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Essay 3: Is College the Best Option?
Assignment:
The authors of the readings/videos (listed below) from Unit 3 explore whether college is the best option for everyone. For Essay 3, you will choose a topic from one (or more) of these readings/videos that you would like to explore in depth. Next, you will extensively research your topic. During this process, you should consider your opinions about your topic and begin to formulate a thesis for your final paper. Your thesis must be argumentative. You will not inform the reader about the topic; you will persuade the reader.
In your essay, you will persuade the reader to accept the argument set forth in your thesis using a combination of your own opinions and the opinions of third parties (i.e., by incorporating secondary sources), which is discussed in more detail below.
Requirements:
1. Length: 1,200-1,500 words (which is longer than the previous essays)
2. Your essay must relate to the topics presented in the readings for Unit 3: Is College the Best Option?
3. Your thesis must be argumentative (i.e., persuasive).
4. You must include at least four scholarly sources.
5. You must include at least onequote from each of your four sources.
6. You must use only articles from peer-reviewed scholarly journals for this essay. Failing to use scholarly sources will result in a 10-point deduction for each non-scholarly source. For example, if you include two non-scholarly sources in your essay, there will be a 20-point deduction. Therefore, it is crucial that you use scholarly sources.
Note: If you are using Google to locate sources, then it is highly unlikely that you are choosing scholarly articles. Your safest option is to use the library databases (e.g., ProQuest, JStor, and Academic OneFile) to find sources. If you do not know how to access/use the library databases, please see the "Library Research Tutorials" section in Content. If you do not know how to distinguish scholarly journals from popular periodicals, please see the "Evaluating Research Sources" module under Content. In addition, you will want to review the Vanderbilt University Video Tutorial about Scholarly vs. Non-Scholarly Sources, which is posted under Content.
7. You must include a Works Cited page that conforms to TheMLA Handbook, 8th edition citation style.
8. You must include correct MLA parenthetical/in-text citations.
9. You must properly introduce, present, and cite all direct quotes.
10. Your tone should be formal.
· Avoid first person pronouns (i.e., I, me, my, we, us)
· Avoid second person (i.e., you, your) pronouns.
· Avoid contractions (i.e., isn’t, doesn’t, won’t, etc.)
· Avoid slang.
· Avoid clichés.
· Use correct grammar, spelling, and punctuation.
· State your opinions as facts. Phrases like the following weaken your argument:
· In my research, I found that . . .
· In this essay, I will discuss . . .
· I believe that . . .
Deductions:
As with all assignments in this course, your submissions ...
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Summary Exercise Instructions
For this assignment only, there is no draft option. You should simply submit your required final copy whenever you are ready. This assignment is designed to inform your larger research project.
Additional helpful resources:
Summary Exercise Rubric | Summary Exercise Sample 1 | Summary Exercise Sample 2
Option #1: Investigate and Interview
You have already chosen a topic and created a working thesis statement for your research paper topic. Find a non-profit organization (e.g., one that provides literacy instruction, a support group for cancer patients, a shelter that provides refuge for battered women) in your city that is connected to your topic. For example, if you are researching services for blind people, you might interview someone at the National Federation of the Blind.
Explain your assignment and request an interview with a staff member who is considered an expert in the field. Create 10 to 20 questions related to your thesis statement to ask the interviewee. For the writing assignment (Note that you should be conducting this interview yourself. You should not be summarizing an interview that someone else conducted):
· Create an introduction that includes the interviewee’s background. What is his/ her name? What is his/her position? How long has your interviewee worked at this organization, and what is his/her role there? These are just some of the questions that you can ask to help you build your introductory paragraph.
· Summarize the interviewee's responses in approximately three cohesive body paragraphs.
· Finish with a concluding paragraph that explains how this interview helped you better understand your chosen research paper topic.
Option #2: Getting What you Need from Periodicals
Locate credible sources for your chosen topic of the research paper project. Find at least five relevant sources from periodicals (Please do not use basic informative website such as ehow or Wikipedia. The source you choose will ideally be an academic or research-based article). From the sources that you find, choose one to summarize. The source you choose should be a credible periodical and not merely a random website. Also keep in mind that your chosen source should be research-based and non-fiction. For example, you should not summarize a short story for this assignment. Choose a source such as a journal article, an essay in an anthology, a magazine article, or a newspaper article. For this option, you might use this as a guideline for crafting your thesis statement: John Smith’s book The Guiding Light explained (add first paragraph focus), (add second paragraph focus), and (add third paragraph focus).
Here are some possible places to search for good sources:
· Internet Public Library: http://www.ipl.org/
· Google Scholar: http://scholar.google.com/ (note that this is different from regular Google)
· Microsoft Academic Search: http://academic.research.microsoft.com/
· Cornell University’s arXiv (open access sou ...
2. 1. Is an important skill
2. Includes the skills of rephrasing or restating
ideas
3. Needs one to use different words (often
synonyms) but at the same time retain the
ORIGINAL meaning of the sentence or text.
Always about the same length as the
original
May sometimes be longer.
3. 1. Read all the ideas until you FULLY
understand it.
2. Take note of IMPORTANT words.
3. Set the original aside, and write your
paraphrase on a note card.
4. Check your rendition with the original to
make sure that your version accurately
expresses ALL the essential information in a
new form.
4. Include minor points/ repetitions/
unnecessary examples/ quotations/ idioms/
illustrations.
OWN opinion
Change technical terms
Change the MEANING of the ORIGINAL text.
5. 1. Rephrase EACH Sentence, one after another.
2. Simplify and combine sentences.
3. Simplify the sentence structure :
From active to passive
From direct to reported speech
4. Change the words to their synonyms.
5. Change parts of speech
6. Change conjunctions
6. Example :
It is inherent in human nature to express
oneself.
It is natural for people to express themselves.
7. Example :
Facebook(S) makes one(O) more accessible.
One is more accessible with Facebook.
8. Example :
Kids belonging to the active-aggressive
category are extremely impulsive.
Extreme impulsivity is characteristic of
children categorized as active-aggressive.
9. Example :
Although the lecturer has repeated the topic
several times, the students still find it difficult to
understand the concept.
The students still find it hard to grasp the idea even
though their lecturer has explained it a few times.
10. Approximately 30,000 students may be
assisted by the proposed “free lunch”
program.
About 30,000 students may be helped/ aided/
benefited/ supported by the suggested/
recommended/planned free lunch
programme.
11. With the development of flash memory cards, the
market for portable music players jumped sharply.
With the improvement/ progress/ expansion/ increase/
of flash memory cards, the demand/ sales of portable
music players soared/ increased drastically
Although the coach’s strategy was a little dangerous,
the team was successful.
Even though the coach’s plan was quite risky, the
team was successful.
12. The expenditure needed to combat climate
change will require changes to the federal
government’s budget.
The expenses/ cost/ money needed to fight
against climate change will require changes
to the federal government’s financial plan.
13. Therefore, the effect was an increase in
student examination results.
Hence, the consequence/ result was an
increase in students’ test scores/
performance.
In addition, a strong typhoon is expected to
batter the coast over the next few days.
Moreover, a strong hurricane is expected to
hit/ pummel the coast over the next few days
14. The engineer must judge how much dynamite to
use according to the volume of material to be
removed from the tunnel.
The engineer must evaluate/ review how much
dynamite to use depending on the amount of
material to be removed from the tunnel.
Two of the students were expelled for violating
the school’s “no fighting” policy.
Two of the students were terminated for going
against/ breaking the school’s no fighting rules
and regulation.
15. My mother washes the floor every Saturday.
The policewoman is delivering the food to an
orphanage.
That tall man in the corner mailed our
package.
The professor was helping a student when
the bell sounded.
Millions of tourists have visited the Eiffel
Tower.
16. Long and wordy: You have to give us your
decision by tomorrow.
Better: You have to decide by tomorrow.
Long and wordy: Researchers conducted an
investigation into the problem.
Better: Researchers investigated the
problem.
17. It is not enough just to change a FEW words.
The entire sentence MUST be rewritten in:
a) As many new words as possible
b) In a whole new structure/ way of writing,
changing the way it is expressed yet
retaining/ keeping the ORIGINAL IDEAS ^^
18. Students frequently overuse direct quotation in taking
notes, and as a result they overuse quotations in the final
[research] paper. Probably only about 10% of your final
manuscript should appear as directly quoted matter.
Therefore, you should strive to limit the amount of exact
transcribing of source materials while taking notes.
BAD…
Students often use too many direct quotations when they take
notes, resulting in too many of them in the final research paper. In
fact, probably only about 10% of the final copy should consist of
directly quoted material. So it is important to limit the amount of
source material copied while taking notes. (some words are
changed, YET many are the same and the structure is exactly the
same)
19. In research papers students often quote
excessively, failing to keep quoted material
down to a desirable level. Since the problem
usually originates during note taking, it is
essential to minimize the material recorded
verbatim (Lester 46-47).
20. Parents choose to marry off their daughters for a
number of reasons. Poor families may regard a young
girl as an economic burden and her marriage as a
necessary survival strategy for her family. They may
think that child marriage offers protection to their
daughter from the dangers of sexual assault, or more
generally, offers the care of a male guardian. Child
marriage may also be seen as a strategy to avoid girls
from becoming pregnant outside marriage.
21. There are several factors that could cause poverty
stricken parents to marry their daughter off at an
early age. First, they might view their daughters as
financial burdens and even strategize for the
marriage to bring some financial gain for the
family. However some hope that child marriages
can protect their daughters from sexual assaults as
they will be under the supervision of a husband.
Lastly, some feel that child marriages are effective
in curbing pregnancies out of wedlock.
22. An extremely important skill to possess
Is a concise statement of the most important
information in a text.
It should describe ONLY most of the main
ideas. Details and repeated information
should be omitted.
23. The skills needed include :
1. Identifying relevant points
2. Distinguishing main ideas
3. Distinguishing supporting details
4. Paraphrasing.
24. 1. Find the most important information that tells what
the paragraph or group of paragraphs is about. Write
this into a topic sentence.
2. Find ALL main ideas and important supporting
details that support your topic sentence and show
how they are related.
3. Combine several main ideas into a single sentence.
4. Substitute a general term for lists of items or events.
5. Do not include trivial information or unimportant
details.
6. Do not repeat information.
25. The main ideas
The main supporting details.
• It does not contain :
• Specific details
• Minor points
• Examples
26. • Includes main points
• Includes supporting details
• Is well organized
• Is logical
• Should not include personal opinion
27. Managing time is as much about dropping
worthless activities as adding new ones. The idea
is to weed out activities that deliver little reward.
One tool for purging your schedule is a "not-to-do"
list. On this list include the notorious time-wasters
in your life tasks that are just as well left undone.
Examples are activities motivated only by
obligation, such as compulsively keeping up with
the latest fashion or television shows. Decide right
now to eliminate activities with a low payoff. When
you add a new activity to your schedule, consider
dropping a current one.
Summarized version :
To manage time more effectively, we need to weed out unimportant
activities (time wasters) by having a list of not to do activities as well
as dropping unbeneficial ones for better ones.
28. 1. Make sure you have an introductory statement/ topic
sentence.
2. Use transitional words to merge main points and
supporting details.
3. Signpost your main ideas, for ex: first,…then,…finally…
4. Write in the present tense unless you are summarising a
story (narrative).
5. Keep to the word limit. The tolerance level in terms of
word limit would be approximately 120 words.
6. Include the total number of words at the end of your
summary.
29. After you have located ALL the MAIN IDEAS and their
most important supporting details:
SET THEM ASIDE
AND
PARAPHRASE
a summary is not a copy and paste or merely a
shorter version of the original text…it is a
compact and accurate version of the most
crucial information of the text that you have
rewritten in your own words.