Newswriting Tips
Boring-but-important advice every reporter should memorize.
Writing Leads

 Keep leads short. Usually 35 words or fewer.

 Try to limit leads to one or two sentences.

 The first 5 – 10 words determine if the lead will be an attention
  getter.

 Remember, what happened makes a better story than the fact it
  did.
The Rest of the Story

 Vary your sentence lengths.

 Remember that short paragraphs encourage readers to continue
  reading.

 Limit paragraphs to:
      60 words or fewer
      No more than 10 typeset lines, or
      One to three sentences.
The Rest of the Story

 Paragraphs should generally only contain one idea.

 Quotes stand alone as their own paragraphs. Do not start a quote
  ½ way through a paragraph.

 Avoid introducing new information at the end of a story.

 Carefully placed transitions guide the reader from one thought to
  another.
Editing and Style

 Eliminate words such as when asked and concluded.

 Omit the word that whenever possible.

 On first reference, use the person’s first and last name (and title if
  necessary).

 On second reference use last name only (no titles).

 Use spell-checker and the AP Stylebook.

 Ask for help!
Rules of Grammar

 KNOW THEM!

 Know the difference between:
     It’s/its; who’s/whose; their/there/they’re
Word Choices

 Eliminate lazy adverbs, let strong verbs do their jobs.
      Instead of the radio played loudly, use the radio blared.

 Eliminate lazy adjectives, let strong nouns do their jobs.
      Instead of gang members created a chaotic scene use gansters created chaos.

 Use simple words. Don’t send readers to the dictionary.
Word Choices

 Avoid words that reinforce ethnic, racial, gender or ageist
  stereotypes.

 Avoid referring to someone’s ethnicity, race, gender or age unless
  it is essential for the story.

 Use he or she instead of he.

 Respect people with disabilities.
Punctuation

 When in doubt about using a comma, leave it out.

 Use an exclamation mark only after brief expletives.
      Fire! Run! Goal!

 If you ever catch yourself overusing a set of punctuation marks,
  force yourself to stop.

 Simple sentence structures are always the best.
Punctuation

 When in doubt about using a comma, leave it out.

 Use an exclamation mark only after brief expletives.
      Fire! Run! Goal!

 If you ever catch yourself overusing a set of punctuation marks,
  force yourself to stop.

 Simple sentence structures are always the best.

Newswriting tips

  • 1.
    Newswriting Tips Boring-but-important adviceevery reporter should memorize.
  • 2.
    Writing Leads  Keepleads short. Usually 35 words or fewer.  Try to limit leads to one or two sentences.  The first 5 – 10 words determine if the lead will be an attention getter.  Remember, what happened makes a better story than the fact it did.
  • 3.
    The Rest ofthe Story  Vary your sentence lengths.  Remember that short paragraphs encourage readers to continue reading.  Limit paragraphs to:  60 words or fewer  No more than 10 typeset lines, or  One to three sentences.
  • 4.
    The Rest ofthe Story  Paragraphs should generally only contain one idea.  Quotes stand alone as their own paragraphs. Do not start a quote ½ way through a paragraph.  Avoid introducing new information at the end of a story.  Carefully placed transitions guide the reader from one thought to another.
  • 5.
    Editing and Style Eliminate words such as when asked and concluded.  Omit the word that whenever possible.  On first reference, use the person’s first and last name (and title if necessary).  On second reference use last name only (no titles).  Use spell-checker and the AP Stylebook.  Ask for help!
  • 6.
    Rules of Grammar KNOW THEM!  Know the difference between:  It’s/its; who’s/whose; their/there/they’re
  • 7.
    Word Choices  Eliminatelazy adverbs, let strong verbs do their jobs.  Instead of the radio played loudly, use the radio blared.  Eliminate lazy adjectives, let strong nouns do their jobs.  Instead of gang members created a chaotic scene use gansters created chaos.  Use simple words. Don’t send readers to the dictionary.
  • 8.
    Word Choices  Avoidwords that reinforce ethnic, racial, gender or ageist stereotypes.  Avoid referring to someone’s ethnicity, race, gender or age unless it is essential for the story.  Use he or she instead of he.  Respect people with disabilities.
  • 9.
    Punctuation  When indoubt about using a comma, leave it out.  Use an exclamation mark only after brief expletives.  Fire! Run! Goal!  If you ever catch yourself overusing a set of punctuation marks, force yourself to stop.  Simple sentence structures are always the best.
  • 10.
    Punctuation  When indoubt about using a comma, leave it out.  Use an exclamation mark only after brief expletives.  Fire! Run! Goal!  If you ever catch yourself overusing a set of punctuation marks, force yourself to stop.  Simple sentence structures are always the best.