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Name – Death Watch 
Genre – Dramatic Social issue 
Actors – Vivy Hui Thing (Jake) YY ( Black angle ) 
Script 
Opening scene 
The puzzle of memories during the period of time when Vivy is being good with Jake flash through 
her mind by using point of view until we heard the sound of someone was struck by a car . 
Scene 1 
Recover from the recollection, Vivy is lying on the road .She is bleeding and breathing weakly. Tears 
is shed from her eyes and her mouth is shivering when she says: “I love you too.” 
Scene 2 
Vivy is inside a dark room which is only have two light cast on Vivy. There is a voice-over to let Vivy 
know she has another 3 days but it doesn’t inform what for the another 3 days and she doesn’t 
heard the voice-over anymore even Vivy keeps asking about what is that. She is afraid and nervous. 
Scene 3 
At the same time, Vivy awakes at the lab with the end of echo about “what is that?” She finds a can 
of her favourite drink in front of her and she is smiling while she is looking at the sticky note with 
symbol on the can. Jake comes in the lab and give her a sight ask her go back hostel together. Vivy 
packs up her belongings and goes back to hostel. 
Scene 4 
Vivy goes bed and falls asleep. She is inside the dark room again .The voice-over remind her again 
she has another 2 days. The scene will represent the hour hand is moving by anticlockwise with 
sound effect of clock. She is afraid and anxious while Jake is calling her to wake up. 
Scene 5 
She is on the way to college. There is a shadow of umbrella cast on the floor but she isn’t hold any 
umbrella in addition there is nobody around her. In fact ,Jake is holding the umbrella on the way go 
to college. 
Scene 6 
After finished class ,Jake ask her again to go back hostel together .They are saying goodbye for a 
friend actually the friend only can see Jake. After that, Jake see a people wears formal uniform with 
black coat is staring at Vivy (Black Angle = emissary comes from underworld). 
Scene 7 
The scene represent again the hour hand is moving by anticlockwise with sound effect of clock. Vivy 
is sleeping. The voice-over remind her again it is her last day. She awakes by frightened. She looks at 
the clock. It is 7.00 a.m.
Scene 8 
Jake is preparing something for their picnic. 
Scene 9 
When Vivy is dressing up, she finds abnormal on her watch. She is shocked. She looks at the clock 
just now and looks at her watch .She realises that the times showing on her watch is counting down. 
It is just 10 hours left from the end of the day. 
Scene 10 
She recalls the voice-over and the dark room these few days .Her mind is playing the scene she 
kicked Jake out from the hostel before and the content of confess letter that written by Jake ,she 
was struggling with Jake because Jake didn’t give up on her, she falls to the ground and her hand 
phone drop from her pants. At the moment, she stands up and try to run away from her and Jake is 
picking up the hand phone she dropped. As Jake want to chase her, the sound of honks and Vivy was 
struck by the car .Jake hold the hand phone on her hand tightly. Vivy realises she already died and 
breaks down. 
Scene 11 
Vivy wipes her eyes and stands by to have a wonderful last day with Jake .She doesn’t care anymore 
they are lesbian. She just make sense how precious the time be with Jake. 
Scene 12 
They are going out from hostel. They go to shopping, gaming centre and have fun. 
Scene 13 
At last, they have a picnic at a garden .Jake is playing the guitar by the song they like most .Jake is 
crying while she is playing the guitar .Vivy is crying too. Both of them are recall the sweet memories 
since the first day they met. Insert the scene of watch again and again to represent the time is 
counting down and her time is no more .Intercutting with the flashback and reverse angle of both of 
them .Meanwhile, Vivy is disappear gradually. 
Scene 14 
Vivy goes to another world already .Jake is crying painfully. 
Scene 15 
Capture “Feeling or Surface .”(Still considering) 
Director – Franqie Chan 
Lighting – John & Gunalan 
Cinematographer – Franqie Chan , John , Gunalan 
Assistance Director – Vivy 
Scriptwriter- Franqie Chan John Gunalan Vivy
Pitching 2 (only storytelling)

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Pitching 2 (only storytelling)

  • 1. Name – Death Watch Genre – Dramatic Social issue Actors – Vivy Hui Thing (Jake) YY ( Black angle ) Script Opening scene The puzzle of memories during the period of time when Vivy is being good with Jake flash through her mind by using point of view until we heard the sound of someone was struck by a car . Scene 1 Recover from the recollection, Vivy is lying on the road .She is bleeding and breathing weakly. Tears is shed from her eyes and her mouth is shivering when she says: “I love you too.” Scene 2 Vivy is inside a dark room which is only have two light cast on Vivy. There is a voice-over to let Vivy know she has another 3 days but it doesn’t inform what for the another 3 days and she doesn’t heard the voice-over anymore even Vivy keeps asking about what is that. She is afraid and nervous. Scene 3 At the same time, Vivy awakes at the lab with the end of echo about “what is that?” She finds a can of her favourite drink in front of her and she is smiling while she is looking at the sticky note with symbol on the can. Jake comes in the lab and give her a sight ask her go back hostel together. Vivy packs up her belongings and goes back to hostel. Scene 4 Vivy goes bed and falls asleep. She is inside the dark room again .The voice-over remind her again she has another 2 days. The scene will represent the hour hand is moving by anticlockwise with sound effect of clock. She is afraid and anxious while Jake is calling her to wake up. Scene 5 She is on the way to college. There is a shadow of umbrella cast on the floor but she isn’t hold any umbrella in addition there is nobody around her. In fact ,Jake is holding the umbrella on the way go to college. Scene 6 After finished class ,Jake ask her again to go back hostel together .They are saying goodbye for a friend actually the friend only can see Jake. After that, Jake see a people wears formal uniform with black coat is staring at Vivy (Black Angle = emissary comes from underworld). Scene 7 The scene represent again the hour hand is moving by anticlockwise with sound effect of clock. Vivy is sleeping. The voice-over remind her again it is her last day. She awakes by frightened. She looks at the clock. It is 7.00 a.m.
  • 2. Scene 8 Jake is preparing something for their picnic. Scene 9 When Vivy is dressing up, she finds abnormal on her watch. She is shocked. She looks at the clock just now and looks at her watch .She realises that the times showing on her watch is counting down. It is just 10 hours left from the end of the day. Scene 10 She recalls the voice-over and the dark room these few days .Her mind is playing the scene she kicked Jake out from the hostel before and the content of confess letter that written by Jake ,she was struggling with Jake because Jake didn’t give up on her, she falls to the ground and her hand phone drop from her pants. At the moment, she stands up and try to run away from her and Jake is picking up the hand phone she dropped. As Jake want to chase her, the sound of honks and Vivy was struck by the car .Jake hold the hand phone on her hand tightly. Vivy realises she already died and breaks down. Scene 11 Vivy wipes her eyes and stands by to have a wonderful last day with Jake .She doesn’t care anymore they are lesbian. She just make sense how precious the time be with Jake. Scene 12 They are going out from hostel. They go to shopping, gaming centre and have fun. Scene 13 At last, they have a picnic at a garden .Jake is playing the guitar by the song they like most .Jake is crying while she is playing the guitar .Vivy is crying too. Both of them are recall the sweet memories since the first day they met. Insert the scene of watch again and again to represent the time is counting down and her time is no more .Intercutting with the flashback and reverse angle of both of them .Meanwhile, Vivy is disappear gradually. Scene 14 Vivy goes to another world already .Jake is crying painfully. Scene 15 Capture “Feeling or Surface .”(Still considering) Director – Franqie Chan Lighting – John & Gunalan Cinematographer – Franqie Chan , John , Gunalan Assistance Director – Vivy Scriptwriter- Franqie Chan John Gunalan Vivy