some comments made by our media teacher which we have took into consideration and expanded on

1. We dida draft of our musicvideobefore the releaseddate wassetsowe couldreceive some
feedbackonpointswe couldimprove anddeveloponsowe wouldgaina bettergrade whenthe
videogoesoff tobe examined. Thesecommentsbelow are statedfromourMediateacherand I
have explainedhowwe managedtogetaroundthese commentstomake the videobetter.
We decidedtoaddthissoundeffectatthe start of the song as we thoughtitwouldfitinwiththe
effectof the song.Breathe me issuch a strong,powerful,emotional andwe thoughtthisaudioclip
wouldsoundreallygoodatthe start of the song.Eventhoughwe got thispiece of feedback,we
discusseditanddecidedtoleave itinas we reallylikedthe emotional itgave tothe start of the song.
We diddo somethingaboutthispiece of feedbackandwe didagree withitbeingtoolongat the
start of the video.We lookedthroughsome videoswe hadshotbefore andcuta little scene of me
lookedquite upset,addedaglitchtoit and editedittobe black andwhite.Thislookedreally
effectiveandfilledalongpause atthe start of the video.
We diddecide touse thisshotagain,we thoughtit lookedreallygoodtoaddina glitchat the endof
the song due to ushavingto fill some time atthe endof the video.We alsousedsome screengabs
fromthisshot to puton our albuminsertas itlookedreallyeffectivewhenviewingitinslow motion.
We didn’thave time tochange thisshotbefore handingitinto our mediateacherbutwhenwe got
it back,we flippedthe shot sothe glasswas facingupwards.Thismade shotlookquite close tothe
leftside however,we stillthoughtitlookedbetterthanitbeingupright.
We thought this feedback was very helpful for us to improve and develop our
music video, our ideas did need evaluating and our media teacher offered us
some great points to expand on and add in extras. We are really happy to now
export out video and finally add it to our blogger.