The document provides corrections made between the first production draft and final production of a magazine spread about the band The Cloaks. Changes included modifying fonts, sizes, and positioning of elements on the cover, contents page, and double page article spread to improve readability, focus attention on key information, and make the design more conventional and sophisticated for the intended audience. Elements were reorganized and additional content was included. The changes enhanced cohesion between pages and drew readers to stories of interest through techniques like pull quotes and captions.