The Treatment 
PER007-1 Applied Choreography: Dance and Innovation 
Dr Louise Douse
Stream-of-consciousness writing task 
• Keep your hand moving. (Don’t pause to reread the line you have 
just written. That’s stalling and trying to get control of what you’re 
saying.) 
• Don’t cross out. (That is editing as you write. Even if you write 
something you didn’t mean to write, leave it.) 
• Don’t worry about spelling, punctuation, grammar. (Don’t even care 
about staying within the margins and lines on the page.) 
• Lose control. 
• Don’t think. Don’t get logical. 
• Go for the jugular. (If something comes up in your writing that is 
scary or naked, dive right into it. It probably has lots of energy.) 
(Goldberg, University of Bedfordshire 2005, pp. 10-112)
Have a clear intention 
• Starting points 
• Another work of art 
• Movement idea 
• Camera/editing technique 
• Location 
• Issues/concerns 
• Theme/narrative/formal/visual/aural 
University of Bedfordshire 3
Ideas 
• Themes 
• Emotional 
• Experiential (speed/transformation/flight) 
• Symbolic (love/one against many) 
• Physical (water/earth/gravity) 
• Action (gesture/climbing/running/falling) 
• Stories 
• From the world around you 
• Fairy tales 
• Historical events/lives 
• Own experience 
• Imagination 
• Formal/Abstract 
• Technical framework (camera in motion/speed on screen) 
• Restrictions (body parts/continuous zoom/looping and repetition) 
University of Bedfordshire 4
Ideas 
• Visual 
• Location 
• Object 
• Clothing 
• Colours 
• Aural 
• Music/narrative 
• Sound/image 
University of Bedfordshire 5
Suggestions 
• Ideas 
• A twisted shoulder, a head thrown back, a look to the side 
• If my footsteps follow yours, do we make a path? 
• Titles 
• The body as landscape 
• “A series of coincidences” 
• Reflection/refraction 
• Collision course 
• ‘The life of objects 
• Fractured view 
University of Bedfordshire 6
Developing your idea 
• Who/what are the people/objects on screen? 
• What are they doing? 
• Why are they doing it? 
• Where are they? 
• What are they wearing? 
University of Bedfordshire 7
Treatment 
• Writing down your ideas for clarity 
• Audience 
• Research – historical events/accuracy 
• Original 
• Honest – don’t be afraid to be different 
• Intelligent not obscure 
• Succinct 
• Who, what, why, where, clothing 
• Approach to soundtrack? 
University of Bedfordshire 8
Treatment 
• A concise expression of the core idea 
• A description of the look and atmosphere of the work 
• Idea of structure 
• Description of soundtrack 
• 200-400 words 
University of Bedfordshire 9
Task 
• Collect visual stimuli 
• Pinterest pin board 
• Look through the lens 
• Use your camera phone! 
University of Bedfordshire 10
Next Workshop 
Teaching week 6 
Calendar week 46 
Week beginning 
Monday 10th 
November 
Workshop 1: 
Constructing the 
Frame & 
Choreographing 
the Camera 
McPherson, K. (2006) 
‘Dance and the camera,’ in 
Making video dance: a 
step-by-step guide to 
creating dance for the 
screen. London: 
Routledge, pp. 23-40. 
University of Bedfordshire 11

Week 5 Lecture - The Treatment

  • 1.
    The Treatment PER007-1Applied Choreography: Dance and Innovation Dr Louise Douse
  • 2.
    Stream-of-consciousness writing task • Keep your hand moving. (Don’t pause to reread the line you have just written. That’s stalling and trying to get control of what you’re saying.) • Don’t cross out. (That is editing as you write. Even if you write something you didn’t mean to write, leave it.) • Don’t worry about spelling, punctuation, grammar. (Don’t even care about staying within the margins and lines on the page.) • Lose control. • Don’t think. Don’t get logical. • Go for the jugular. (If something comes up in your writing that is scary or naked, dive right into it. It probably has lots of energy.) (Goldberg, University of Bedfordshire 2005, pp. 10-112)
  • 3.
    Have a clearintention • Starting points • Another work of art • Movement idea • Camera/editing technique • Location • Issues/concerns • Theme/narrative/formal/visual/aural University of Bedfordshire 3
  • 4.
    Ideas • Themes • Emotional • Experiential (speed/transformation/flight) • Symbolic (love/one against many) • Physical (water/earth/gravity) • Action (gesture/climbing/running/falling) • Stories • From the world around you • Fairy tales • Historical events/lives • Own experience • Imagination • Formal/Abstract • Technical framework (camera in motion/speed on screen) • Restrictions (body parts/continuous zoom/looping and repetition) University of Bedfordshire 4
  • 5.
    Ideas • Visual • Location • Object • Clothing • Colours • Aural • Music/narrative • Sound/image University of Bedfordshire 5
  • 6.
    Suggestions • Ideas • A twisted shoulder, a head thrown back, a look to the side • If my footsteps follow yours, do we make a path? • Titles • The body as landscape • “A series of coincidences” • Reflection/refraction • Collision course • ‘The life of objects • Fractured view University of Bedfordshire 6
  • 7.
    Developing your idea • Who/what are the people/objects on screen? • What are they doing? • Why are they doing it? • Where are they? • What are they wearing? University of Bedfordshire 7
  • 8.
    Treatment • Writingdown your ideas for clarity • Audience • Research – historical events/accuracy • Original • Honest – don’t be afraid to be different • Intelligent not obscure • Succinct • Who, what, why, where, clothing • Approach to soundtrack? University of Bedfordshire 8
  • 9.
    Treatment • Aconcise expression of the core idea • A description of the look and atmosphere of the work • Idea of structure • Description of soundtrack • 200-400 words University of Bedfordshire 9
  • 10.
    Task • Collectvisual stimuli • Pinterest pin board • Look through the lens • Use your camera phone! University of Bedfordshire 10
  • 11.
    Next Workshop Teachingweek 6 Calendar week 46 Week beginning Monday 10th November Workshop 1: Constructing the Frame & Choreographing the Camera McPherson, K. (2006) ‘Dance and the camera,’ in Making video dance: a step-by-step guide to creating dance for the screen. London: Routledge, pp. 23-40. University of Bedfordshire 11