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A2 Coursework – Media Texts
Name: PINDER Joseph
There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the technical skills.
Music Video
Footage:
Shot well with good cinematography throughout. Good moments of lip syncing.
Clear narrative executed well. The make-up of your artist could be better in the lip
syncing scenes.
Editing:
Excellent use of black and white/purple to give your video an original theme. Nice
use of transitions throughout. Edit matches the tone of the song well.
Overall:
There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the technical skills.
A proficient all round video with good narrative.
Ancillary Task 1: Digipak
There is proficiency in the creative use of most of the technical skills. The layout
has been considered well and follows industry conventions. Images have been
framed, cropped, resized and edited well. Good use of the purple/black theme to
match the video well. Text chosen is appropriate, need the artist name added to
the spine.
Ancillary Task 2: Poster
There is evidence of basic ability in the creative use of some of the technical skills.
The layout shows some awareness of industry conventions. A well framed image,
could have been edited more to match the colours of the digipak more. Social
media tabs also could have been edited to match the colour scheme as well as
being centralised for a more aesthetic view.
Video:
31/40
Level
Ancillary Task 1:
7/10
Level
Ancillary Task 2:
6/10
Level
Total 44/60

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Pinder joseph a2 cw production feedback sheet

  • 1. A2 Coursework – Media Texts Name: PINDER Joseph There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the technical skills. Music Video Footage: Shot well with good cinematography throughout. Good moments of lip syncing. Clear narrative executed well. The make-up of your artist could be better in the lip syncing scenes. Editing: Excellent use of black and white/purple to give your video an original theme. Nice use of transitions throughout. Edit matches the tone of the song well. Overall: There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the technical skills. A proficient all round video with good narrative. Ancillary Task 1: Digipak There is proficiency in the creative use of most of the technical skills. The layout has been considered well and follows industry conventions. Images have been framed, cropped, resized and edited well. Good use of the purple/black theme to match the video well. Text chosen is appropriate, need the artist name added to the spine. Ancillary Task 2: Poster There is evidence of basic ability in the creative use of some of the technical skills. The layout shows some awareness of industry conventions. A well framed image, could have been edited more to match the colours of the digipak more. Social media tabs also could have been edited to match the colour scheme as well as being centralised for a more aesthetic view. Video: 31/40 Level Ancillary Task 1: 7/10 Level Ancillary Task 2: 6/10 Level Total 44/60