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FMP Evaluation
Luke young
Production Process Evaluation
Research
• The strengths of the research for my magazine is that it helped me decide
on what magazine I could do for my magazine between xbox ps4 and pc
and I decided to do xbox because it’s the console I like the best out of
them all
• another strengths is that I also knew about xbox so it was easier to write
about and I also knew what to write like the new games what are coming
out and what they are about.
• The weakness would be that If I already knew xbox better then the others
it could be a weakness that I didn’t do the others and I could learn new
things
Planning
• The strengths for my planning is that when I planned I would have had a
better idea for the magazine and what to for the cover and the double
page spread.
• Another strength for the planning is that I already knew a lot about Xbox
so the main thing I had to know about is the cover of a magazine and how
to lay it out also with the double page spread another thing I had to know
is the dates of games and the new things in the games what wasn’t in the
old games.
• A weakness for the planning is that you cant change it after you have
made the mind map and the mood boards unless you want to do it again
and another is that if you gather images they will be very similar so you
cant very what you want to do e.g. football besides players or teams
Time Management
• I managed my time well as I finished my magazine within the time limit
and I could have done more but I wanted to improve my work to be better
then having more work but less detailed
• I did not rush my work because of the time and I checked my work
multiple times to make sure that it was good and had nothing wrong with
it and when I finished my work I wanted to check if there was anything
wrong with the work like images sizes or font size and the font to see if it
was out of place in anyway
Technical Qualities
I have made my magazine similar to the magazine on the right. The similar things are the
games at the bottom the big game in the middle and then the Xbox title but I have made
my own title fir my magazine
I have added a giveaway to make the magazine feel more like more of a magazine and the
colours are similar because both of the magazines are used for xbox so its sort of that
green black and white feel.
Aesthetic Qualities
I think my work looks ok because I went for the Xbox theme. I also think is was creative with the
double page spread I made the style of of the old Xbox home screen and I thought that It would
look good for the double page spread
The things that I would improve is the detail on the double page spread because I think it looks
quite plain and it could have more colour in it to make It look more interesting and stand out
more.
The strengths is that with the magazine covers and spread is that I already had an idea for what to
do couse I had the idea for the double page spread and the old back ground the only idea what I
didn't not have is he cover for the magazine so I had to have a look online for other ones to get a
idea
Audience Appeal
I have appealed to my target audience been
male and female with the colour scheme
because I chose the colours bases off Xbox and
the colours for them is black white and green
I have made the magazine for the
middle class so it wont be too
expensive £4.99 a month and that also
matches my target audience
Peer
Feedback
Feedback 1
• What did you like about the product?
– I liked the colours on the magazine as they make the
magazine stand out. I also like the pictures used on
the magazine as it clearly shows the audience it is a
gaming magazine.
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
• You could of made the font on the cover stand
out more by putting a stroke around it.
Feedback 2
• What did you like about the product?
I like the the colours of the posters and the amount of
content put into one.
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
You could have improved your work thorough merging
images and changing the fonts of the up coming games
Feedback 3
• What did you like about the product?
– The cover looks very realistic. I can imagine It
being an actual gaming magazine.
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– You could move the barcode or make it smaller, I
think the placement is really strange.
Peer Feedback Summary
• What do you agree with from your peer
feedback?
– I agree that I should of put a stroke on the
magazine title because then I could of
• What do you disagree with from your peer
feedback?
– I disagree with the people who said to join the
double page spread together because I based it
off the old xbox one home.
Peer Feedback Summary
I would make the the background for the double page spread better then
just a solid colour then black maybe last years most popular game or
something else what also stands out.

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  • 3. Research • The strengths of the research for my magazine is that it helped me decide on what magazine I could do for my magazine between xbox ps4 and pc and I decided to do xbox because it’s the console I like the best out of them all • another strengths is that I also knew about xbox so it was easier to write about and I also knew what to write like the new games what are coming out and what they are about. • The weakness would be that If I already knew xbox better then the others it could be a weakness that I didn’t do the others and I could learn new things
  • 4. Planning • The strengths for my planning is that when I planned I would have had a better idea for the magazine and what to for the cover and the double page spread. • Another strength for the planning is that I already knew a lot about Xbox so the main thing I had to know about is the cover of a magazine and how to lay it out also with the double page spread another thing I had to know is the dates of games and the new things in the games what wasn’t in the old games. • A weakness for the planning is that you cant change it after you have made the mind map and the mood boards unless you want to do it again and another is that if you gather images they will be very similar so you cant very what you want to do e.g. football besides players or teams
  • 5. Time Management • I managed my time well as I finished my magazine within the time limit and I could have done more but I wanted to improve my work to be better then having more work but less detailed • I did not rush my work because of the time and I checked my work multiple times to make sure that it was good and had nothing wrong with it and when I finished my work I wanted to check if there was anything wrong with the work like images sizes or font size and the font to see if it was out of place in anyway
  • 6. Technical Qualities I have made my magazine similar to the magazine on the right. The similar things are the games at the bottom the big game in the middle and then the Xbox title but I have made my own title fir my magazine I have added a giveaway to make the magazine feel more like more of a magazine and the colours are similar because both of the magazines are used for xbox so its sort of that green black and white feel.
  • 7. Aesthetic Qualities I think my work looks ok because I went for the Xbox theme. I also think is was creative with the double page spread I made the style of of the old Xbox home screen and I thought that It would look good for the double page spread The things that I would improve is the detail on the double page spread because I think it looks quite plain and it could have more colour in it to make It look more interesting and stand out more. The strengths is that with the magazine covers and spread is that I already had an idea for what to do couse I had the idea for the double page spread and the old back ground the only idea what I didn't not have is he cover for the magazine so I had to have a look online for other ones to get a idea
  • 8. Audience Appeal I have appealed to my target audience been male and female with the colour scheme because I chose the colours bases off Xbox and the colours for them is black white and green I have made the magazine for the middle class so it wont be too expensive £4.99 a month and that also matches my target audience
  • 10. Feedback 1 • What did you like about the product? – I liked the colours on the magazine as they make the magazine stand out. I also like the pictures used on the magazine as it clearly shows the audience it is a gaming magazine. • What improvements could have been made to the product? • You could of made the font on the cover stand out more by putting a stroke around it.
  • 11. Feedback 2 • What did you like about the product? I like the the colours of the posters and the amount of content put into one. • What improvements could have been made to the product? You could have improved your work thorough merging images and changing the fonts of the up coming games
  • 12. Feedback 3 • What did you like about the product? – The cover looks very realistic. I can imagine It being an actual gaming magazine. • What improvements could have been made to the product? – You could move the barcode or make it smaller, I think the placement is really strange.
  • 13. Peer Feedback Summary • What do you agree with from your peer feedback? – I agree that I should of put a stroke on the magazine title because then I could of • What do you disagree with from your peer feedback? – I disagree with the people who said to join the double page spread together because I based it off the old xbox one home.
  • 14. Peer Feedback Summary I would make the the background for the double page spread better then just a solid colour then black maybe last years most popular game or something else what also stands out.

Editor's Notes

  1. What were the strengths of your research? How did your research help your product? What were the weaknesses of your research? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  2. What were the strengths of your planning? How did your planning help your product? What were the weaknesses of your planning? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  3. Did you manage your time well? Did you complete your project on time or would your products have improved with additional time? What would you have done if you had more time to produce your work?
  4. Compare your work to similar existing products and discuss the similarities and differences Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page alongside an existing product Use text boxes and arrows
  5. Does your work look good? Was it creative? What aspects of your game’s visuals do you like? What would you improve? How would you improve it? Discuss the strengths and weaknesses Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them Use text boxes and arrows
  6. How have you appealed to your target audience? What specific bits of content would appeal to your target audience. Refer to your findings from your questionnaire. Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them Use text boxes and arrows
  7. What changes would you make to your product based upon your peer feedback and why?