Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product?

1. Question 7
Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt
in the progression from it to the full product?

2. Front Cover
I have received a comment on my blog after
uploading my college magazine front cover; From
Chelsea on 8 October 2015 at 02:48
‘you should've used an image with a direct mode of
address.’
When making my music magazine front cover I have
considered the feedback and used an image where
the cover star is directly looking at the audience,
which made it look much more appealing from the
audience as I have received verbal feedback from my
friends saying ‘I like it when the person on the cover
is looking at me. It makes me what to know more
about her.’
Another thing that I have done when creating the
music magazine front cover is that there should be a
much more consistent and well matched colour
scheme which appeals to the target audience.
Also, I’ve put all of the coverlines on one side and
made them the same colours that match the rest of
the front cover.

3. Contents Page
In addition I have received a comment on
my completed college magazine contents
page from Chelsea on 8th October 2015 at
02:49;
‘You could've added something to make the
writing stand out and make the page look
less spacious.’
When making the contents page for my
music magazine I have included more
images and have labelled them with page
numbers so it is easier to find if somebody
got interested in the image and wants to
find out what it is about.
I have also added an editor’s letter to write
a brief introduction to the magazine and
what can be found inside. Both of these
things made my final Trill contents page look
less spacious and more interesting to read.