- In the preliminary task, the font color was not clearly visible and looked plain, but for the cover the author planned the color scheme in advance and found a unique font to match the genre. However, the masthead was too small and boring compared to the colored squares. - For the contents page, the preliminary version did not fill the space and looked unfinished. The author made the music magazine contents page busier to fit the punk genre. Research on other magazines allowed adding more details. - The layout and space usage has greatly improved - the preliminary version positions sub-images poorly while the music magazine positions them by the related articles and keeps traditional elements like the editor's note.