This document reviews the strengths and weaknesses of a magazine draft, including the front cover, contents page, and double page spread (DPS). For the cover, the strengths noted are the bright colors and conventional images, while it is criticized for not having much content. The contents page receives praise for its color scheme and detail, but could include more cover lines. The DPS headline is called eye-catching due to its color scheme, though the font is questioned.

1. Reviewof myfirstdraftof mymagazine
Strengthsof
my front
cover
Weaknesses
of myfront
cover
Strengthsof
my contents
page
Weaknesses
of my
contents
page
Strengthsof
my DPS
Weaknesses
of myDPS
Emily Bright
colours,
conventional
images
It doesn’t
have much
content
Good colour
scheme,
decent
amountof
detail
Coulddo
witha few
more cover
lines
Headline is
eye catchy
withthat
colour
scheme
I’mnot sure
aboutthe
font
Skye The
coverlines
standout
The fonts
aren’tvery
conventional
The titles
standout
It’sgot
loadsof
gaps
The image is
conventional
The pull
quote looks
out of place
Luke The name of
the
magazine
standsout
It’svery
empty
Conventional
writing
Font’s
aren’tgreat
Good
structure
Colour
scheme
isn’tgreat
Brad Conventional
pictures
Lacks detail Good
imagery
The fonts Good
structure
The colour
scheme