Colquhoun cameron evaluation and overall feedback sheet

1. A2 Coursework Overall Marks Sheet
Name: COLQUHOUN Cameron
Planning – comments and mark out of 14/20
For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 31/40
For full comments please see the production marks sheet
Construction – Ancillary Task 1 (Digipak) comments and mark out of 6/10
Basic ability in the creative use of some of the technical skills.
Good design fitting genre and band for front and back but inside images lack the
same creativity. Some understanding of conventions. Clear technical skill.
Construction – Ancillary Task 1 (Poster) comments and mark out of 7/10
Proficiency in the creative use of most of the technical skills.
Good design fitting genre and band. Clear understanding of conventions. Clear
technical skill. Good link to Digipak.
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 14/20
Question 1:
(Emaze) A good breakdown of shots and how meaning was created (technical
elements/mise-en-scene) and influenced by the genre. Some nice detail on how the
video conforms/challenges genre conventions. Good use of images as evidence.
Question 2:
(Video) Some good analysis linking advert and video together showing good
understanding of task, genre and conventions, but no detail on digipak. Good use of
examples of real products. Would have been better to focus more on your products.
Question 3:
(PowerPoint/SlideShare) Good feedback from target audience using questionnaire,
though would have been good to gender, age and if they were fans of genre. Some
good reflective analysis of feedback.
Question 4:
(Prezi) Some good info on technologies used with some detail on how they were
used. Would have been good to see screen grabs of Premiere and Photoshop.
Overall:
A proficient piece of work showing some good understanding of tasks. Good use of
technology and presentation.
Total 72/100 Grade: B