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1. A2 Coursework Overall Marks Sheet
Name: DENNING Becky
Planning – comments and mark out of 16/20
For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 29/40
Footage:
Good use of camera, with good variety of shots, mostly in focus. Good use of framing.
Some good use of mise-en-scene (especially the use of locations/performance). Use of
singer works well.
Editing:
Video is edited to beat with good actions to beat. Good use of transitions that link with
song and visuals. Footage has been edited well but narrative could be clearer. Some
attempt to lip synch.
Overall:
Good video that meets the conventions of the genre. Good attention to visuals to
maintain audience interest. Narrative is unclear, needed to show that singer is
reminiscing a different/better life. Editing does not always match intensity of song.
Construction – Ancillary Task 1 (Digipak) comments and mark out of 8/10
Evidence of proficiency in the creative use of most of the technical skills.
Front cover is good with clear understanding of layout. Back cover shows awareness of
design conventions. Inside covers could show better creativity.
Construction – Ancillary Task 1 (Poster) comments and mark out of 8/10
Evidence of proficiency in the creative use of most of the technical skills.
Clear design and great image used. Good variety of font with good awareness of layout
and design.
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 16/20
Question 1:
Prezi – Great detail and evidence on how video conforms/challenges chosen genre.
Good detail on why you made the choices you did, backed up with good links to real
products from genre. Clips or images to these real products are a good addition to
answer. Good understanding shown of genre and audience expectations of genre
video.
Question 2:
PowToon – good detail on how the 3 products work together with the same theme
running through each product. Clear design throughout with key elements – colour,
iconography, and image – used in all products creating meaning and familiarity with
audience.
Question 3:
Emaze – good use of feedback that has good reflective comments with strengths and
weaknesses identified. Some detail on how to improve work in future projects. Clear

2. conclusion at the end but could have had more detail on how to answer criticisms.
Question 4:
PowerPoint/SlideShare – Good succinct detail on technologies used in production.
Post shows good understanding of technologies used and benefits of using certain
technologies for different parts of production.
Overall:
Posts show good understanding of task with good research and information. Work is at
times descriptive and lacks good use of terminology or links to technical elements.
Good use of technology in evaluation.
Practical work is of a good standard and student has made good progress.
Total 77/100 Grade: B