Feedback

1. FMP Evaluation
Jack Bevens

2. Production Process Evaluation

3. Research
• Strengths
• I researched the other films to show they are similar to my film.
• I found some images from Google.
• Weaknesses
• My film can not copy exactly the other films.
• I must create my own film which is different from the other films.

4. Planning
• Strengths
• My idea is better and more different than the other films.
• My storyline helps me make sense of the film.
• I used a script to help my actors learn their lines.
• Weaknesses
• Rooms are difficult to book.
• Sometimes my plan must be changed because of room issues.

5. Time Management
• Strengths
• My film was completed in only one day.
• Luckily all my actors were available and on time. There were no delays in
filming.
• Weaknesses
• Nothing, my time management was under control.
• I need to have more scripts available so my actors can learn their lines.

6. Technical Qualities
• Strengths
• I used editor from Premier, which was easy to learn.
• I know how to use a camera.
• I know how to write a script.
• Weaknesses
• I need to learn more about Premier.
• Chantelle showed me a professional script layout.

7. Aesthetic Qualities
• Strengths
• My film looks really good.
• The editing is perfect.
• My script look more professional, like a real script.
Weaknesses
• I need more professional shots.
• I need to give my actors the script before the film starts shooting.

8. Audience Appeal
• Strengths
• I want the audience to feedback about my film; did it match their expectations?
• I made the film based on what my audience said they wanted.
• I want the audience to really want to see my film.
• Weaknesses
• I disagreed with the audience’s feedback. I need to learn from this.
• I want made my own film without the audience’s feedback. However this would
not be a good idea because if the audience does not like my work they will not
go to see it.

9. Peer
Feedback

10. Feedback 1
• What did you like about the product?
– It informs viewers about not leaving out people
who have trouble communicating.
• What improvements could have been made
to the product?
• Lack of subtitles.

11. Feedback 2
• What did you like about the product?
– I liked the meaning behind it and the fact it
includes people trying to make friends with him.
• What improvements could have been made
to the product?
– There could be subtitles for the parts where
people talk.

12. Feedback 3
• What did you like about the product?
– I like the concept of how the simplicity of some
shots tell the story without the use of audio or
subtitles.
• What improvements could have been made
to the product?
– In parts the cuts between scenes aren’t
completely seamless and appear a little jumpy.

13. Peer Feedback Summary
• What do you agree with from your peer
feedback?
• Adding subtitle.
• Adding audio. (for hearing)
• What do you disagree with from your peer
feedback?
• No, I didn’t disagree anything.

14. Peer Feedback Summary
• I will add subtitles because some hearing not understand
BSL languages and some people will difficult to hear on
background.
• I will add audio for hearing people want to hear that film
so I might add some music as well.