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WHAT ASPECTS OF MY WORK COULD BE IMPROVED AND WHY?
Evaluating my front cover 
 The first thing that I would improve on my front cover is the coverlines. The typeface I 
chose is too small and the colour is too bright for it to be properly seen. If I had the 
chance to do it again I would change them to a bolder font and make them a brighter, 
easier to see colour. 
 Another thing that I would change is the background colour. I would have made it an 
entirely white background so the font and main image stood out more, this would 
have made it look more professional and appealing to the audience. This use of white 
space would have drawn attention to the main image and made the colours stand out 
more without making my front cover look cluttered. 
 Overall my front cover is far too basic and needs a lot of improvement, the coverlines 
aren’t parallel with each other and there is a different amount on each side of the 
cover. I would add a buzzword and maybe some social media logos as these are both 
media devices you would expect to find on a magazine cover.
Evaluating my contents page 
 As with my front cover, my contents page is too basic and is lacking certain media 
devices that are expected of a contents page, because of this it is in need of a lot of 
improvement. 
 It does not look at all professional but more like something that is expected from 
someone that has just learned to use a computer. The only redeemable aspect is the 
fact that the colours all compliment each other. 
 One of the main improvements I would make would be to the image, I would have 
removed the background and placed more folios above the image, in addition I would 
have added a email address, social media URLs and chosen font that doesn’t make my 
contents page look childish and disorganised. 
 I would also alter the layout

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College magazine evaluation question 4

  • 1. College Magazine Evaluation WHAT ASPECTS OF MY WORK COULD BE IMPROVED AND WHY?
  • 2. Evaluating my front cover  The first thing that I would improve on my front cover is the coverlines. The typeface I chose is too small and the colour is too bright for it to be properly seen. If I had the chance to do it again I would change them to a bolder font and make them a brighter, easier to see colour.  Another thing that I would change is the background colour. I would have made it an entirely white background so the font and main image stood out more, this would have made it look more professional and appealing to the audience. This use of white space would have drawn attention to the main image and made the colours stand out more without making my front cover look cluttered.  Overall my front cover is far too basic and needs a lot of improvement, the coverlines aren’t parallel with each other and there is a different amount on each side of the cover. I would add a buzzword and maybe some social media logos as these are both media devices you would expect to find on a magazine cover.
  • 3. Evaluating my contents page  As with my front cover, my contents page is too basic and is lacking certain media devices that are expected of a contents page, because of this it is in need of a lot of improvement.  It does not look at all professional but more like something that is expected from someone that has just learned to use a computer. The only redeemable aspect is the fact that the colours all compliment each other.  One of the main improvements I would make would be to the image, I would have removed the background and placed more folios above the image, in addition I would have added a email address, social media URLs and chosen font that doesn’t make my contents page look childish and disorganised.  I would also alter the layout