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Changes I've made From Mock Up Real Thing
• -Colourscheme: took away the orange because it was too similar to the yellow and it didn’t make the dull
yellow stand out, it was replaced with more purples and blues in order for the yellow on the masthead,
certain lines to stand out on the page. The yellows used on the real thing also are less green and go more
towards the orangey side of the gradient to look a little bit fresher and tie a bit more in with the rest of the
page
• -Cover lines: the amount of cover lines has. been reduced in order to mimic other special editions
• The words Special edition has been removed because if the magazine works well it should be obvious that it
is an edition based on this one artist in the main.
• The Black bars underlying the line under the masthead has been increased in darkness in order for the text
to stand out more.
• Illuminessence logo has been changed to lie more in sync with the grunge style.
• -bands at the top: I put names of different bands featured at the very top of the magazine to reach out to
the audience and grab their attention if they skim through it in the shop.
• -barcode added in order for customers to pay for it as well as a price sticker.
• -Photo is now of one of the band members in a full body shot to give variety to the rest of the images inside
that are mainly headshots as well as making the cover more visually interesting.
• -font change on the cover lines to work better together as well as adding drop shadows and less writing to
make the readability better.
• ‘’see more on Page 17’’-for easy navigation to the main article.[EDIT-on final edition it says page 5]
• -masthead: lies behind the artists Head and
Changes I’ve made from Mock Up  Real Thing
• Added ‘’This Week’’ to show that it is the contents page next to the
masthead
• Black Boxes Behind text in order to be in sync with the rest of the magazine
• Added Subscription Advert offer to mimic other magazines
• Added smaller images by the side of the main image in order to show off
actual pictures of the main band and to increase the variety in what the
reader can look at.
• Put in my own drawing
• Used yellow text on area at left to draw
• Added areas of blue and yellow to keep with ongoing theme
• Increased brightness of Masthead
• Increased opacity of underlying boxes
• Changed general colour scheme
• Added cover art from other bands onto the advertisement to add variety of
the other bands and effectiveness of the advertisement
Changes I’ve made from Mock Up Real Thing
• Changed text colour and messed with drop shadow and darkened the area
behind it in order to increase readability of the article
• Added in my own unique image
• Added several more areas of colour
• Added own image of the band because the article is based that theyre releasing
their actual faces
• Changed some minor issues with spelling and grammar

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一比一原版(DU毕业证)迪肯大学毕业证成绩单一比一原版(DU毕业证)迪肯大学毕业证成绩单
一比一原版(DU毕业证)迪肯大学毕业证成绩单
 

Changes made from mock up to final

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  • 2. Changes I've made From Mock Up Real Thing • -Colourscheme: took away the orange because it was too similar to the yellow and it didn’t make the dull yellow stand out, it was replaced with more purples and blues in order for the yellow on the masthead, certain lines to stand out on the page. The yellows used on the real thing also are less green and go more towards the orangey side of the gradient to look a little bit fresher and tie a bit more in with the rest of the page • -Cover lines: the amount of cover lines has. been reduced in order to mimic other special editions • The words Special edition has been removed because if the magazine works well it should be obvious that it is an edition based on this one artist in the main. • The Black bars underlying the line under the masthead has been increased in darkness in order for the text to stand out more. • Illuminessence logo has been changed to lie more in sync with the grunge style. • -bands at the top: I put names of different bands featured at the very top of the magazine to reach out to the audience and grab their attention if they skim through it in the shop. • -barcode added in order for customers to pay for it as well as a price sticker. • -Photo is now of one of the band members in a full body shot to give variety to the rest of the images inside that are mainly headshots as well as making the cover more visually interesting. • -font change on the cover lines to work better together as well as adding drop shadows and less writing to make the readability better. • ‘’see more on Page 17’’-for easy navigation to the main article.[EDIT-on final edition it says page 5] • -masthead: lies behind the artists Head and
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  • 4. Changes I’ve made from Mock Up  Real Thing • Added ‘’This Week’’ to show that it is the contents page next to the masthead • Black Boxes Behind text in order to be in sync with the rest of the magazine • Added Subscription Advert offer to mimic other magazines • Added smaller images by the side of the main image in order to show off actual pictures of the main band and to increase the variety in what the reader can look at. • Put in my own drawing • Used yellow text on area at left to draw • Added areas of blue and yellow to keep with ongoing theme • Increased brightness of Masthead • Increased opacity of underlying boxes • Changed general colour scheme • Added cover art from other bands onto the advertisement to add variety of the other bands and effectiveness of the advertisement
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  • 6. Changes I’ve made from Mock Up Real Thing • Changed text colour and messed with drop shadow and darkened the area behind it in order to increase readability of the article • Added in my own unique image • Added several more areas of colour • Added own image of the band because the article is based that theyre releasing their actual faces • Changed some minor issues with spelling and grammar