Sarah, georgia, danielle and shannon feedbck letter
Brainstorming slogans rosie anderson
1. Making Mons Avenue Park a better
This slogan is direct and explains to the audience what our campaign is about and what we are
going to do. Its gets people more involved because they know it is about the better of their
community. However, it is not very fun for our target audience.
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Creating your dream park…
This slogan is direct to the audience. It gets the audience thinking about their dream park
and what they would like to include in it. It makes people want to get involved and get their
opinion across. It is bold, strong and it stands out.
Getting YOU involved!
This slogan is very direct because it includes ‘YOU’ this makes the audience think that it is
all about them. The slogan says all that we want to say. The font is red so people are likely
to notice it easily.
This one makes you feel like it is actually all about you but in reality it is about the
whole community as well, which is a good thing. The font is bold but it isn’t too bold that
it puts you off. The colour is a dark blue which could be considered as a serious colour
and it is not too childish for the teenagers.
2. Parks for you
This slogan is simple and quite catchy. It may be considered as boring for the children of
our target audience. It’s very bold and it gets to the point very quickly.