FRONT COVER FEEDBACK

1. Feedback
from peers.
FRONT COVER
MAGAZINE

2. GOOD FEEDBACK
 Nice Layout
 Good Information
 Good use of photoshop
 Dominant image stands out
 Masthead is bold and stands out
 Good way to layout sel l l ines
 Good use of editing
 Nice placement of barcode and essential information
 Looks good with image over masthead
 Looks real istic
 Masthead is wel l placed

3. WHAT TO IMPROVE…
 Less white space
 More sub images
 Sel l l ine text more colour ful
 Make pul l quote larger
 Add some puf f

4. MY REFLECTION
 I am real ly happy with the feedback I got of f my peers. I have
taken into consideration of what they said to improve and I
agree that my pul l quote needs to be larger as it is quite
di f ficult to read/spot. Fur thermore, I wi l l be adding a puf f to
improve my magazine and include adver tisement.
 Some people said I should decrease the white space that
there is and add sub images. Although I am grateful for their
ideas, I wi l l not be using these improvements as with my type
of magazine, they only have one image (which is the dominant
image) and does overload the front cover with other images.
Moreover, the magazine is not packed with loads of colour
etc. so white space is included.