This document contains draft contents pages and front covers for a student magazine. It discusses several revisions made to improve the designs. The front covers were initially too crowded with text overlapping the models. Separate contents pages were also needed for the male and female sections. The revised front covers have no text on the models and a more detailed drawing of their outfits.

2. My first attempt.
This is my front cover I created
for the male part as there was
going to be different sections. I
don’t like this and I think it is
crowded, I don’t want writing
going over my model.
This is my draft contents page
but I have realized I need
separate contents pages for the
female and male section of the
magazine.
This is my front cover for the
female part of my magazine,
again I feel this is to crowded
and I don’t want text going
over my model.

3. My second attempt.
This is my second go at my front
cover for the female section. I have
made sure there is no text on top of
my model and it doesn't’t look
crowded anymore. I have also
changed the masthead, although it
says the same ‘SF’ I want the font to
be different. I have tried to do a
detailed drawing of what I want my
model to wear but I have now
changed my idea and I would like
my model to be wearing a denim
jacket with a white oversized t-shirt
with some sort of image/quote on
the front.
I have redone my contents page because I realized I need two for the male
and female sections with them possibly being separate.The reason for the
magazine having separate sections is because my target audience said
they would prefer separate sections. The female contents page will have a
pink heading and the male contents page will have a blue heading. I have
put the links for students to follow Vale Media on instagram, twitter and
Facebook because the majority of students use social networking sites. On
the female contents page I have drawn a swirl border but I don’t like this
and I won’t use it.
This is my second attempt at
my front cover using a male
model as I was going to create
two separate sections in the
magazine. it doesn’t look
crowded anymore, I have
drawn a more detailed view of
how I want my male model to
look, he must have gel in his
hair and wear a check shirt. I
am going to stick with this
idea because i think it will
work well on a white/black
background.