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Jack Bevens
Production Process Evaluation
Research
• Strengths
• I research it from the Google to find out which films are
similar to my short film.
• I picked some movies to match to my short films.
• Also I research some films to help me to create new idea in
my film.
• Weaknesses
• I cannot copy exactly same as others short films.
• I create my own short film which is more different others.
Planning
• Strengths
• My idea is better and more different than the other films.
• My storyline helps me make sense of the film.
• I used a script to help my actors learn their lines.
• Weaknesses
• Find difficult room to book.
• Create film without storylines.
Time Management
• Strengths
• My film was completed in 3 days
• There were no delays in filming.
• Weaknesses
• Some actors were unavailable.
• Some actors were replace.
Technical Qualities
• Strengths
• I used edited from Premier, which is easy to learn.
• I know how to use a camera.
• I know how to write a script.
• Weaknesses
• I need to learn some more about Premier.
• I need more professional shots.
Sign/Subtitled Qualities
• Strengths
• My film looks really amazing!
• My subtitles is more match with the images like subtitle is on when
person start talking.
• The editing is perfect.
• My script look more professional, like a real script.
• My subtitle looks really good.
• Weaknesses
• My subtitle colour is full white difficult to read it when background
are same as colour.
• Actors need more professional.
Audience Appeal
• Strengths
• I want the audience to feedback about my film
• I made the film based on what my audience said they
wanted.
• I want the audience to really want to see my film.
• Weaknesses
• I disagreed with the audience’s feedback. I need to learn
from this.
• I want made my own film without the audience’s feedback.
However this would not be a good idea because if the
audience does not like my work they will not go to see it.
Peer
Feedback
Feedback 1
• What did you like about the product?
• The video is edited well by using different camera angles.
• The shots are very well put together to make is seem like
a professional movie.
• What improvements could have been made
to the product?
• In the second scene you could change the colour of the
subtitles because they blend into the table in some shots.
Feedback 2
• What did you like about the product?
• I like the different angles and the way it has been edited
together.
• What improvements could have been made
to the product?
• The acting could be better scripted but as it was a
practice/trailer it gave way to improvement.
Feedback 3
• What did you like about the product?
• The film is very well edited and put together, the transitions
from each camera is very smooth and effective.
• What improvements could have been made
to the product?
• Some of the subtitles blend into the background making them
hard to read
• The actors also look awkward.
Peer Feedback Summary
• What do you agree with from your peer
feedback?
• Colour subtitles.
• Awkward love. (Teenagers natural!)
• More practise acting.
• What do you disagree with from your peer
feedback?
• No, I not disagree any.
Peer Feedback Summary
• They need more practice of acting and script.
• I will adding some colour on subtitles to make better
to read it from background.
• I need my subtitle bit slow because my subtitle goes
quick changes.

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7. evaluation

  • 3. Research • Strengths • I research it from the Google to find out which films are similar to my short film. • I picked some movies to match to my short films. • Also I research some films to help me to create new idea in my film. • Weaknesses • I cannot copy exactly same as others short films. • I create my own short film which is more different others.
  • 4. Planning • Strengths • My idea is better and more different than the other films. • My storyline helps me make sense of the film. • I used a script to help my actors learn their lines. • Weaknesses • Find difficult room to book. • Create film without storylines.
  • 5. Time Management • Strengths • My film was completed in 3 days • There were no delays in filming. • Weaknesses • Some actors were unavailable. • Some actors were replace.
  • 6. Technical Qualities • Strengths • I used edited from Premier, which is easy to learn. • I know how to use a camera. • I know how to write a script. • Weaknesses • I need to learn some more about Premier. • I need more professional shots.
  • 7. Sign/Subtitled Qualities • Strengths • My film looks really amazing! • My subtitles is more match with the images like subtitle is on when person start talking. • The editing is perfect. • My script look more professional, like a real script. • My subtitle looks really good. • Weaknesses • My subtitle colour is full white difficult to read it when background are same as colour. • Actors need more professional.
  • 8. Audience Appeal • Strengths • I want the audience to feedback about my film • I made the film based on what my audience said they wanted. • I want the audience to really want to see my film. • Weaknesses • I disagreed with the audience’s feedback. I need to learn from this. • I want made my own film without the audience’s feedback. However this would not be a good idea because if the audience does not like my work they will not go to see it.
  • 10. Feedback 1 • What did you like about the product? • The video is edited well by using different camera angles. • The shots are very well put together to make is seem like a professional movie. • What improvements could have been made to the product? • In the second scene you could change the colour of the subtitles because they blend into the table in some shots.
  • 11. Feedback 2 • What did you like about the product? • I like the different angles and the way it has been edited together. • What improvements could have been made to the product? • The acting could be better scripted but as it was a practice/trailer it gave way to improvement.
  • 12. Feedback 3 • What did you like about the product? • The film is very well edited and put together, the transitions from each camera is very smooth and effective. • What improvements could have been made to the product? • Some of the subtitles blend into the background making them hard to read • The actors also look awkward.
  • 13. Peer Feedback Summary • What do you agree with from your peer feedback? • Colour subtitles. • Awkward love. (Teenagers natural!) • More practise acting. • What do you disagree with from your peer feedback? • No, I not disagree any.
  • 14. Peer Feedback Summary • They need more practice of acting and script. • I will adding some colour on subtitles to make better to read it from background. • I need my subtitle bit slow because my subtitle goes quick changes.

Editor's Notes

  1. What were the strengths of your research? How did your research help your product? What were the weaknesses of your research? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  2. What were the strengths of your planning? How did your planning help your product? What were the weaknesses of your planning? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  3. Did you manage your time well? Did you complete your project on time or would your products have improved with additional time? What would you have done if you had more time to produce your work?
  4. Compare your work to similar existing products and discuss the similarities and differences
  5. Does your work communicate well? Was it creative? What aspects of your product’s signing/subtitling and lip reading do you like? What would you improve? How would you improve it? Discuss the strengths and weaknesses
  6. How have you appealed to your target audience? What specific bits of content would appeal to your target audience. Make reference to specific recordings, dialogue, music and sound effects
  7. What changes would you make to your product based upon your peer feedback and why?