Hillier jade evaluation and overall feedback sheet
1. A2 Coursework Overall Marks Sheet
Name: HILLIER Jade
Planning – comments and mark out of 14/20
For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 29/40
For full comments please see the production marks sheet
Construction – Ancillary Task 1 (Digipak) comments and mark out of 9/10
Excellence in the creative use of most of the technical skills.
Great design fitting genre and band. Clear understanding of conventions. Clear
technical skill.
Construction – Ancillary Task 1 (Poster) comments and mark out of 5/10
Basic ability in the creative use of some of the technical skills.
Work seems an afterthought.
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 12/20
Question 1:
(PowerPoint/SlideShare) Brief breakdown of video and how meaning was created
(technical elements/mise-en-scene). Little detail on how the video
conforms/challenges genre conventions. Good use of images as evidence from
own product.
Question 2:
(Word) Some good analysis linking products together showing some good
understanding of task, genre and conventions. Some use of real products as
evidence.
Question 3:
(Prezi) Good use of feedback to get response from target audience. Some good
feedback, which shows success of products with good understanding of task,
genre and conventions. But how many people did you interview? Age? Gender?
Are they fans of the genre? Reflective comments are basic, needed more detail on
what was learnt from feedback.
Question 4:
(PowerPoint/SlideShare) Some nice info on technologies used with some detail on
how they were used. Needed better reflective comments and screen grabs from
Premiere and Photoshop.
Overall:
A proficient piece of work showing some understanding of tasks. Some good use
of technology and presentation.
Total 69/100 Grade: C
