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Joshua Davey          Media


           Audience feedback

           My first method of gaining audience feedback was to my designs on social
           networking site and gain first hand research from the target audience.

           This is the feedback that I received:




Positive                                              Negative

      Conventional masthead                                 Image is too light, could be made darker to fit
      Conventional full and cluttered layout                more into the genre
      Contains conventional items for a magazine            The background colour at the top behind the
      cover (masthead, posters, large image(                words ‘EXCLUSIVES! Etc..’ looks out of place
      Instantly can tell the magazine genre                 and could be changed to make it look like it
                                                            has a flow.
      Varied text sizes
      Colours fit rock genre and contrast
      Good use of mise-en-scene
      Includes price and issue number
      Main Image is conventional:
      -stances show off pride and enjoyment
      -facial expressions show aggression and that
      they’re enjoying what they do
      Small images show aggression and emotion
Joshua Davey            Media




Positive                                               Negative

      Keeps continuous house style                          Font is quite normal, which isn’t conventional
      Good use of colours                                   to the rock genre
      -contrast                                             The section text that says win needs to be
      -conventional to rock genre                           improved, it looks out of place
      Image is conventional
      -Instrument in the shot
      -depressed facial expression
      Full of content layout
      Use of a competition (appeals to audience)
      Use of social networking (appeals to
      audience)
      Heading font is conventional, fits house style
Joshua Davey       Media




Positive                                            Negative

      Image is conventional                              Body copy text is too small
      Good use of mise-en-scene                          Too plain and basic
      Good use of facial expressions and props           Layout is too ordered
      ‘Ask box’ is a good idea to get information
      across in a more interesting way
      Sticks to house style of magazine
      Uses conventional colours
      Uses conventional font for heading
      Uses sans serif font for body copy which is
      conventional
      Includes page numbers and magazine name at
      the bottom
Joshua Davey              Media


I also gained feedback through emailing it to people I know who are within the
target audience.

Replies:

Reply 1

Front cover: The masthead is really conventional of the rock genre, and you can immediately tell
what the magazine genre is. All of the fonts are really conventional and the language is really good
too. The images are good, as they represent the artists by having the instruments and stuff in the
magazine.

Contents Page: The layout is really good, and there is a clear house style and it links to the front
cover. The font used for the contents section could be more interesting as it is quite "normal".

Double Page Spread: The DPS is good, but it is quite plain, and the font for the body copy is way too
small, it’s difficult to read. Maybe also you could make it more cluttered as it is quite ordered.


Reply 2

Front cover: Conventional masthead and good cluttered layout. You can easily tell it’s from the rock
genre, and the use of mise-en-scene is very good.

Contents page: Sticks to the magazines house style, good use of colours and good main image, the
image is conventional of the genre as it includes an instrument that’s relating to the featured article
and the genre, and also the facial expression is conventional.

Double page spread: This is good, but the layout isn’t conventional as it’s too ordered; improve it by
making it more cluttered.

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Other audience feedback

  • 1. Joshua Davey Media Audience feedback My first method of gaining audience feedback was to my designs on social networking site and gain first hand research from the target audience. This is the feedback that I received: Positive Negative Conventional masthead Image is too light, could be made darker to fit Conventional full and cluttered layout more into the genre Contains conventional items for a magazine The background colour at the top behind the cover (masthead, posters, large image( words ‘EXCLUSIVES! Etc..’ looks out of place Instantly can tell the magazine genre and could be changed to make it look like it has a flow. Varied text sizes Colours fit rock genre and contrast Good use of mise-en-scene Includes price and issue number Main Image is conventional: -stances show off pride and enjoyment -facial expressions show aggression and that they’re enjoying what they do Small images show aggression and emotion
  • 2. Joshua Davey Media Positive Negative Keeps continuous house style Font is quite normal, which isn’t conventional Good use of colours to the rock genre -contrast The section text that says win needs to be -conventional to rock genre improved, it looks out of place Image is conventional -Instrument in the shot -depressed facial expression Full of content layout Use of a competition (appeals to audience) Use of social networking (appeals to audience) Heading font is conventional, fits house style
  • 3. Joshua Davey Media Positive Negative Image is conventional Body copy text is too small Good use of mise-en-scene Too plain and basic Good use of facial expressions and props Layout is too ordered ‘Ask box’ is a good idea to get information across in a more interesting way Sticks to house style of magazine Uses conventional colours Uses conventional font for heading Uses sans serif font for body copy which is conventional Includes page numbers and magazine name at the bottom
  • 4. Joshua Davey Media I also gained feedback through emailing it to people I know who are within the target audience. Replies: Reply 1 Front cover: The masthead is really conventional of the rock genre, and you can immediately tell what the magazine genre is. All of the fonts are really conventional and the language is really good too. The images are good, as they represent the artists by having the instruments and stuff in the magazine. Contents Page: The layout is really good, and there is a clear house style and it links to the front cover. The font used for the contents section could be more interesting as it is quite "normal". Double Page Spread: The DPS is good, but it is quite plain, and the font for the body copy is way too small, it’s difficult to read. Maybe also you could make it more cluttered as it is quite ordered. Reply 2 Front cover: Conventional masthead and good cluttered layout. You can easily tell it’s from the rock genre, and the use of mise-en-scene is very good. Contents page: Sticks to the magazines house style, good use of colours and good main image, the image is conventional of the genre as it includes an instrument that’s relating to the featured article and the genre, and also the facial expression is conventional. Double page spread: This is good, but the layout isn’t conventional as it’s too ordered; improve it by making it more cluttered.