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DIGIPAK DRAFT 2 FEEDBACK
TARGET AUDIENCE
MEMBER
WHAT WENT WELL? EVEN BETTER IF?
JAANVI
The font colour on the front
cover is eye-catching
All the font was the same
style and colour
TRUSHALI The photos look professional
The pictures weren’t all the
same on the brick wall
POOJA
Like how the model is
“looking” at the CD
The CD part looks plain
maybe add some colour
there
AARON
There is not too much going
on
Add colour as a whole
VERSHA
The layout as a whole works
well
The font was all the same
colour/style
PRIYA
The back with the songs is
quite simple and nice
The pictures were different
on each side
ROSHAN
The font is interesting as it
has those details of lines
Not all the pictures were on
a brick wall
GUILIO
The simplicity of it as a whole
is nice
Some pictures are blurry and
out of focus
MARISA
The font colour and the font
itself is quite nice and
appealing
The wall is overpowering on
same pictures and you can’t
see the writing on it properly
SERENA
The thank you is on a blank
wall looks good
All the font was the same in
colour
ALBUM POSTER DRAFT 2 FEEDBACK
TARGET AUDIENCE
MEMBER
WHAT WENT WELL? EVEN BETTER IF?
JAANVI
The wall is out of focus and
the model is highlighted
The model is out of focus a
bit
TRUSHALI
The text at the bottom is
more visible
The bottom panel looks out
of the ordinary and weird
POOJA
The font is nice and links to
the digipak and music video
Could change the image as it
is a bit out of focus
AARON
The record company is
mentioned/seen
There needs to be more
colour to make it more
attracting
VERSHA
The artist is highlighted and
there’s not any unnecessary
information
The bottom panel looks out
of place and doesn’t fit
PRIYA
Emphasise is put on the
model not the wall
The image is out of focus a
bit – maybe use another
image
ROSHAN
The placement of the writing
works
Doesn’t look as professional
as it could so maybe add
more colour
GUILIO
The text works well and is
visible
Change the image and add
colour
MARISA
All the writing is visible and
clear
There needs to be more
emphasise on the bottom
text
SERENA
There is not too much
overpowering information
The image is out of focus and
the poster needs more
colour
Ancillary Draft 2 feedback

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Ancillary Draft 2 feedback

  • 1. DIGIPAK DRAFT 2 FEEDBACK TARGET AUDIENCE MEMBER WHAT WENT WELL? EVEN BETTER IF? JAANVI The font colour on the front cover is eye-catching All the font was the same style and colour TRUSHALI The photos look professional The pictures weren’t all the same on the brick wall POOJA Like how the model is “looking” at the CD The CD part looks plain maybe add some colour there AARON There is not too much going on Add colour as a whole VERSHA The layout as a whole works well The font was all the same colour/style PRIYA The back with the songs is quite simple and nice The pictures were different on each side ROSHAN The font is interesting as it has those details of lines Not all the pictures were on a brick wall GUILIO The simplicity of it as a whole is nice Some pictures are blurry and out of focus MARISA The font colour and the font itself is quite nice and appealing The wall is overpowering on same pictures and you can’t see the writing on it properly SERENA The thank you is on a blank wall looks good All the font was the same in colour
  • 2. ALBUM POSTER DRAFT 2 FEEDBACK TARGET AUDIENCE MEMBER WHAT WENT WELL? EVEN BETTER IF? JAANVI The wall is out of focus and the model is highlighted The model is out of focus a bit TRUSHALI The text at the bottom is more visible The bottom panel looks out of the ordinary and weird POOJA The font is nice and links to the digipak and music video Could change the image as it is a bit out of focus AARON The record company is mentioned/seen There needs to be more colour to make it more attracting VERSHA The artist is highlighted and there’s not any unnecessary information The bottom panel looks out of place and doesn’t fit PRIYA Emphasise is put on the model not the wall The image is out of focus a bit – maybe use another image ROSHAN The placement of the writing works Doesn’t look as professional as it could so maybe add more colour GUILIO The text works well and is visible Change the image and add colour MARISA All the writing is visible and clear There needs to be more emphasise on the bottom text SERENA There is not too much overpowering information The image is out of focus and the poster needs more colour