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Production Process Evaluation
Research
• I think one strength of my research is that when I picked a genre of game I wanted
to focus on to make my game about I managed to find three existing products
within the genre and analyse them thoroughly. I have also selected images
carefully showing different parts about the game, from the weapon designs to the
characters, the landscapes and colour schemes used.
• I believe that one weakness of my research is that I could have looked at other
existing games to get more ideas for my product, games outside the genre I was
focusing on as it could have given me more ideas and could have influenced my
final product.
Planning
• One strength of my planning I think is that I looked in detail at three different types
of games I wanted to make my advergame about. For example I looked at making a
ragdoll type funny game, I also looked at making a story driven game, lastly I looked
at a battle royale style game, this is the idea I settled with.
• Another strength of my work that I can see is that when making my mood board I
sourced lots of varying images for the battle royale idea, for example I sourced
images with characters on them so I could see how I could design my characters, I
got pictures of maps and landscapes, buildings and weapons. Everything I needed
to look at so I could design my game.
• One weakness I can see is that throughout my initial plans is that when I started to
explain why I wanted to make a battle royale game I didn’t go into a lot of detail
about my idea. For example I didn’t explain how the game would play out, or why I
settled with this idea.
Time Management
• I managed my time poorly on this unit considering I have handed this one in late.
Apart from being late to hand this assignment in I think I managed my time well in
certain parts of this unit.
• For example I made my advergame in less than a week, I think this is good time
management because, it did not take me long to finish my advergame.
• Before I fell behind on this assignment I managed to complete my research and
initial plans quite quickly as before starting this assignment I already had ideas of
what I wanted to make an advergame about.
Technical Qualities
When looking at my product ( top left ) compared to the
existing product ( bottom left ) I can see some clear
differences and some similarities. One similarity
between my game and the existing is that they are both
pixel horror games. One clear difference is the
style/setting of the games, for example the existing
product looks to be a serious horror game as from the
picture I can see a dead body and the game doesn’t give
you a lot of visibility which I can see by the torch in the
character’s hand. This is done to create tension and
suspense for the player, I have not done this in my
product. I have not done this in my product because it is
more of a laid back game rather than tense.
Aesthetic Qualities
When looking at a few screenshots of my
work I think it looks like a pixel game. I think
my work shows some creativity as I
designed the ghost, zombies, the path and
the text used for the life counters and the
end game screen. If I could improve my
game I think I would add certain things to
the game, for example I would draw in
some gravestones as I think it would add
more character to the game instead of the
gravestones just being in the background. I
would also add some skeletons on the floor
or chasing the ghost, I also would bring the
dead trees forward so they too are not just
in the background.
Audience Appeal
When looking at my game and thinking of my
audience I think I have appealed to them. I
believe this because my audience are gamers
and I have created a game. It is a horror pixel
game therefore it could attract fans of horror
games and fans of pixel games. I believe that the
zombies and ghost will appeal to fans of horror
and the fact that the game is a pixel game will
appeal to fans of pixel games.
Peer
Feedback
Feedback 1
• What did you like about the product?
– Like the smooth animations.
• What improvements could have been made to the
product?
– I think it could be better if your animation was longer.
Feedback 2
• What did you like about the product?
– I like the characters in the animation and that the
animation is smooth and not blocky.
• What improvements could have been made to the
product?
– I think that your animation could have been longer and
that you could have designed the background yourself.
Feedback 3
• What did you like about the product?
– I like the idea of your game
What improvements could have been made to the
product?
– could have added more levels to your game
Peer Feedback Summary
• What do you agree with from your peer feedback?
– From looking at my feedback I agree with that I could have made
my game longer by adding more levels.
• What do you disagree with from your peer
feedback?
– I do not disagree with any of the points made on my feedback.
Peer Feedback Summary
When reading my feedback and taking in all the points made by my peers I would make my
game longer by making and adding more levels to my game. I could also add more characters to
my game and items, for example I could make more enemies to game, like skeletons and
vampires. I could also have added a coin counter to go with the life counter. I could have
designed my background instead of getting an image off of google. I would make all of these
changes as I think it would make my product a lot better.

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FMP Evaluation of a Pixel Horror Game

  • 3. Research • I think one strength of my research is that when I picked a genre of game I wanted to focus on to make my game about I managed to find three existing products within the genre and analyse them thoroughly. I have also selected images carefully showing different parts about the game, from the weapon designs to the characters, the landscapes and colour schemes used. • I believe that one weakness of my research is that I could have looked at other existing games to get more ideas for my product, games outside the genre I was focusing on as it could have given me more ideas and could have influenced my final product.
  • 4. Planning • One strength of my planning I think is that I looked in detail at three different types of games I wanted to make my advergame about. For example I looked at making a ragdoll type funny game, I also looked at making a story driven game, lastly I looked at a battle royale style game, this is the idea I settled with. • Another strength of my work that I can see is that when making my mood board I sourced lots of varying images for the battle royale idea, for example I sourced images with characters on them so I could see how I could design my characters, I got pictures of maps and landscapes, buildings and weapons. Everything I needed to look at so I could design my game. • One weakness I can see is that throughout my initial plans is that when I started to explain why I wanted to make a battle royale game I didn’t go into a lot of detail about my idea. For example I didn’t explain how the game would play out, or why I settled with this idea.
  • 5. Time Management • I managed my time poorly on this unit considering I have handed this one in late. Apart from being late to hand this assignment in I think I managed my time well in certain parts of this unit. • For example I made my advergame in less than a week, I think this is good time management because, it did not take me long to finish my advergame. • Before I fell behind on this assignment I managed to complete my research and initial plans quite quickly as before starting this assignment I already had ideas of what I wanted to make an advergame about.
  • 6. Technical Qualities When looking at my product ( top left ) compared to the existing product ( bottom left ) I can see some clear differences and some similarities. One similarity between my game and the existing is that they are both pixel horror games. One clear difference is the style/setting of the games, for example the existing product looks to be a serious horror game as from the picture I can see a dead body and the game doesn’t give you a lot of visibility which I can see by the torch in the character’s hand. This is done to create tension and suspense for the player, I have not done this in my product. I have not done this in my product because it is more of a laid back game rather than tense.
  • 7. Aesthetic Qualities When looking at a few screenshots of my work I think it looks like a pixel game. I think my work shows some creativity as I designed the ghost, zombies, the path and the text used for the life counters and the end game screen. If I could improve my game I think I would add certain things to the game, for example I would draw in some gravestones as I think it would add more character to the game instead of the gravestones just being in the background. I would also add some skeletons on the floor or chasing the ghost, I also would bring the dead trees forward so they too are not just in the background.
  • 8. Audience Appeal When looking at my game and thinking of my audience I think I have appealed to them. I believe this because my audience are gamers and I have created a game. It is a horror pixel game therefore it could attract fans of horror games and fans of pixel games. I believe that the zombies and ghost will appeal to fans of horror and the fact that the game is a pixel game will appeal to fans of pixel games.
  • 10. Feedback 1 • What did you like about the product? – Like the smooth animations. • What improvements could have been made to the product? – I think it could be better if your animation was longer.
  • 11. Feedback 2 • What did you like about the product? – I like the characters in the animation and that the animation is smooth and not blocky. • What improvements could have been made to the product? – I think that your animation could have been longer and that you could have designed the background yourself.
  • 12. Feedback 3 • What did you like about the product? – I like the idea of your game What improvements could have been made to the product? – could have added more levels to your game
  • 13. Peer Feedback Summary • What do you agree with from your peer feedback? – From looking at my feedback I agree with that I could have made my game longer by adding more levels. • What do you disagree with from your peer feedback? – I do not disagree with any of the points made on my feedback.
  • 14. Peer Feedback Summary When reading my feedback and taking in all the points made by my peers I would make my game longer by making and adding more levels to my game. I could also add more characters to my game and items, for example I could make more enemies to game, like skeletons and vampires. I could also have added a coin counter to go with the life counter. I could have designed my background instead of getting an image off of google. I would make all of these changes as I think it would make my product a lot better.

Editor's Notes

  1. What were the strengths of your research? How did your research help your product? What were the weaknesses of your research? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  2. What were the strengths of your planning? How did your planning help your product? What were the weaknesses of your planning? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  3. Did you manage your time well? Did you complete your project on time or would your products have improved with additional time? What would you have done if you had more time to produce your work?
  4. Compare your work to similar existing products and discuss the similarities and differences Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page alongside an existing product Use text boxes and arrows
  5. Does your work look good? Was it creative? What aspects of your game’s visuals do you like? What would you improve? How would you improve it? Discuss the strengths and weaknesses Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them Use text boxes and arrows
  6. How have you appealed to your target audience? What specific bits of content would appeal to your target audience. Refer to your findings from your questionnaire. Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them Use text boxes and arrows
  7. What changes would you make to your product based upon your peer feedback and why?