This document provides summaries and feedback on different design ideas for a membership form for Surfers Against Sewage. Idea 1 summarizes feedback on the first design idea, noting the use of colors and fonts from the logo, a water-inspired background pattern, and persuasive language. It also notes the inclusion of important information. Idea 2 discusses minor changes to the first design, such as increasing some font sizes and repositioning some text. Feedback is also provided on improvements to the second side, such as adding additional member details and contact information. The document concludes by acknowledging that the original pages were in the wrong order and providing an updated second side with more information about Surfers Against Sewage.

2. Would perhaps use
these colours for my
membership form
Could perhaps use this
center lying layout for
my internet form
Could use stripe pattern inspired by
my logo
Like the style of this SAS merchandise.
Could inspire the shapes I create for my
membership form design
Different styles I could
consider

3. Front cover
Reasons to become a
member
Reasons to become a
member

4. Form Form Back

5. Could use font from my logo for a small
amount of text, such as the title
Better for large amounts of text as its
simple and readable
Also could be good for large amounts of text. Thinner
and not so square but still would be readable.
Another suitable font for larger amounts of text. Would be
better than the pervious 2 as its not too bold, not too thin, and
isn’t in all caps.
This one could be part of the title
along with Sufrimeda

6. “Here’s why you’ll love being part of our team:
You’ll receive regular campaign updates through out members magazine Pipeline.
Ocean protection, and you’ll receive live pollution updates via our Safer Seas Service.
You’ll receive campaign materials, such as posters, stickers and more!
Plus with your membership, you’ll receive treats from us!
You can get exclusive offers, including a 10% discount in the SAS Eco Surf Shop.
You’ll receive invitations to our community events.
And you’ll also become a vital part of our campaigns. Our work wouldn’t be possible without your support.”
“Join or renew now”
Copy Ideas

7. Idea 1-
Side 1
The background
pattern isn’t too
overwhelming.
Pattern was inspired
by the shapes of
waves, and I think
that this is clearer
than with some of
my previous work.
The membership
form incorporates all
the colours from the
logo.
The slightly
transparent blue text
boxes look quite
watery.
All of the text is bold
and readable.
Used the font from
my logo for ‘Surfers
Against Sewage’ on
the front cover.
I tried to use some
persuasive language.
I used the logo on the front
cover so people would
recognize it instantly.

8. Idea 1-
Side 2
Used the logo on the
back page.
Also features the
recycling symbol. This
would be important
to the audience and
to the companies
reputation.
Created clear text
boxes and tick boxes
for all of the
information that
needs to be provided.
Used a clear but
thinner font for some
of the text on this
page that I wanted to
keep more simple.
I think that I have asked for
important information.
Such as their contact
information and their card
details in order to pay for
their membership.
I think that I have split up
my leaflet well. Non of the
text is crammed in, and
the spacing for each
section is even.

9. Idea 2-
Side 1
Haven’t changed much about
the first side of my membership
leaflet. I thought that I had got
the layout and the design right
the first time.
I did however change some
of the font sizes. I made
‘Surfers Against Sewage’ on
the front cover, and ‘The
perks of being a member’ on
the inside a few sizes bigger.
I also reduced the size of the
logo on the font cover as I
thought that people would
already know what
organization the leaflet is for,
so wont need a large logo.
I moved the title on
the front cover
lower down the
page, right to the
bottom. And also
‘Join or renew now!’
on the end page
lower down on the
page to make it
more central.

10. Idea 2-
Side 2
I made the subtitles
slightly larger.
I included date of birth and
postcode in the personal
information section.
By making the text box slightly
wider, I was able to fit all of
the membership types onto
one page. I also needed to
reduce the size of the boxes so
that the text could all fit in.
I changed the colour of the
boarders on the answer
boxes to grey to. I think that
the boxes need a slight
boarder but they don’t need
to stand out too much.
This time I have
included lots of
contact
information, and
also shown where
to send the form
after you have filled
it out.

11. Idea 2-
Side 1
(Altered)
Originally, my pages were in the wrong order. I have now corrected this.

12. Idea 2-
Side 2
(Improved
)
I have added in a little extra information about Surfers Against Sewage to my membership form
as I lacked some before. This information might help potential new members to understand the
organization a bit better.