4. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
Turtle: I like turtles. He looks so happy. I like how curvy he is
too.
Sheep: I like the shape that I made my sheep fluff out of
because it really makes my sheep look really fluffy. The
colours also look realistic too.
What would you improve if you did it again?
I would give it more detail on the shell and the limbs. I also
think that there should be some shading to help make the
image stand out. It might need a background to that the feet
could stand out a bit. My sheep’s face is scaring me…
6. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I say I did a good job on the hat and the facial hair. I
think I got the face shape spot on to the original. I
think that you can definitely tell that the rotoscope
is Clint Eastwood.
What would you improve if you did it again?
I would try to give him eyes even though in the
original image he was squinting. I would also add in
more detail on his clothes and hat. I would also like
to make a nose for him.
8. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I like the BLINDING part because the effects that I
used reflects the meaning of the word. The image
fits the style of film quotes because the image is
very dark and that helps the text to stand out.
What would you improve if you did it again?
I would choose a different font that fits the
character more and to make it look more
interesting. The quote might be to long to so maybe
I need to find a smaller quote.
11. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I like the stripes on text based 1 and the bevel
effect on text based 2 looks like someone cut my
name on a piece of paper and a explosion is
about to come out of it.
What would you improve if you did it again?
I would like to experiment more with the effects
and try to make them look more eye-catching.
16. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I like the black and white samurai image because the red on
the samurai and his sword looks like blood. The red samurai
images make him look very menacing and demon like,
defiantly not a friendly fellow. I like the knight images because
one, I like knights and two, I like the details of the armour
What would you improve if you did it again?
I think for knight 1 I would make a better background because
it kind of looks a bit plain. Knight 2 might need a background
change because I don’t like how blobby it is.
25. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I'm in it! There is a unique twist at the end. There is a lot of
different angles in the images.
What would you improve if you did it again?
Definitely the focusing and lighting. The images that needs more
focus are images 2 and 5. The lighting in image 1 needs to be
brighter. I would also say that there is some inconsistency with
image 7 and 8. In image 7 I’m pulling the door open to my left
but in image 8 the door is opened to the right.
27. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I like the shapes that I used to make the character. I like
the floating pieces as they make the character look more
like a human. The patterns make the image and character
look more interesting. I like how he is made out of simple
shapes to.
What would you improve if you did it again?
I would like to make a better background and add colour
to the image. You can’t really tell what the character is
made out of (supposed to be rocks)
29. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I REALLY like the water background I made because the detail of it
looks so nice. I like how you can faintly see a boat in the bottom
corner. I like the detail of the sand and the shape of the sand makes it
look realistic. The blue tint I’ve added really makes the image look like
it is underwater.
What would you improve if you did it again?
I forgot to use the cut out filters on the shells. I thought that using the
cut out filter will make the image look more like a cartoon but some of
them didn’t work on all of them. I would add some sort of shading to
the bottom layer of the sand to help it stand out more.
34. Proposal
Dimensions
Number of pages are between 8-12 and the page size will be 21x21cm maybe. The
pages will be in a square shape
Story Overview
(Provide an outline of your story)
There's a giant called Cormaron who is stealing treasure and animals from the village. The people
of the village want to stop the giant but are too scared to do anything. A young, poor farming boy
called Jack volunteers to stop Cormaron and goes to his cave. Once he arrives he makes a hidden
hole to trap the giant and calls him out. Cormaron does not like visitors and tries to eat Jack but
he falls into the hole. Now stuck, Jack frees the animals and takes the treasure but Cormaron begs
that Jack helps him get out and swears that he will never steal again. Jack gives him a second
chance and pulls him out of the hole. Jack comes back to the village and is greeted by the King
who gives him the title Jack the Bravehearted.
Export Format
PDF
Advantages: High quality images
Disadvantages: The reader may not be able to change anything once finished. The
original would need to be edited
35. Deadline
The deadline of my book is the 31st of March 2017.
Audience
(Think about who you are targeting as your audience. Consider age, gender, class,
location and other characteristics which could define your audience.)
My product is for children age 3-6, boys and girls, all classes, ethnic backgrounds
and locations that speak English. My book will be suitable for children to listen to,
read with parents/others or children to read themselves. The text will be simple
enough so that children of this age can remember the words and look at/read from
memory.
Production Methods
(Explain the methods you are going to use to produce your pages. Show us the
thinking behind your decisions for a more detail response) I will use Photoshop to
design and create the characters and backgrounds. I will use simple shapes to
design all of my characters and backgrounds because the images will be accessible
for children. I’ll also use Google images to find textures and use those textures on
my characters to make them look more interesting.
36. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
The general idea is good, they have chosen a
popular story and has decided to implement a more
child friendly spin on his own adaptation by
removing any killing from the story.
The proposal still needs finishing with both
production methods and audience still to fill in.
could possibly talk about how his target audience is
that of a young age that’s why they have decided to
remove any killing from their adaptation.
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?
The mood board design is good, it presents an idea
of what the characters may look like and also the
settings and props of the story. They have also
shown a good idea of what he font used in their
book may look like.
the mind map is good yet could do with adding
more to as is still quite brief. More could also be
possibly added to the mood board, perhaps more
depth into the other characters stated in the mind
map.
37. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
Slide 27 has been done very well especially in the
story overview making it clear of what the story is
going to be about.
Slide 28 of the proposal in not finished so the main
thing to work on before improving on slide 27 would
be to complete slide 28.
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?
You have managed to cover 5 things which is good
as it shows you have thought about the things you
have needed too. I also found it good that the
spider diagram is set out well and is easy to follow.
Opinion -
I saw that you have not chosen a name for the
story and have 2 to choose from in my opinion the
second one does not work as jack does not actually
kill the giant.
The idea generation is good but very brief so could
go into further detail to cover more.
38. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
I like the way the story has been laid out which has
been one very detailed. Also within this story it has
shown that there are traits of not to do like steal as
this Is shown as a bad thing to do. Also this teaches
the children that they should learn not to steal like
they do in this book but the other characters tells
me that he cannot do that.
Slide 28 still needs finishing off. As this would help
me to say what types of style you will be using
within your book. For instance would it been hand
drawn, rotoscoped or something else. As this needs
to be point into perspective of what you wanting to
be made to look like.
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?
Good understanding of what the multiple characters
will look like of how they will be illustrated to look
like. As this would give a good sense of imagery.
I think that idea generation needs more information
on where it has been set and what type of style it
has been made to be.
39. Feedback Summary
Sum up your feedback.
Everyone said that my work is good but the all of them said that the mind map was brief
and the second part of the proposal hasn’t been finished.
Which parts of your feedback do you agree with and why?
I can say that the second part of the proposal definitely needs finishing. The mind map
could of maybe needed more work on it.
Which parts of your feedback do you disagree with and why?
To answer that opinion bit, Prince Kindhearted was a separate tale to Jack the Giant
Killer. At the time I didn’t know which one I wanted to do so I put them both on the
mind map. In the end, Jack the Giant Killer won because I had more ideas of what I
wanted to do with that tale.
40. Original Script
Original Script goes here with link to where it came from
http://www.worldoftales.com/European_folktales/English_folktale_19.html
When good King Arthur reigned, there lived near the Land's End of England, in the county of Cornwall, a farmer who had one only
son called Jack. He was brisk and of a ready lively wit, so that nobody or nothing could worst him.
In those days the Mount of Cornwall was kept by a huge giant named Cormoran. He was eighteen feet in height, and about three
yards round the waist, of a fierce and grim countenance, the terror of all the neighbouring towns and villages. He lived in a cave in
the midst of the Mount, and whenever he wanted food he would wade over to the main- land, where he would furnish himself with
whatever came in his way. Everybody at his approach ran out of their houses, while he seized on their cattle, making nothing of
carrying half-a-dozen oxen on his back at a time; and as for their sheep and hogs, he would tie them round his waist like a bunch of
tallow-dips. He had done this for many years, so that all Cornwall was in despair.
One day Jack happened to be at the town-hall when the magistrates were sitting in council about the Giant. He asked: "What reward
will be given to the man who kills Cormoran?" "The giant's treasure," they said, "will be the reward." Quoth Jack: "Then let me
undertake it."
So he got a horn, shovel, and pickaxe, and went over to the Mount in the beginning of a dark winter's evening, when he fell to work,
and before morning had dug a pit twenty-two feet deep, and nearly as broad, covering it over with long sticks and straw. Then he
strewed a little mould over it, so that it appeared like plain ground. Jack then placed himself on the opposite side of the pit, farthest
from the giant's lodging, and, just at the break of day, he put the horn to his mouth, and blew, Tantivy, Tantivy. This noise roused the
giant, who rushed from his cave, crying: "You incorrigible villain, are you come here to disturb my rest? You shall pay dearly for this.
Satisfaction I will have, and this it shall be, I will take you whole and broil you for breakfast." He had no sooner uttered this, than he
tumbled into the pit, and made the very foundations of the Mount to shake. "Oh, Giant," quoth Jack, "where are you now? Oh, faith,
you are gotten now into Lob's Pound, where I will surely plague you for your threatening words: what do you think now of broiling
me for your breakfast? Will no other diet serve you but poor Jack?" Then having tantalised the giant for a while, he gave him a most
weighty knock with his pickaxe on the very crown of his head, and killed him on the spot.
Jack then filled up the pit with earth, and went to search the cave, which he found contained much treasure. When the magistrates
heard of this they made a declaration he should henceforth be termed
JACK THE GIANT-KILLER
and presented him with a sword and a belt, on which were written these words embroidered in letters of gold:
"Here's the right valiant Cornish man,
Who slew the giant Cormoran."
41. Story Breakdown
Final script goes here.
1. Introducing Jack.
2. Giant stealing animals and treasure
3. Jack saying he will get the things back
4. Jack finds the giant’s cave and digs a hole
5. Giant tries to eat Jack
6. Giant falls down the hole
7. Jack frees the animals and takes the treasure
8. Giant begs Jack to help him out
9. Jack helps him
10. King or villagers titles Jack
42. Draft Script
Final script goes here.
Once upon a time, there was a poor little boy named Jack. Jack lived in a village working
on a farm and taking care of the animals.
One day a Giant known as Cormoran showed up and took the treasure of the village and
Jack’s animals.
Jack sees that the village people are to scared to do anything about it, so he says
“Don’t worry, I’ll get everything back from Cormoran!”
Jack found the big dark cave that Cormoran lived in and started digging a hole at the
entrance.
Jack shouted out “Cormoran! I have come to take our animals and treasure back!”
Cormoran stomped out of the darkness saying “Fee-fi-fo-fum, I smell the blood of an
Englishman!”
His eye(s) looked at Jack and he began to charge at him, but…
He fell into the hole that Jack had made!
Jack quickly frees the animals and takes the treasure and starts to leave.
However, Cormoran cries out from the hole “Wait! Don’t go! Please let me out of here! I
promise to never steal again!”
Jack took a moment but he decided to give the giant a second chance and helped him out
of the hole. “Thank you!” said Cormoran. “I am so sorry about everything. Can we be
friends?” “Sure!” said Jack
Jack returned to the village with all the animals and treasure to the people of the village
and they all celebrated and gave Jack the title of..
“Jack the Bravehearted”
43. Final Script
Final script goes here.
1. Once upon a time, there was a poor little boy named Jack. Jack lived in a small village,
worked on a farm and took care of the animals.
2. One day a Giant known as Cormoran showed up and stole the treasure of the village
and Jack’s animals.
3. Jack saw that the village people were too scared to do anything about it, so he said
“Don’t worry, I’ll get everything back from Cormoran!”
4. Jack found the big dark cave that Cormoran lived in and started digging a deep hole at
the entrance.
5. Jack shouted out “Cormoran! I have come to take our animals and treasure back!”
6. Cormoran stomped out of the darkness saying “Fee-fi-fo-fum, I smell the blood of an
Englishman!”
His eyes locked on Jack and he began to charge at him, but…
7. He fell into the deep hole that Jack had made!
8. Jack quickly freed the animals and took the treasure and started to leave.
9. However, Cormoran cried out from the hole “Wait! Don’t go! Please let me out of here! I
promise to never steal again!”
10. Jack took a moment but he decided to give the giant a second chance and helped him
out of the deep hole. “Thank you!” said Cormoran. “I am so sorry about everything. Can
you forgive me?” “Sure!” said Jack
11. Jack returned to the village with all the animals and treasure. The village celebrated
Jack’s return. The villagers regarded him as a hero and decided to give Jack the title of…
“Jack the Bravehearted”
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