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1. A2 Coursework Overall Marks Sheet
Name: ATKINSON Thomas
Planning – comments and mark out of 17/20
For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 38/40
For full comments please see the production marks sheet
Construction – Ancillary Task 1 (Digipak) comments and mark out of 9/10
Excellence in the creative use of most of the technical skills.
Great design fitting genre and band. Clear understanding of conventions. Clear
technical skill.
Construction – Ancillary Task 1 (Poster) comments and mark out of 9/10
Excellence in the creative use of most of the technical skills.
Great design fitting genre and band. Clear understanding of conventions. Clear
technical skill. Good link to Digipak.
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 15/20
Question 1:
(Prezi) A good breakdown of shots and how meaning was created (technical
elements/mise-en-scene) and influenced by popular culture and films. But analysis
lacks good detail if the video is challenging/conforming to genre conventions.
Question 2:
(Video) Confident piece of work that blends footage/music from real products and
tasks. Analysis links all 3 tasks together showing excellent understanding.
Question 3:
(Word/Tagexdo) Good reflective analysis of feedback with good evidence used.
Question 4:
(Emaze) Some info on a few technologies used but lacks good detail. Not all
technologies discussed.
Overall:
A proficient piece of work showing good understanding of tasks. Good use of
technology and presentation.
Total 88/100 Grade: A