this is my fmp evaluation

1. FMP
Evaluation
Your Name

2. Production
Process
Evaluation

3. Research
• Strengths- some positives to my research was, It was relevant to what I was
trying to do, I looked at the genre as a hole for audio books and see how it was
done, I looked at audio books with a similar Theam for example in my research
I looked at a song called you new boyfriend which is a happy toned song with
dark lyrics about this helped me with setting the tone of the start being
somewhat happy and towards the middle and end it gets dark.
• Weaknesses- some not so positives things was, I didn’t get to do as much as I
swapped topics halfway through, I should have looked more to get a better
idea of the product I was making.

4. Planning
• Strengths- some positives of my planning was that I know I could have
done all the things I planned, I think its creative and I got everyone I need
for voice acting.
• Weaknesses- I changed the topic of my product so I needed to re planed
and rushed a bit, it took a bit to get everyone I needed but I did in the end
I also didn’t plan set times to meet and do the line sand it was done on a
Wim as were all together.

5. Time Management
• My time management was not good as about a week into the whole thing
I switched up my idea and had to redo some passed power points and
then continue with the rest of the power point and there was a time I
couldn’t doing anything as I was waiting on my friends to send me audio
flies for lines and had to finish the project outside od class and didn’t even
finish it properly adding no sound effects or music like I was planning.
• If I had more time, I would have added in sound effects and
music and finalized the product how I planned inset of rushing
to get it done like I had to do.

6. Technical Qualities
No line dividing the blood
Has the title on it
Has a music sheet
Has a drawing related to the name
Different Theam

7. Aesthetic Qualities
I think that the cover and the Instagram post are creative because for the cover it gives off
the horror effect withy the blood and font giving a danger aspect and the image overlay
shows off a before and after effect to the cover and the Instagram post is creative because
it shows advertisement for my product if it was a real audio book.

8. Audience Appeal
My product appeals to the audience
of 16–18-year-olds and people that
like dark concepts and magic because
it contains dark concepts like death
and magical concepts like the book
that is controlling the main
characters. It also appeals to the age
range of 16-18 because its mature
and frightening then most audio
books and the characters are around
that age so the characters could
relate to the reader.

9. Peer Feedback

10. Feedback 1
• What did you like about the product?
– I liked the idea you had and the way it was set up
• What improvements could have been made to
the product? add in sound effects and music
to complement the audio

11. Feedback 2
• What did you like about the product?
– The audio quality was grate and the way the lines
were said were well done
• What improvements could have been made to
the product? Sound effects should be added

12. Feedback 3
• What did you like about the product?
– The idea and the charets were good and the way
the voices sounded were grate
• What improvements could have been made to
the product? Adding in sounds and cutting out
some of the audio that doesn't need to be
there like the piano directions

13. Peer Feedback Summary
• What do you agree with from your peer
feedback? I agree that I should have added in
some sound effects and music and remove
some audio that doesn't need to be there like
the piano directions
• What do you disagree with from your peer
feedback? I don’t disagree with anything

14. Peer Feedback Summary
In summary I should have spent more time on
adding in sounds and ,music instead of rushing
at the end and cutting out some of the stuff
that wasn’t needed there like directions over
all I should have spent more time on finalizing
this then rushing to get it done. If I had
another change I would make sure I organized
times to meet up with people to do lines and
add in music and sound effects.