The student conducted research on stories to find one to adapt for an audio book recording. Their research provided ideas for the story and format but lacked detail. Planning helped determine using an audio book format with sound effects. Time management allowed completing the project on time, but more time could have improved editing and shortening. Feedback noted the fitting use of sound effects and music but a slow start. The student agrees the start was slow and actor occasionally misread lines, and would rerecord lines and shorten the beginning if repeating the project.

1. FMP Evaluation
Jack Garner

2. Production Process Evaluation

3. Research
• The strengths of my research was that it helped as It gave me an idea of
what story I wanted to use for my recording and how I wanted it to be
read. It helped my product because they gave me an idea of how other
stories are done. The weaknesses of my research is that I didn’t get much
information about the stories I was researching I could have improved by
spending more time on the research getting more could have made my
final product better by making it less basic.

4. Planning
• The strengths of my planning was that it helped me get my ideas for what I
wanted to create for my project I went through other ideas such as making
my story a clip for a cutscene in a video game, a radio show story or an
audio book in the end I decided to go with the audio book. Planning
helped my product to become better as I had a plan of what to do and
what I wanted to work on such as what sound effects i wanted, who I
wanted to record my story and what story I was going to use

5. Time Management
• I managed my time well with this project I I managed to get this done in
time I think If I had more time to work on my audio editing it would have
turned out better. I would have added some more sound effects in and
would have tried to make it shorter.

6. Technical Qualities
• In my editing I have backing music to fit with
the story just like other stories of the same
genre most stories also have sound effects
similar to mine

7. Aural Qualities
• I think it sounds good for the most part. It
wasn’t as creative because it was a pre
existing script that was censored to remove
some swearing. I would improve the script by
writing a new script and re record some lines

8. Audience Appeal
It appeals more towards the end as that’s when the story picks up and has
sound effects added instead of just music such as walking in the snow, a
tree falling and wind giving it an ominous atmosphere

9. Peer
Feedback

10. Feedback 1
• What did you like about the product?
• I liked the use of sound effects I think they
were in at the perfect times I also think the
backing music fit with the story's tone
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– The beginning was a little boring because it went
on for a while

11. Feedback 2
• What did you like about the product?
– I liked the music in the background because it
made it have an atmosphere.
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
• It was a bit slow to start

12. Feedback 3
• What did you like about the product?
– I liked the voice actor because his voice fit the
theme
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– Even though I liked the voice actor he messed up a
little at times

13. Peer Feedback Summary
• What do you agree with from your peer
feedback? I agree that the actor was a good fit
for the role I also agree that the start was slow
• What do you disagree with from your peer
feedback?
• I don’t disagree with anything that was said in
my feedback

14. Peer Feedback Summary
If I was going to change anything I would get my actor to re record
some lines because he did mess up a few times another thing I
would change would be the beginning I would try to make it
shorter