The document outlines corrections made between the first production draft and final production of a magazine spread about the band The Cloaks. Changes included modifying fonts, sizes, and positioning of elements on the cover, contents page, and double page article spread to improve readability, balance, and visual appeal. Elements were standardized across pages and additional context or stories were included. Photos and captions were altered to better suit the stories and enhance audience engagement. The revisions aimed to achieve a more polished, sophisticated look befitting the intended audience.