Vicki gets into a violent fight with her mother and storms out of the house. The next day at school, Vicki notices something strange - she has no reflection. When she gets home, her mother is distraught over a phone call. Vicki sees a bright light and suddenly finds herself outside, seeing her own dead body on the ground. Realizing she is dead, Vicki writes her mother an apology note before her spirit disappears.

1. Redemption
By
Catrin George-Carey and Bianca Goldman

2. 1. BLACK SCREEN (TITLES)
The sound of a girl Violently fighting with her mother, with
them shouting and Physically hurting each other can be
heard.
VICKI
(Shouting) Stop trying to ruin my
life
MUM
Vicki, I’m your mother
VICKI
(Screaming) -I hate you, I fucking
hate you.
Vicki punches her Mother in her arms.
MUM
Vicki what’s happening to you?...
VICKI
(Now Calm) My life is no longer
your business.
Vicki leave’s the sound of the door slamming can be heard.
2. FADE IN, NIGHT INT VICKI’S BEDROOM
Looking through the window of Vicki’s house, we see Vicki
pacing up and down her Bedroom looking guilty and
frustrated. She had her hand on her head as a sign of
stress. Eventually she turns out the light. Fade to black.
3. FADE IN, DAY INT VICKI’S BEDROOM
Looking through the same window into her bedroom, Vicki is
brushing her hair in the mirror and getting ready for
school. She throws her black backpack on her back and stomps
out of her bedroom door.
4. DAY INT VICKI’S HALLWAY
Vicki stomps down the stairs. Her mother is putting on her
coat at the bottom of the stairs.
MUM
Hi...

3. 2.
Vicki ignores this and storms out of the front door. The
door slams. We see the clock on the wall slam in
frustration. The clock changes from 8:30 to 4:15.
5. DAY EXT SCHOOL YARD
Vicki walks out of her school looking morbid. The weather is
gloomy. Edgy rock music fades in similar to the styles of
’Twilight’
6. DAY EXT MONTAGE
Vicki is walking home from school. We see her looking grumpy
as she walks down the street’s with her earphones in. She
trips and stumbles over a shoe and then carries on walking.
Approaches her house and walks through the front door.
7. DAY INT VICKI’S BEDROOM
Vicki throws her backpack off her back and ties her hair up.
Whilst doing this she walks in front of her full body mirror
and see’s no reflection.
VICKI
(To herself) What...the...hell
8. DAY INT VICKI’S KITCHEN
Vicki’s mum is sitting of the kitchen table, reading the
newspaper.
VICKI
Mum...MUM! Hello can you stop
ignoring me?! There is something
wrong with my...
The phone rings. Mum gets up from the table and answers the
phone. We see her start to break down.
VICKI
Mum..mum...What’s going on? MUM!
Vicki walks towards her Mum...she see’s a bright light in
the corner of the room which confuses her..

4. 3.
9. DAY EXT STREET
Suddenly Vicki is walking down her street. Confused, she
rushes towards her house. She trips over the same shoe
which she previously tripped over and stops. She see’s
herself lying on the floor, her head pouring with blood.
VICKI
SCREAMS.
She bends down to ’herself’ and tries to wipe away the blood
but it is useless. Suddenly she see’s the bright light once
again however this time the light is much closer. Vicki’s
her hand begins to dissolve as she does this. She runs away
from the light.
10. DAY INT. VICKI’S KITCHEN
The sound of Vicki’s mum wailing upstairs can be heard. The
bright light is almost right next to Vicki but it is
starting to become weaker. But it is creeping up on her. The
sound of the argument with the mother the night before rings
in her head.
VICKI
I hate you. I fucking hate you.
Vicki starts crying and rushes up the stairs.
11. DAY INT VICKI’S BEDROOM
Vicki’s mum is asleep in Vicki’s bed crying. Her face is
buried in Vicki’s pillows and soft toys. Vicki rushes over
to her desk. Meanwhile the light grows closer. Vicki tries
to pick up a pen. The music builds the tension in the this
scene as Vicki’s uses all her strength to pick up this pen.
Eventually it lifts and writes on a plain piece of paper.
NOTE:
Mum, I’m sorry.
Love you always
Vick.
Vicki rushes over to her grieving mother and tucks the
message under her mothers arm. She kisses her mother on the
head.
CONTINUED:
(CONTINUED)

5. CONTINUED: 4.
VICKI
I’m sorry
A master shot shows the Vicki has disappeared. The light now
in the corner of the room dies out.
Fade to black.