The letter thanks Bill for his presentation on addressing digital piracy and intellectual property. It notes that Bill showed an excellent understanding of the task and had some good ideas for his specific audience. The letter provides feedback that Bill should ensure his choices carefully consider the demands of the brief and get more feedback from his target audience. It looks forward to seeing how Bill's ideas develop further when draft work is presented in December.

1. ©opyright Heroes
Film house
Baldock, Herts SG7 6DZ
Web: www.copyrightheroes.co.uk
14th October 2014
Dear Bill,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 14th October. It was a good insight into your
progress and ideas so far considering how you can help address the problem of digital piracy and intellectual
property.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had an excellent understanding of the task, with some
ideas for your specific audience and a well planned presentation. There were some good links to the brief
throughout the presentation, which was pleasing to see our aims being considered, although some parts of
the presentation involved just reading out the brief – more connection to your own idea would improve
further.
To be successful, continue with what you are doing and ensure all choices carefully consider the demands of
the brief. Try to get more responses from your target audience to ensure your campaign truly suits their
needs.
Overall, I feel that the presentation was very good, with some good links to the task and brief.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the advice given here and the
feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the development of your campaign and
some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Sincerely,
ESim
On behalf of Copyright Heroes.