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AidanRawlinson
● “Title needs to be more different from tagline”
● “Needs Colour”
NextSteps...
When looking at my poster printed out I have also realised that the tagline and the title
look very similar. I feel that a different font would ruin the simplistic style however I
do need to change either element. I will be experimenting.
I feel like Aidan’s next comment may be a personal issue however if I was going to include
more colour it would only be for emphasis. With the main photo being in colour I feel that
the addition of more may disrupt the colour scheme I have selected.
LilyPotter
● “Main actor’s name clearer”
● “Your name on poster”
● “The filter doesn’t look right stretchy messy.”
● “The look isn’t shown in film or magazine, needs to
connect”
NextSteps...
Lily’s first comment I completely agree with. As with many posters the main actor’s name
should stand out from the rest possibly alongside the directors and therefore this is a
change I will be making. I will either highlight both names within the Billing Block or
insert them onto another location on the poster.
Personally I like the sketchy feel to the poster image as it goes alongside the theme of
children’s illustrations I am referencing from my film. However I am willing to experiment
and this could lead to alterations. The next comment also ties in with this highlighting
the fact that the actual effect I used on the photo is not used elsewhere and therefore
does not maintain a sense of synergy between the three products.
EmilyApps
● “Actor Name at top”
● “Film Website”
Nextsteps...
Similar to Lily’s on comment on the matter of my actors name I will be enhancing the title
or embedding it somewhere else on the product.
The next remark is commenting on the missing website link on the poster. In the previous
version of the poster I included this and this comment has highlighted the fact that I
have forgotten to include this when I edited the credits. I will be adding the website
address again.
Conclusion
To conclude I believe that my alternations have made this anciliary product much better
quality but by completing the feedback process again have highlighted even more that I can
do to improve the poster. I plan to edit the poster very soon, taking into account the
comments made by my peers.

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  • 2. AidanRawlinson ● “Title needs to be more different from tagline” ● “Needs Colour”
  • 3. NextSteps... When looking at my poster printed out I have also realised that the tagline and the title look very similar. I feel that a different font would ruin the simplistic style however I do need to change either element. I will be experimenting. I feel like Aidan’s next comment may be a personal issue however if I was going to include more colour it would only be for emphasis. With the main photo being in colour I feel that the addition of more may disrupt the colour scheme I have selected.
  • 4. LilyPotter ● “Main actor’s name clearer” ● “Your name on poster” ● “The filter doesn’t look right stretchy messy.” ● “The look isn’t shown in film or magazine, needs to connect”
  • 5. NextSteps... Lily’s first comment I completely agree with. As with many posters the main actor’s name should stand out from the rest possibly alongside the directors and therefore this is a change I will be making. I will either highlight both names within the Billing Block or insert them onto another location on the poster. Personally I like the sketchy feel to the poster image as it goes alongside the theme of children’s illustrations I am referencing from my film. However I am willing to experiment and this could lead to alterations. The next comment also ties in with this highlighting the fact that the actual effect I used on the photo is not used elsewhere and therefore does not maintain a sense of synergy between the three products.
  • 6. EmilyApps ● “Actor Name at top” ● “Film Website”
  • 7. Nextsteps... Similar to Lily’s on comment on the matter of my actors name I will be enhancing the title or embedding it somewhere else on the product. The next remark is commenting on the missing website link on the poster. In the previous version of the poster I included this and this comment has highlighted the fact that I have forgotten to include this when I edited the credits. I will be adding the website address again.
  • 8. Conclusion To conclude I believe that my alternations have made this anciliary product much better quality but by completing the feedback process again have highlighted even more that I can do to improve the poster. I plan to edit the poster very soon, taking into account the comments made by my peers.