This document provides feedback on a student's pre-production tasks for an AS Media course. It summarizes the student's blog posts on similar films, genre analysis, target audience, and other pre-production elements. The feedback notes that the student's initial film analysis and genre analysis lacked technical terminology and detail. Additional research and examples were needed. Most tasks were subsequently amended by the student to demonstrate a stronger understanding through added detail, terminology and evidence. The teacher commends the student's extensive amendments and commitment to improving their work. They achieve a final mark of 17/20 after addressing the feedback and strengthening their analysis, research and pre-production details.