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A2 Coursework – Media Texts
Name: JONES Lauren
Music Video
There is evidence of excellence in the creative use of many of the technical skills.
Footage:
Controlled use of camera, great variety of shots, shots in focus. Excellent use of
mise-en-scene (especially the use of masks) and genre conventions. Some very
good use of locations. Visuals work well with lyrics. Clear narrative established.
Editing:
Video is edited to beat with some good actions to beat. Good use of effects in
forest scenes.
Overall:
Excellent video which meets the conventions for a dance/indie video. Good
attention to visuals to maintain audience interest. Good meaning created –
friendship and belonging.
Ancillary Task 1: Digipak 10/10
Lauren has demonstrated excellence in the design of her digipak for her artist.
There is clear awareness of the industry and genre conventions. Photographs
used excellently are appropriate to the task. Creative mix of photography and art
(hand drawn elements). Excellent use of photoshop skills such as cropping and
colour manipulation. Clear branding used throughout.
Ancillary Task 2: Poster 9/10
Lauren has demonstrated excellence in the design of her poster for her artist.
There is clear awareness of the industry conventions with the addition of facebook,
Instagram, itunes and twitter icons. Excellent photoshop skills have been used in
the creation such as cropping and use of contrast. You could have added the hand
drawn elements to this to link it further with the digipak.
Video:
36/40
Level 4
Ancillary Task 1: Digipak
10/10
Level 4
Ancillary Task 2: Poster
9/10
Level 4
Total 55/60

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Jones lauren production feedback

  • 1. A2 Coursework – Media Texts Name: JONES Lauren Music Video There is evidence of excellence in the creative use of many of the technical skills. Footage: Controlled use of camera, great variety of shots, shots in focus. Excellent use of mise-en-scene (especially the use of masks) and genre conventions. Some very good use of locations. Visuals work well with lyrics. Clear narrative established. Editing: Video is edited to beat with some good actions to beat. Good use of effects in forest scenes. Overall: Excellent video which meets the conventions for a dance/indie video. Good attention to visuals to maintain audience interest. Good meaning created – friendship and belonging. Ancillary Task 1: Digipak 10/10 Lauren has demonstrated excellence in the design of her digipak for her artist. There is clear awareness of the industry and genre conventions. Photographs used excellently are appropriate to the task. Creative mix of photography and art (hand drawn elements). Excellent use of photoshop skills such as cropping and colour manipulation. Clear branding used throughout. Ancillary Task 2: Poster 9/10 Lauren has demonstrated excellence in the design of her poster for her artist. There is clear awareness of the industry conventions with the addition of facebook, Instagram, itunes and twitter icons. Excellent photoshop skills have been used in the creation such as cropping and use of contrast. You could have added the hand drawn elements to this to link it further with the digipak. Video: 36/40 Level 4 Ancillary Task 1: Digipak 10/10 Level 4 Ancillary Task 2: Poster 9/10 Level 4 Total 55/60