SlideShare a Scribd company logo
1 of 4
Treatment – final draft
Gabriella
Nikol
Ewelina
00:00 – 00:17
The opening sequence begins with an establishing shot of
park. GIRL is on the swing and unknown man (CLOWN) is
staring at her. GIRL shyly smiles to unknown man (CLOWN)and
he smiles back.
00:17 – 00:40
Suddenly GIRL gets up and runs home. She stops and look
back on the place where unknown man (CLOWN)was, but he is
no there anymore. She looks confused, but she carry on
running. She coming to front doors and starts to open them.
00:40 – 01:04
CLOWN is putting on his clown costume in the bathroom. Next
he is slowly putting on his makeup. The variety of shots
shows different stages of Clown doing his make-up.
01:04 – 01:12
CLOWN returns to the park, where GIRL was playing. Now he
has sharp tool and looking on swing, he starts to play with
this sharp tool on fence. Suddenly he starts to go to the
front of girl’s house dragging sharp tool over fence.
01:12 – 01:46
He walks and there is flashbacks to his childhood, he is in
his bed trying to sleep, but he is terrified as he thinks
that clown doll is alive. The fear in his eyes is shown by
extreme close up shots. Then is flash-forward and Clown is
carry on his walking. Then there is another flashback
showing clown toy is staring directly at him from his
shelf. There is again flash-forward and he is still gong to
the front of girl’s house. Another flashback to his
childhood when he is torturing this Clown doll, as he is
afraid of this doll. In the background can be hear that his
parents are arguing. Again flash-forward and he is carrying
on walking. Another flashback to his childhood when he is
throwing clown doll and starts crying.
01:46 – 01:52
Flash-forward, CLOWN is really close to the GIRL’S house. He
is walking and at the same time he is playing with the sharp
tool.
01:52 – 02:03
Clown stand before GIRL’S house and he is still playing with
this sharp tool. He is self-confident and seems that he knows
what he is doing. He starts looking GIRL’s window.

More Related Content

What's hot

Real task script final
Real task script finalReal task script final
Real task script finalhenrr023
 
Real Task Script Final 2
Real Task Script Final 2Real Task Script Final 2
Real Task Script Final 2henrr023
 
The babysitter final draft
The babysitter final draftThe babysitter final draft
The babysitter final draftelliotpower
 
Short Film Script - For Eternity - Draft
Short Film Script - For Eternity - DraftShort Film Script - For Eternity - Draft
Short Film Script - For Eternity - Draftlh182199
 
The documentaries
The documentariesThe documentaries
The documentariesDanny Steve
 
Megapixels productions script
Megapixels productions scriptMegapixels productions script
Megapixels productions scriptrhsmediastudies
 
Individual script - Regan
Individual script  - ReganIndividual script  - Regan
Individual script - Reganrhsmediastudies
 
Tv drama script (1)
Tv drama script (1)Tv drama script (1)
Tv drama script (1)EW180891
 
The babysitter draft 2
The babysitter draft 2The babysitter draft 2
The babysitter draft 2elliotpower
 
Initial plot ideas
Initial plot ideasInitial plot ideas
Initial plot ideasrhiannonmay
 
Script a house in the void
Script a house in the voidScript a house in the void
Script a house in the voidMatt Hall
 
Buffy script-s01-e01
Buffy script-s01-e01Buffy script-s01-e01
Buffy script-s01-e01darnellb3
 
The House is Eternal (short film script assignment)
The House is Eternal (short film script assignment)The House is Eternal (short film script assignment)
The House is Eternal (short film script assignment)Matt Hall
 

What's hot (18)

Real task script final
Real task script finalReal task script final
Real task script final
 
Real Task Script Final 2
Real Task Script Final 2Real Task Script Final 2
Real Task Script Final 2
 
The babysitter final draft
The babysitter final draftThe babysitter final draft
The babysitter final draft
 
Short Film Script - For Eternity - Draft
Short Film Script - For Eternity - DraftShort Film Script - For Eternity - Draft
Short Film Script - For Eternity - Draft
 
The documentaries
The documentariesThe documentaries
The documentaries
 
‘Why me' final script
‘Why me' final script‘Why me' final script
‘Why me' final script
 
Megapixels productions script
Megapixels productions scriptMegapixels productions script
Megapixels productions script
 
Individual script - Regan
Individual script  - ReganIndividual script  - Regan
Individual script - Regan
 
Tv drama script (1)
Tv drama script (1)Tv drama script (1)
Tv drama script (1)
 
Fracture 3
Fracture 3Fracture 3
Fracture 3
 
The babysitter draft 2
The babysitter draft 2The babysitter draft 2
The babysitter draft 2
 
Script 3-Fracture
Script 3-FractureScript 3-Fracture
Script 3-Fracture
 
Fracture3
Fracture3Fracture3
Fracture3
 
Fracture
FractureFracture
Fracture
 
Initial plot ideas
Initial plot ideasInitial plot ideas
Initial plot ideas
 
Script a house in the void
Script a house in the voidScript a house in the void
Script a house in the void
 
Buffy script-s01-e01
Buffy script-s01-e01Buffy script-s01-e01
Buffy script-s01-e01
 
The House is Eternal (short film script assignment)
The House is Eternal (short film script assignment)The House is Eternal (short film script assignment)
The House is Eternal (short film script assignment)
 

Viewers also liked (18)

Treatment – draft2
Treatment – draft2Treatment – draft2
Treatment – draft2
 
Shooting schedule
Shooting scheduleShooting schedule
Shooting schedule
 
Initial magazine cover research
Initial magazine cover researchInitial magazine cover research
Initial magazine cover research
 
BBFC rating
BBFC ratingBBFC rating
BBFC rating
 
Location (draft 1&2)
Location (draft 1&2)Location (draft 1&2)
Location (draft 1&2)
 
Location
LocationLocation
Location
 
Planning final draft
Planning final draft Planning final draft
Planning final draft
 
Storyboard final draft
Storyboard final draftStoryboard final draft
Storyboard final draft
 
Editing in trailers
Editing in trailersEditing in trailers
Editing in trailers
 
Research into my subgenre (psychological thriller)
Research into my subgenre (psychological thriller)Research into my subgenre (psychological thriller)
Research into my subgenre (psychological thriller)
 
Evaluation question 2
Evaluation question 2Evaluation question 2
Evaluation question 2
 
Enigma codes (final draft)
Enigma codes (final draft)Enigma codes (final draft)
Enigma codes (final draft)
 
Convections
ConvectionsConvections
Convections
 
Enigma codes
Enigma codesEnigma codes
Enigma codes
 
Treatment
TreatmentTreatment
Treatment
 
Narrative structure, style and theory
Narrative structure, style and theoryNarrative structure, style and theory
Narrative structure, style and theory
 
Shot list
Shot listShot list
Shot list
 
Timeline
TimelineTimeline
Timeline
 

Similar to Treatment – draft2

Initial ideas for opening sequence
Initial ideas for opening sequenceInitial ideas for opening sequence
Initial ideas for opening sequenceGabyV45
 
Idea exploration
Idea explorationIdea exploration
Idea explorationGabyV45
 
How to promote my film through a trailer
How to promote my film through a trailerHow to promote my film through a trailer
How to promote my film through a trailerAbbie
 
Pitching 2 (only storytelling)
Pitching 2 (only storytelling)Pitching 2 (only storytelling)
Pitching 2 (only storytelling)VivyKoo
 

Similar to Treatment – draft2 (6)

Treatment – draft1
Treatment – draft1Treatment – draft1
Treatment – draft1
 
Initial ideas for opening sequence
Initial ideas for opening sequenceInitial ideas for opening sequence
Initial ideas for opening sequence
 
Idea exploration
Idea explorationIdea exploration
Idea exploration
 
How to promote my film through a trailer
How to promote my film through a trailerHow to promote my film through a trailer
How to promote my film through a trailer
 
Pitching 2 (only storytelling)
Pitching 2 (only storytelling)Pitching 2 (only storytelling)
Pitching 2 (only storytelling)
 
Alone
AloneAlone
Alone
 

More from edabrowskamedia (20)

Conventions
ConventionsConventions
Conventions
 
technologies
technologies technologies
technologies
 
Enigma codes
Enigma codesEnigma codes
Enigma codes
 
Characters
CharactersCharacters
Characters
 
Location
LocationLocation
Location
 
Shooting schedule
Shooting scheduleShooting schedule
Shooting schedule
 
Shot list - final draft
Shot list - final draftShot list - final draft
Shot list - final draft
 
Conventions
ConventionsConventions
Conventions
 
Treatment
TreatmentTreatment
Treatment
 
Enigma codes
Enigma codesEnigma codes
Enigma codes
 
Characters
CharactersCharacters
Characters
 
Costume and props
Costume and propsCostume and props
Costume and props
 
Character and actors planning
Character and actors planningCharacter and actors planning
Character and actors planning
 
Idea in bullet point with conventions
Idea in bullet point with conventionsIdea in bullet point with conventions
Idea in bullet point with conventions
 
Convention in psychological thriller trailers
Convention in psychological thriller trailersConvention in psychological thriller trailers
Convention in psychological thriller trailers
 
Production and distribution company research
Production and distribution company researchProduction and distribution company research
Production and distribution company research
 
Title
TitleTitle
Title
 
Narrative enigmas in trailers
Narrative enigmas in trailersNarrative enigmas in trailers
Narrative enigmas in trailers
 
Magazine cover research
Magazine cover researchMagazine cover research
Magazine cover research
 
Film poster research
Film poster researchFilm poster research
Film poster research
 

Recently uploaded

Enzyme, Pharmaceutical Aids, Miscellaneous Last Part of Chapter no 5th.pdf
Enzyme, Pharmaceutical Aids, Miscellaneous Last Part of Chapter no 5th.pdfEnzyme, Pharmaceutical Aids, Miscellaneous Last Part of Chapter no 5th.pdf
Enzyme, Pharmaceutical Aids, Miscellaneous Last Part of Chapter no 5th.pdfSumit Tiwari
 
Crayon Activity Handout For the Crayon A
Crayon Activity Handout For the Crayon ACrayon Activity Handout For the Crayon A
Crayon Activity Handout For the Crayon AUnboundStockton
 
call girls in Kamla Market (DELHI) 🔝 >༒9953330565🔝 genuine Escort Service 🔝✔️✔️
call girls in Kamla Market (DELHI) 🔝 >༒9953330565🔝 genuine Escort Service 🔝✔️✔️call girls in Kamla Market (DELHI) 🔝 >༒9953330565🔝 genuine Escort Service 🔝✔️✔️
call girls in Kamla Market (DELHI) 🔝 >༒9953330565🔝 genuine Escort Service 🔝✔️✔️9953056974 Low Rate Call Girls In Saket, Delhi NCR
 
Software Engineering Methodologies (overview)
Software Engineering Methodologies (overview)Software Engineering Methodologies (overview)
Software Engineering Methodologies (overview)eniolaolutunde
 
POINT- BIOCHEMISTRY SEM 2 ENZYMES UNIT 5.pptx
POINT- BIOCHEMISTRY SEM 2 ENZYMES UNIT 5.pptxPOINT- BIOCHEMISTRY SEM 2 ENZYMES UNIT 5.pptx
POINT- BIOCHEMISTRY SEM 2 ENZYMES UNIT 5.pptxSayali Powar
 
Interactive Powerpoint_How to Master effective communication
Interactive Powerpoint_How to Master effective communicationInteractive Powerpoint_How to Master effective communication
Interactive Powerpoint_How to Master effective communicationnomboosow
 
Painted Grey Ware.pptx, PGW Culture of India
Painted Grey Ware.pptx, PGW Culture of IndiaPainted Grey Ware.pptx, PGW Culture of India
Painted Grey Ware.pptx, PGW Culture of IndiaVirag Sontakke
 
Final demo Grade 9 for demo Plan dessert.pptx
Final demo Grade 9 for demo Plan dessert.pptxFinal demo Grade 9 for demo Plan dessert.pptx
Final demo Grade 9 for demo Plan dessert.pptxAvyJaneVismanos
 
Roles & Responsibilities in Pharmacovigilance
Roles & Responsibilities in PharmacovigilanceRoles & Responsibilities in Pharmacovigilance
Roles & Responsibilities in PharmacovigilanceSamikshaHamane
 
Framing an Appropriate Research Question 6b9b26d93da94caf993c038d9efcdedb.pdf
Framing an Appropriate Research Question 6b9b26d93da94caf993c038d9efcdedb.pdfFraming an Appropriate Research Question 6b9b26d93da94caf993c038d9efcdedb.pdf
Framing an Appropriate Research Question 6b9b26d93da94caf993c038d9efcdedb.pdfUjwalaBharambe
 
Earth Day Presentation wow hello nice great
Earth Day Presentation wow hello nice greatEarth Day Presentation wow hello nice great
Earth Day Presentation wow hello nice greatYousafMalik24
 
Introduction to ArtificiaI Intelligence in Higher Education
Introduction to ArtificiaI Intelligence in Higher EducationIntroduction to ArtificiaI Intelligence in Higher Education
Introduction to ArtificiaI Intelligence in Higher Educationpboyjonauth
 
KSHARA STURA .pptx---KSHARA KARMA THERAPY (CAUSTIC THERAPY)————IMP.OF KSHARA ...
KSHARA STURA .pptx---KSHARA KARMA THERAPY (CAUSTIC THERAPY)————IMP.OF KSHARA ...KSHARA STURA .pptx---KSHARA KARMA THERAPY (CAUSTIC THERAPY)————IMP.OF KSHARA ...
KSHARA STURA .pptx---KSHARA KARMA THERAPY (CAUSTIC THERAPY)————IMP.OF KSHARA ...M56BOOKSTORE PRODUCT/SERVICE
 
internship ppt on smartinternz platform as salesforce developer
internship ppt on smartinternz platform as salesforce developerinternship ppt on smartinternz platform as salesforce developer
internship ppt on smartinternz platform as salesforce developerunnathinaik
 
Employee wellbeing at the workplace.pptx
Employee wellbeing at the workplace.pptxEmployee wellbeing at the workplace.pptx
Employee wellbeing at the workplace.pptxNirmalaLoungPoorunde1
 
CELL CYCLE Division Science 8 quarter IV.pptx
CELL CYCLE Division Science 8 quarter IV.pptxCELL CYCLE Division Science 8 quarter IV.pptx
CELL CYCLE Division Science 8 quarter IV.pptxJiesonDelaCerna
 
18-04-UA_REPORT_MEDIALITERAСY_INDEX-DM_23-1-final-eng.pdf
18-04-UA_REPORT_MEDIALITERAСY_INDEX-DM_23-1-final-eng.pdf18-04-UA_REPORT_MEDIALITERAСY_INDEX-DM_23-1-final-eng.pdf
18-04-UA_REPORT_MEDIALITERAСY_INDEX-DM_23-1-final-eng.pdfssuser54595a
 
Solving Puzzles Benefits Everyone (English).pptx
Solving Puzzles Benefits Everyone (English).pptxSolving Puzzles Benefits Everyone (English).pptx
Solving Puzzles Benefits Everyone (English).pptxOH TEIK BIN
 

Recently uploaded (20)

Enzyme, Pharmaceutical Aids, Miscellaneous Last Part of Chapter no 5th.pdf
Enzyme, Pharmaceutical Aids, Miscellaneous Last Part of Chapter no 5th.pdfEnzyme, Pharmaceutical Aids, Miscellaneous Last Part of Chapter no 5th.pdf
Enzyme, Pharmaceutical Aids, Miscellaneous Last Part of Chapter no 5th.pdf
 
Crayon Activity Handout For the Crayon A
Crayon Activity Handout For the Crayon ACrayon Activity Handout For the Crayon A
Crayon Activity Handout For the Crayon A
 
call girls in Kamla Market (DELHI) 🔝 >༒9953330565🔝 genuine Escort Service 🔝✔️✔️
call girls in Kamla Market (DELHI) 🔝 >༒9953330565🔝 genuine Escort Service 🔝✔️✔️call girls in Kamla Market (DELHI) 🔝 >༒9953330565🔝 genuine Escort Service 🔝✔️✔️
call girls in Kamla Market (DELHI) 🔝 >༒9953330565🔝 genuine Escort Service 🔝✔️✔️
 
Software Engineering Methodologies (overview)
Software Engineering Methodologies (overview)Software Engineering Methodologies (overview)
Software Engineering Methodologies (overview)
 
POINT- BIOCHEMISTRY SEM 2 ENZYMES UNIT 5.pptx
POINT- BIOCHEMISTRY SEM 2 ENZYMES UNIT 5.pptxPOINT- BIOCHEMISTRY SEM 2 ENZYMES UNIT 5.pptx
POINT- BIOCHEMISTRY SEM 2 ENZYMES UNIT 5.pptx
 
Interactive Powerpoint_How to Master effective communication
Interactive Powerpoint_How to Master effective communicationInteractive Powerpoint_How to Master effective communication
Interactive Powerpoint_How to Master effective communication
 
Painted Grey Ware.pptx, PGW Culture of India
Painted Grey Ware.pptx, PGW Culture of IndiaPainted Grey Ware.pptx, PGW Culture of India
Painted Grey Ware.pptx, PGW Culture of India
 
Final demo Grade 9 for demo Plan dessert.pptx
Final demo Grade 9 for demo Plan dessert.pptxFinal demo Grade 9 for demo Plan dessert.pptx
Final demo Grade 9 for demo Plan dessert.pptx
 
Roles & Responsibilities in Pharmacovigilance
Roles & Responsibilities in PharmacovigilanceRoles & Responsibilities in Pharmacovigilance
Roles & Responsibilities in Pharmacovigilance
 
Framing an Appropriate Research Question 6b9b26d93da94caf993c038d9efcdedb.pdf
Framing an Appropriate Research Question 6b9b26d93da94caf993c038d9efcdedb.pdfFraming an Appropriate Research Question 6b9b26d93da94caf993c038d9efcdedb.pdf
Framing an Appropriate Research Question 6b9b26d93da94caf993c038d9efcdedb.pdf
 
ESSENTIAL of (CS/IT/IS) class 06 (database)
ESSENTIAL of (CS/IT/IS) class 06 (database)ESSENTIAL of (CS/IT/IS) class 06 (database)
ESSENTIAL of (CS/IT/IS) class 06 (database)
 
Earth Day Presentation wow hello nice great
Earth Day Presentation wow hello nice greatEarth Day Presentation wow hello nice great
Earth Day Presentation wow hello nice great
 
Introduction to ArtificiaI Intelligence in Higher Education
Introduction to ArtificiaI Intelligence in Higher EducationIntroduction to ArtificiaI Intelligence in Higher Education
Introduction to ArtificiaI Intelligence in Higher Education
 
KSHARA STURA .pptx---KSHARA KARMA THERAPY (CAUSTIC THERAPY)————IMP.OF KSHARA ...
KSHARA STURA .pptx---KSHARA KARMA THERAPY (CAUSTIC THERAPY)————IMP.OF KSHARA ...KSHARA STURA .pptx---KSHARA KARMA THERAPY (CAUSTIC THERAPY)————IMP.OF KSHARA ...
KSHARA STURA .pptx---KSHARA KARMA THERAPY (CAUSTIC THERAPY)————IMP.OF KSHARA ...
 
internship ppt on smartinternz platform as salesforce developer
internship ppt on smartinternz platform as salesforce developerinternship ppt on smartinternz platform as salesforce developer
internship ppt on smartinternz platform as salesforce developer
 
Employee wellbeing at the workplace.pptx
Employee wellbeing at the workplace.pptxEmployee wellbeing at the workplace.pptx
Employee wellbeing at the workplace.pptx
 
9953330565 Low Rate Call Girls In Rohini Delhi NCR
9953330565 Low Rate Call Girls In Rohini  Delhi NCR9953330565 Low Rate Call Girls In Rohini  Delhi NCR
9953330565 Low Rate Call Girls In Rohini Delhi NCR
 
CELL CYCLE Division Science 8 quarter IV.pptx
CELL CYCLE Division Science 8 quarter IV.pptxCELL CYCLE Division Science 8 quarter IV.pptx
CELL CYCLE Division Science 8 quarter IV.pptx
 
18-04-UA_REPORT_MEDIALITERAСY_INDEX-DM_23-1-final-eng.pdf
18-04-UA_REPORT_MEDIALITERAСY_INDEX-DM_23-1-final-eng.pdf18-04-UA_REPORT_MEDIALITERAСY_INDEX-DM_23-1-final-eng.pdf
18-04-UA_REPORT_MEDIALITERAСY_INDEX-DM_23-1-final-eng.pdf
 
Solving Puzzles Benefits Everyone (English).pptx
Solving Puzzles Benefits Everyone (English).pptxSolving Puzzles Benefits Everyone (English).pptx
Solving Puzzles Benefits Everyone (English).pptx
 

Treatment – draft2

  • 1. Treatment – final draft Gabriella Nikol Ewelina
  • 2. 00:00 – 00:17 The opening sequence begins with an establishing shot of park. GIRL is on the swing and unknown man (CLOWN) is staring at her. GIRL shyly smiles to unknown man (CLOWN)and he smiles back. 00:17 – 00:40 Suddenly GIRL gets up and runs home. She stops and look back on the place where unknown man (CLOWN)was, but he is no there anymore. She looks confused, but she carry on running. She coming to front doors and starts to open them. 00:40 – 01:04 CLOWN is putting on his clown costume in the bathroom. Next he is slowly putting on his makeup. The variety of shots shows different stages of Clown doing his make-up.
  • 3. 01:04 – 01:12 CLOWN returns to the park, where GIRL was playing. Now he has sharp tool and looking on swing, he starts to play with this sharp tool on fence. Suddenly he starts to go to the front of girl’s house dragging sharp tool over fence. 01:12 – 01:46 He walks and there is flashbacks to his childhood, he is in his bed trying to sleep, but he is terrified as he thinks that clown doll is alive. The fear in his eyes is shown by extreme close up shots. Then is flash-forward and Clown is carry on his walking. Then there is another flashback showing clown toy is staring directly at him from his shelf. There is again flash-forward and he is still gong to the front of girl’s house. Another flashback to his childhood when he is torturing this Clown doll, as he is afraid of this doll. In the background can be hear that his parents are arguing. Again flash-forward and he is carrying on walking. Another flashback to his childhood when he is throwing clown doll and starts crying.
  • 4. 01:46 – 01:52 Flash-forward, CLOWN is really close to the GIRL’S house. He is walking and at the same time he is playing with the sharp tool. 01:52 – 02:03 Clown stand before GIRL’S house and he is still playing with this sharp tool. He is self-confident and seems that he knows what he is doing. He starts looking GIRL’s window.