Beatrice betsy as pre production tasks feedback sheet
1. AS Pre-production Tasks Feedback
Student Name: Beatrice Betsy
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on
blog
1. Similar Products – film beginning analysis No Yes
2. Genre Analysis Yes
3. Target Audience Yes
4. Script Some Yes
5. Drafts Some
6. Storyboard Yes
7. Shotlist No Yes
8. Layouts – floor plan Some Yes
9. Locations No Yes
10.Costumes Some Yes
11.Props Some Yes
12.Actors Some Yes
13.Equipment Some
14.Production schedule Yes
Teachers comments
1. No work uploaded ‘7, The Most Wanted, White House Down and
Prisoners analysed well. You have picked out conventions of the genre
well.
2. Excellent prezi and mind map of genre conventions, well done.
3. Clear target audience outlines, well done.
4. This is not really a script, more of a list of dialogue. Please refer to the
hand-out for script format and keep this as a draft. Script written again in
correct format, although more staging detail needed for the scene.
5. Some evidence of drafting from ideas mind map to ideas post. Script
needed.
6. Good storyboards, some frames could have more detail.
7. No work uploaded A detailed shot list now added, well done.
8. Good floor plans but you need to explain where each one is location wise
rather than scene number. We need to know where we are. Locations
now explained better.
9. No work uploaded Location choices detailed well, good addition of
images
10.Some mention of costumes in production schedule but more detail is
needed Costumes choices detailed, good addition of images
11.Some mention of props in production schedule but more detail is needed
Prop choices detailed well, could have added images.
12.Some mention of actors in production schedule but more detail is needed
Actor choices explained well, good addition of images
13.Some mention of equipment in production schedule but more detail is
needed
14.Some good detail on your production schedule. You need to add more
2. detail to your editing section and break it down a bit more. Schedule
remains the same
Where is the rest of your work? You are missing quite a lot of elements Bea. At
the moment this is level 1 as there is minimal planning. Please use the notes in
red as a guide to improve your work.
All work now completed and uploaded to a proficient level.
Mark out of 20: 5
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 22/12/14
Student action plan for improvement
Final mark out of 20: 14 Date:10/03/15
