Coupland joshua evaluation and overall feedback sheet
1. A2 Coursework Overall Marks Sheet
Name: COUPLAND Joshua
Planning – mark out of 7/20
For full comments and details please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction –
For full comments and details please see the production marks sheet
Main Task (music video) – mark out of 25/40
Ancillary Task 1 (Digipak) mark out of 7/10
Ancillary Task 2 (Poster) mark out of 7/10
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 13/20
Question 1:
Answered using a picture video with voice over. Well written dialogue that
excellently analyses how your video meets and challenges the forms and
conventions of rap music. Excellent use of a variety of examples throughout. You
could have voiced this yourself to make some of the dialogue flow better.
Question 2:
Answered using powerpoint and slideshare. Some good analysis of how your
products link and are successful in promoting your artist. Some good use of
examples although you could have made more references to how your products
would fit in with real media texts, such as similar record labels, fonts, layouts etc.
Question 3:
Answered using emaze. Good use of survey to reap answers, although would
have been good to see actual results/statistics from the survey rather than a
overview. Some good comments on what you have learnt from this feedback
although more detailed analysis would have been beneficial.
Question 4:
Answered using prezi and youtube. Good use of technology. Good breakdown of
each stage of production and the technologies used. You could have added what
new skills you have learnt using each piece.
Overall a proficient body of work. Good use of technologies throughout.
Planning 7/20
Main Task (music video) 25/40
Ancillary Task 1 (Digipak 7/10
Ancillary Task 2 (Poster) 7/10
Evaluation 13/20
Total 59/100
