The document describes changes made to improve the layout and readability of various design elements in a magazine. The artist's name was enlarged and separated from information below to stand out more. A puff (circular graphic) was enlarged and text within spread out for better readability. Sub headlines/sell lines were adjusted to avoid text touching lines and improve readability by widening the space between lines and adjusting text placement. The changes aimed to improve visual balance and ensure important information was easily readable.

1. With the main sell line, I realised
that the name of my artist was too
small and the information on the
article was too large. I decided to
change this, I enlarged the writing
of the artists name so it would
stand out, I then left a space and
decreased the size of the article
information. I think this looks
much better as the name of the
artist stands out more and you
instantly read that and look at the
image.
With the puff, I found that the circle was too small
and the writing looked too cramped within in. I
decided to enlarge the circle and then spread out
the text. Furthermore, I made the text ‘WIN’ stand
out more by enlarging the text and keeping it
separate from the rest. I did this as the splash of
colour and size attracts the readers attention.
With the sub headlines/sell lines I realised
that the writing was to large with the lines
on either side, and some of the text were
slightly touching the line. I decided to
change this as it could be difficult for some
viewers to read and put them off my
magazine. I pulled my writing further up
the page so that the ‘/ED SHEERAN’ wasn’t
covered by the guitar. Furthermore, I
widened the space between the two black
lines so that the text fit better.