Overall Feedback sheet

1. AS Coursework Overall Marks
Name: COLLIER Solomon
Planning – Comments and mark out of 13/20
For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 43/60
For full comments please see the production marks sheet
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 11/20
Question 1:
PowerPoint/SlideShare – some detail on how conventions used in production.
Some understanding shown of how camera and mise-en-scene used. Basic
evidence of real products – work is often repeated. Good use of screen grabs from
own product.
Question 2:
Prezi – some if basic understanding of how characters represented and affect on
audience through use of mise-en-scene. Use of theorists would have enhanced
answer.
Question 3:
Word/SlideShare – some detail on why distributor chosen with some examples
used as evidence. Shows basic understanding of audience and distributor profile.
No images used.
Question 4 and 5:
YouTube link not embed – Some detail on potential audience and how they were
attracted, but lacks good use of research into viewing figures and relies too heavily
on stereotypes. No feedback from audience added.
Question 6:
Blog post – some detail on various technologies used in all parts of production.
Missing images. Very basic detail.
Question 7:
Word/SlideShare – limited reflective detail on progress, with no images to illustrate
point.
Some detail on questions showing some understanding of task, audience and
genre.
But works lacks good analytical detail, sparse use of images and lacks good use of
technology in answering questions.
Read your work, as there are lapses in spelling, punctuation and capital letters!
Good clear layout throughout.
Total 67/100 Grade: C