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DIFFERENCE BETWEEN
THE DRAFTS AND THE
FIRST DRAFT
 The background has been changed from red to white, as white
colour looks better than red.
 The image of Josh has been changed from Medium close to
Medium shot
 The position of the image of Josh Macqueen has been moved
from the side of Alina’s image to behind Alina’s shoulder and
slight rotated left
 I have added a red box behind Josh’s image, which makes him
looks more stand out
 Josh’s cover line (Interview with rising pop star Josh Macqueen)
has been moved to the side above Kris’s cover line
 The image of Kris has been moved from middle of the page to
the bottom right of the page and I have added some drop shadow
effect around her because audience might not notice about her
and the drop shadow can make herself to get attention from the
audiences.
FRONT PAGE
 Kris’s cover line has been moved and placed below Josh’s
cover line, as the image of Alina occupied the spaces at the
left and there is some spaces left at the right above her
shoulder
 The colour of the cover line of Josh’s has be painted as red
and Kris’s has been painted as yellow, which can attract more
audience’s attention
 The barcode of the magazine has been slightly changed as I
have found a very useful which can add the magazine name
and the price into it
 I have removed the Imagine Dragons' cover line
FRONT PAGE (CONT.)
 The image of Alina has been changed from long shot to
medium shot, as there are not enough space
 There are no any page number within the boxed with the
images
CONTENT PAGE
 The Pull quote within the main article have been moved as I
wanted to started from the second paragraph which makes
the page more realistic.
 I didn’t make the page number ‘21’ as the same font type
with the second DPS page.
 I have changed the image on the small box in the second page
into a long shot instead of image of me and her.
DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD

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Differences between drafts and the first draft

  • 1. Thomas Ngai DIFFERENCE BETWEEN THE DRAFTS AND THE FIRST DRAFT
  • 2.  The background has been changed from red to white, as white colour looks better than red.  The image of Josh has been changed from Medium close to Medium shot  The position of the image of Josh Macqueen has been moved from the side of Alina’s image to behind Alina’s shoulder and slight rotated left  I have added a red box behind Josh’s image, which makes him looks more stand out  Josh’s cover line (Interview with rising pop star Josh Macqueen) has been moved to the side above Kris’s cover line  The image of Kris has been moved from middle of the page to the bottom right of the page and I have added some drop shadow effect around her because audience might not notice about her and the drop shadow can make herself to get attention from the audiences. FRONT PAGE
  • 3.  Kris’s cover line has been moved and placed below Josh’s cover line, as the image of Alina occupied the spaces at the left and there is some spaces left at the right above her shoulder  The colour of the cover line of Josh’s has be painted as red and Kris’s has been painted as yellow, which can attract more audience’s attention  The barcode of the magazine has been slightly changed as I have found a very useful which can add the magazine name and the price into it  I have removed the Imagine Dragons' cover line FRONT PAGE (CONT.)
  • 4.  The image of Alina has been changed from long shot to medium shot, as there are not enough space  There are no any page number within the boxed with the images CONTENT PAGE
  • 5.  The Pull quote within the main article have been moved as I wanted to started from the second paragraph which makes the page more realistic.  I didn’t make the page number ‘21’ as the same font type with the second DPS page.  I have changed the image on the small box in the second page into a long shot instead of image of me and her. DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD