Chapter 11Chapter 11
OrganizingOrganizing
your speechyour speech
Tell them what you’re going to tell
them. Tell them, and then tell them
what you told them.
What are the parts of theWhat are the parts of the
speech?speech?
Parts of the SpeechParts of the Speech
Introduction
– Attention Getter
– Thesis Statement
– Preview
Body
– 3 main points
– Supporting data
Conclusion
– Restate thesis
– Summarizes main points
– Clinches
Body
Introduction
Conclusion
What does the introductionWhat does the introduction
do?do?
What the introduction doesWhat the introduction does
 Gets attention of the
audience
 Provides a link to your
thesis statement
 Gives your specific thesis
statement
 Previews what is coming
What are good attention-What are good attention-
getters?getters?
Good attention-gettersGood attention-getters
are…are…
 Asking a rhetorical
question
 Making References
 Making a Startling
Statement
 Giving a Quotation
 Telling a Story
What is the purpose of theWhat is the purpose of the
link?link?
What is the purpose of theWhat is the purpose of the
link?link?
 Goes between
attention-getter and
thesis and “links” the
two
 Develops a “bridge”
between the audience
and the topic. The link
motivates audience to
listen
Topic
Audience
Link
What is the thesis?What is the thesis?
What is the thesis?What is the thesis?
 It clarifies the overall goal of
your speech (to inform, to
persuade, or to entertain).
 It states your specific topic.
 It is the “theory” on which
your whole speech is based.
E=mcE=mc
What’s the attention-getter,What’s the attention-getter,
link, and thesis?link, and thesis?
“Girls, for just $10 you can learn what makes a guy fall in
love. You see, it’s all part of the ‘Get Him System’
published in Secrets of Kissing. And as the ad says, “No
longer will you have to rely on old-fashioned advice.”
This was taken from an actual ad found in the February
issue of Young Miss Magazine. Today, I am going to talk to
this very issue. But it is my opinion that we can still use
some “old fashioned” advice.
According to William Bennett, former Secretary of
Education and noted author, “Increasingly, Americans are
lacking a solid grounding in traditional values.” It is my job
today to persuade you that we all could benefit from taking
a step back.”
What’s the attention-getter,What’s the attention-getter,
link, and thesis?link, and thesis?
Attention-getter: “Girls, for just $10 you can learn what
makes a guy fall in love. You see, it’s all part of the
‘Get Him System’ system published in Secrets of
Kissing. And as the ad says, ‘no longer will you
have to rely on old-fashioned advice.’” This was
taken from an actual ad found in the February issue of
Young Miss Magazine.
Link: Today, I am going to talk to this very issue. But it is
my opinion that can still use some “old fashioned”
advice. According to William Bennett, former Secretary of
Education and noted author, “Increasingly, Americans are
lacking a solid grounding in traditional values.”
Thesis: It is my job today to persuade you that we all could
benefit from taking a step back.”
What follows the thesisWhat follows the thesis
statement?statement?
The preview follows theThe preview follows the
thesis statement.thesis statement.
One or two
sentences that give
the audience an
overview of the
major points
All the points will
then be examined in
detail in the body
A preview statementA preview statement
exampleexample
“Today I am going to show you why alcohol
abuse is so dangerous. We first look at the
physical damage done by alcohol, followed
by its mental effects, and then the effects on
society.”
The BodyThe Body
This is the
heart, the
brain, the
nerve center
of the
speech.
What is the map to theWhat is the map to the
speech?speech?
The map is theThe map is the
OUTLINEOUTLINE
 Purpose Statement at
the top
 You follow process of
subordination
 Three main headings
 Each is followed by
supporting information
 Can go deeper and
give details
Purpose Statement
Section
Pt. 1 Pt. 2 Pt. 3
Sample OutlineSample Outline
pose statement: The purpose of this speech is to inform the audience of the positive role that laughter can play in lives
I. Introduction
A. Have you ever head the sayings, “Let a smile be your umbrella” and “Laugh and the world
laughs with you?” Both of these sayings show how a positive attitude and laughter can work
to your advantage.
B. Laughter can do more than provide a pleasant smile.
C. I would like to discuss the various areas in your lives where laughter can play a significantly
positive role.
1. Laughter can help you on the job.
2. Laughter can help you with family and friends.
3. Laughter can help your health
II. Body
A. Laughter can help you on the job.
1. Can make you a more productive worker
2. Can cut down on absenteeism
B. Laughter and help you with family and friends
1. Northwestern University study says family disputes defused by jokes
2. People are drawn to laughter
3. Psychological study says those who laugh thought of as leaders
C. Laughter has health benefits
1. Changes attitude and helps overcome serious illness
2. Saves energy
3. Keeps vocal cords loose so fewer colds
III. Conclusion
A. Thus, laughter can make change your life.
Use Transitional WordsUse Transitional Words
To add ideas Beyond that, beside, moreover, next, finally
To illustrate For example, in other words, as proof, for instance
To yield a point Granted, of course, since this is so, although true
To show contrast Conversely, however, nevertheless, on the other
hand
To emphasize a point Above all, indeed, more important, in fact
To compare At the same time, likewise, similarly
To show order First, second, next, finally, in conclusion, last
To repeat or restate In other words, that is to say, in short
To summarize For these reasons, in conclusion, all in all, overall
To show space
relationships
Close by, nearby, next to, in front of, behind
To show time
relationships
Before, afterward, formerly, later, meanwhile,,
ultimately, presently, previously, subsequently
Organizational PatternsOrganizational Patterns
 Chronological
 Climactic
 Spatial
 Cause-Effect
 Problem-
Solution
In Sequence Story
Process
History
In Rank Facts
Order Examples
Reasons
By Origin Geography
or source Departments
Tour
From event Research
to outcome Case Studies
From problem Policies
to action steps Attitudes
Awareness
What is in the conclusion?What is in the conclusion?
The ConclusionThe Conclusion
Restate the Thesis
Summarize points
Clincher - which
should tie back to
the attention getter
The ClincherThe Clincher
Must fit the mood of
speech
Must make sense
Must bring finality
Identify the three parts ofIdentify the three parts of
the Conclusionthe Conclusion
“So, I hope by now you can see that laughter is
no joking matter. It can make you a more
productive and effective worker, a more
sensitive friend and family member, and
even a healthier person. So let’s establish
and maintain a ‘laughing attitude.’ It costs
nothing. Therefore, the words you heard at
the beginning of my speech, “Let a smile be
your umbrella,” might be sound advice. Go
ahead and laugh. Hopefully the world will
laugh with you.”
Identify the three parts ofIdentify the three parts of
the Conclusionthe Conclusion
Restated Thesis: So, I hope by now you can see that
laughter is no joking matter.
Summary of main points: It can make you a more productive
and effective worker, a more sensitive friend and family
member, and even a healthier person.
Clincher: So let’s establish and maintain a ‘laughing attitude.’ It
costs nothing. Therefore, the words you heard at the
beginning of my speech, “Let a smile be your umbrella,” might
be sound advice. Go ahead and laugh. Hopefully the world
will laugh with you.”
Recalling the FactsRecalling the Facts
 What does the introduction consist of?
 Why must the body of the speech be clearly
organized?
 What is subordination and why is it important?
 What is the most critical sentence in a speech?
 Why are transitions important?
 How do you decide which organizational
pattern is the best to use?
 What does the conclusion consist of?Look Back on Page 312 of textbook
VocabularyVocabulary
 introduction
 quotation
 narrative
 link
 thesis statement
 preview statement
 body
 outline
 purpose statement
 subordination
 main heading
 supporting materials
 transition
 chronological pattern
 climactic pattern
 spatial pattern
 cause-effect pattern
 problem-solution
pattern
List on Page 285 of textbook

Chp 11 speech_org

  • 1.
    Chapter 11Chapter 11 OrganizingOrganizing yourspeechyour speech Tell them what you’re going to tell them. Tell them, and then tell them what you told them.
  • 2.
    What are theparts of theWhat are the parts of the speech?speech?
  • 3.
    Parts of theSpeechParts of the Speech Introduction – Attention Getter – Thesis Statement – Preview Body – 3 main points – Supporting data Conclusion – Restate thesis – Summarizes main points – Clinches Body Introduction Conclusion
  • 4.
    What does theintroductionWhat does the introduction do?do?
  • 5.
    What the introductiondoesWhat the introduction does  Gets attention of the audience  Provides a link to your thesis statement  Gives your specific thesis statement  Previews what is coming
  • 6.
    What are goodattention-What are good attention- getters?getters?
  • 7.
    Good attention-gettersGood attention-getters are…are… Asking a rhetorical question  Making References  Making a Startling Statement  Giving a Quotation  Telling a Story
  • 8.
    What is thepurpose of theWhat is the purpose of the link?link?
  • 9.
    What is thepurpose of theWhat is the purpose of the link?link?  Goes between attention-getter and thesis and “links” the two  Develops a “bridge” between the audience and the topic. The link motivates audience to listen Topic Audience Link
  • 10.
    What is thethesis?What is the thesis?
  • 11.
    What is thethesis?What is the thesis?  It clarifies the overall goal of your speech (to inform, to persuade, or to entertain).  It states your specific topic.  It is the “theory” on which your whole speech is based. E=mcE=mc
  • 12.
    What’s the attention-getter,What’sthe attention-getter, link, and thesis?link, and thesis? “Girls, for just $10 you can learn what makes a guy fall in love. You see, it’s all part of the ‘Get Him System’ published in Secrets of Kissing. And as the ad says, “No longer will you have to rely on old-fashioned advice.” This was taken from an actual ad found in the February issue of Young Miss Magazine. Today, I am going to talk to this very issue. But it is my opinion that we can still use some “old fashioned” advice. According to William Bennett, former Secretary of Education and noted author, “Increasingly, Americans are lacking a solid grounding in traditional values.” It is my job today to persuade you that we all could benefit from taking a step back.”
  • 13.
    What’s the attention-getter,What’sthe attention-getter, link, and thesis?link, and thesis? Attention-getter: “Girls, for just $10 you can learn what makes a guy fall in love. You see, it’s all part of the ‘Get Him System’ system published in Secrets of Kissing. And as the ad says, ‘no longer will you have to rely on old-fashioned advice.’” This was taken from an actual ad found in the February issue of Young Miss Magazine. Link: Today, I am going to talk to this very issue. But it is my opinion that can still use some “old fashioned” advice. According to William Bennett, former Secretary of Education and noted author, “Increasingly, Americans are lacking a solid grounding in traditional values.” Thesis: It is my job today to persuade you that we all could benefit from taking a step back.”
  • 14.
    What follows thethesisWhat follows the thesis statement?statement?
  • 15.
    The preview followstheThe preview follows the thesis statement.thesis statement. One or two sentences that give the audience an overview of the major points All the points will then be examined in detail in the body
  • 16.
    A preview statementApreview statement exampleexample “Today I am going to show you why alcohol abuse is so dangerous. We first look at the physical damage done by alcohol, followed by its mental effects, and then the effects on society.”
  • 17.
    The BodyThe Body Thisis the heart, the brain, the nerve center of the speech.
  • 18.
    What is themap to theWhat is the map to the speech?speech?
  • 19.
    The map istheThe map is the OUTLINEOUTLINE  Purpose Statement at the top  You follow process of subordination  Three main headings  Each is followed by supporting information  Can go deeper and give details Purpose Statement Section Pt. 1 Pt. 2 Pt. 3
  • 20.
    Sample OutlineSample Outline posestatement: The purpose of this speech is to inform the audience of the positive role that laughter can play in lives I. Introduction A. Have you ever head the sayings, “Let a smile be your umbrella” and “Laugh and the world laughs with you?” Both of these sayings show how a positive attitude and laughter can work to your advantage. B. Laughter can do more than provide a pleasant smile. C. I would like to discuss the various areas in your lives where laughter can play a significantly positive role. 1. Laughter can help you on the job. 2. Laughter can help you with family and friends. 3. Laughter can help your health II. Body A. Laughter can help you on the job. 1. Can make you a more productive worker 2. Can cut down on absenteeism B. Laughter and help you with family and friends 1. Northwestern University study says family disputes defused by jokes 2. People are drawn to laughter 3. Psychological study says those who laugh thought of as leaders C. Laughter has health benefits 1. Changes attitude and helps overcome serious illness 2. Saves energy 3. Keeps vocal cords loose so fewer colds III. Conclusion A. Thus, laughter can make change your life.
  • 21.
    Use Transitional WordsUseTransitional Words To add ideas Beyond that, beside, moreover, next, finally To illustrate For example, in other words, as proof, for instance To yield a point Granted, of course, since this is so, although true To show contrast Conversely, however, nevertheless, on the other hand To emphasize a point Above all, indeed, more important, in fact To compare At the same time, likewise, similarly To show order First, second, next, finally, in conclusion, last To repeat or restate In other words, that is to say, in short To summarize For these reasons, in conclusion, all in all, overall To show space relationships Close by, nearby, next to, in front of, behind To show time relationships Before, afterward, formerly, later, meanwhile,, ultimately, presently, previously, subsequently
  • 22.
    Organizational PatternsOrganizational Patterns Chronological  Climactic  Spatial  Cause-Effect  Problem- Solution In Sequence Story Process History In Rank Facts Order Examples Reasons By Origin Geography or source Departments Tour From event Research to outcome Case Studies From problem Policies to action steps Attitudes Awareness
  • 23.
    What is inthe conclusion?What is in the conclusion?
  • 24.
    The ConclusionThe Conclusion Restatethe Thesis Summarize points Clincher - which should tie back to the attention getter
  • 25.
    The ClincherThe Clincher Mustfit the mood of speech Must make sense Must bring finality
  • 26.
    Identify the threeparts ofIdentify the three parts of the Conclusionthe Conclusion “So, I hope by now you can see that laughter is no joking matter. It can make you a more productive and effective worker, a more sensitive friend and family member, and even a healthier person. So let’s establish and maintain a ‘laughing attitude.’ It costs nothing. Therefore, the words you heard at the beginning of my speech, “Let a smile be your umbrella,” might be sound advice. Go ahead and laugh. Hopefully the world will laugh with you.”
  • 27.
    Identify the threeparts ofIdentify the three parts of the Conclusionthe Conclusion Restated Thesis: So, I hope by now you can see that laughter is no joking matter. Summary of main points: It can make you a more productive and effective worker, a more sensitive friend and family member, and even a healthier person. Clincher: So let’s establish and maintain a ‘laughing attitude.’ It costs nothing. Therefore, the words you heard at the beginning of my speech, “Let a smile be your umbrella,” might be sound advice. Go ahead and laugh. Hopefully the world will laugh with you.”
  • 28.
    Recalling the FactsRecallingthe Facts  What does the introduction consist of?  Why must the body of the speech be clearly organized?  What is subordination and why is it important?  What is the most critical sentence in a speech?  Why are transitions important?  How do you decide which organizational pattern is the best to use?  What does the conclusion consist of?Look Back on Page 312 of textbook
  • 29.
    VocabularyVocabulary  introduction  quotation narrative  link  thesis statement  preview statement  body  outline  purpose statement  subordination  main heading  supporting materials  transition  chronological pattern  climactic pattern  spatial pattern  cause-effect pattern  problem-solution pattern List on Page 285 of textbook