appeal I havea unique product that has a unique design. This makes my imagery different to any other I have created and produced. This has given a appealing look for a audience that most things haven’t. the bright colours with the dim imagery is a perfect contrast for a different design/ image. From my questionnaire I have changed and modified the image and the editing behind it. This gives the audience part of what they wanted by giving them what they want. This improves the look and the needs of the audience. The contrast of the dark with the light colours makes a unique look of the image. This unique look would change if the imagery of myself or the colours were different but there not because this contract makes it different and this is what I am aiming for. This makes the photo unique for album cover I have decided to make.
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    Feedback 1 • Whatdid you like about the product? – It is very cool and different from existing products what are around from. It shows a very clear narrative to the audience. • What improvements could have been made to the product? -could more technique detail to it to make it stand out from other album covers.
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    Feedback 2 • Whatdid you like about the product? – The creativeness behind it because its not just copying someone else, totally original. – Its also combining 2 things that usually go well together, carter and explosions. • What improvements could have been made to the product? – I think it could have more content included in the album cover because there is literally 2 sides to an album cover.
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    Feedback 3 • Whatdid you like about the product? – Its got a very unique style to it and the fact that he has included himself shows that he can be independent. • What improvements could have been made to the product? – None
  • 13.
    Peer Feedback Summary •What do you agree with from your peer feedback? – I agree that there could be more on the image to make it more bold but I wouldn’t change it because of the original look. • What do you disagree with from your peer feedback? – I disagree that there isn’t any improvements because there is some improvements that could be made. Like increasing the boldness of the Image.
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    Peer Feedback Summary IfI would have changed my design/product I would improve the colouring and also change some of the imagery. This could make the album cover a improvement from what it is. The feedback given has given me ideas about what to change to suit there needs. This means that I could change or add some imagery. The main point I gained from the peer feedback was that the colours should be different because of the dark tones within the image. This could make me change my design and choices for colouring because the colour change could improve my work and make it a better design and overall a better piece of work.

Editor's Notes

  • #4 What were the strengths of your research? How did your research help your product? What were the weaknesses of your research? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  • #5 What were the strengths of your planning? How did your planning help your product? What were the weaknesses of your planning? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  • #6 Did you manage your time well? Did you complete your project on time or would your products have improved with additional time? What would you have done if you had more time to produce your work?
  • #7 Compare your work to similar existing products and discuss the similarities and differences Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page alongside an existing product Use text boxes and arrows
  • #8 Does your work look good? Was it creative? What aspects of your game’s visuals do you like? What would you improve? How would you improve it? Discuss the strengths and weaknesses Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them Use text boxes and arrows
  • #9 How have you appealed to your target audience? What specific bits of content would appeal to your target audience. Refer to your findings from your questionnaire. Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them Use text boxes and arrows
  • #15 What changes would you make to your product based upon your peer feedback and why?