1. The document describes changes made in the second draft of a magazine cover design. The text on the front cover was changed to be bolder and boxes were added around certain elements to make them stand out more. An arrow was also added. 2. In the second step, the author added the magazine's logo and the words "investigates the truth behind the popsicles" to the left side to fill the blank space. A barcode was also added to make it look more professional. 3. In the third step, a small pink rectangle was added to feature an article title. The draft is nearly finished but still needs more work.

2. 1st step of second draft !
• This is my very changed front page here I have changed all of the text
apart from the meet and greet and the win popsicles tickets. I changed
this because I thought the text was too delicate looking and not bold or
suitable for a front page. Changing the text has made the front cover look
very different I prefer this to how the first draft turned out. I have kept all
the size of the font the same. The text that I decided to keep the same I
thought I needed to come up with a way that made it look more bold so I
added pink boxes around them to make this happen. I also added a box
around the writing ‘singers latest heart break’ and then had to change the
colour to white and green so this could be seen. A box around the website
was also added. I also experimented with shaped including the circle
which I then added a green font ‘top 100 songs’ too. I have also added an
pink arrow saying ‘get Cheyenne's look’ this I like as it goes with the theme
of the popsicles. In the last draft I mentioned that the models board she is
holding was too messy and unprofessional looking as the writing was
uneven and patchy I changed this by using the paint brush and a black to
go over the existing writing. This effect is the most drastic change the front
cover. It creates a bold more appropriate looking picture.

4. 2nd step of second draft
• Here in this step I was concentrating on the left hand side of the
magazine as the area is left blank. So I was researching and found a
common existing magazine convention was they use their logo and
put investigates I like this idea so I decided to use it in my front
cover. I have then added the juice logo then the words ‘investigates
the truth behind the popsicles’ I have added this in the same font as
the rest of the front cover. Keeping the same green colour scheme.
The thing I would change for next time is the word investigates as I
think this goes too far over her face and covers to much of the
picture but it fill the space up nicely. I have also added a barcode to
the magazine on paint and copied and pasted it over to Photoshop
this was easier than trying to draw it. I think that by adding this
makes it more professional looking. I was also researching banner
methods that are added at the bottom of the magazine and found
that some of them add dots in to break up the words I like this as I
think it makes it easier to read so I added green ones in.

6. 3rd step of second draft
• This is my final second draft I have added a
little pink rectangle in order to put a feature of
the magazine into it I think the I might put
‘how Facebook effects fame’ . So far I think
this draft is nearly finished however there
needs to be a lot more work onto it.