She’s a
Fashionista
For her sixth birthday, Celicia Cassini, now 11, asked for a
sewing machine. Since then, her passion for fashion has
blossomed into a career as a designer. Her creations are sold
online and in two stores in California. "I started making
clothes for my sister and her friends, and word got around,"
she told TFK.
Cecilia's next big plan is to start manufacturing her designs.
Her dream is to have her clothes sold in stores around the
world. For now, she is busy making 25 to 30 dresses each
week.
The young designer has a message for her peers: "Don't wait
until you're an adult. You don't have to!"
For her sixth birthday, Celicia Cassini, now 11, asked for a
sewing machine. Since then, her passion for fashion has
blossomed into a career as a designer. Her creations are sold
online and in two stores in California. "I started making
clothes for my sister and her friends, and word got around,"
she told TFK.
Cecilia's next big plan is to start manufacturing her designs.
Her dream is to have her clothes sold in stores around the
world. For now, she is busy making 25 to 30 dresses each
week.
The young designer has a message for her peers: "Don't wait
until you're an adult. You don't have to!"
For her sixth birthday, Celicia Cassini, now 11, asked for a
sewing machine. Since then, her passion for fashion has
blossomed into a career as a designer. Her creations are sold
online and in two stores in California. "I started making
clothes for my sister and her friends, and word got around,"
she told TFK.
Cecilia's next big plan is to start manufacturing her designs.
Her dream is to have her clothes sold in stores around the
world. For now, she is busy making 25 to 30 dresses each
week.
The young designer has a message for her peers: "Don't wait
until you're an adult. You don't have to!"
For her sixth birthday, Celicia Cassini, now 11, asked for a
sewing machine. Since then, her passion for fashion has
blossomed into a career as a designer. Her creations are sold
online and in two stores in California. "I started making
clothes for my sister and her friends, and word got around,"
she told TFK.
Cecilia's next big plan is to start manufacturing her designs.
Her dream is to have her clothes sold in stores around the
world. For now, she is busy making 25 to 30 dresses each
week.
The young designer has a message for her peers: "Don't wait
until you're an adult. You don't have to!"
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                                                     32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7)'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18
                                                                               Writing to Improve Reading and Listening Comprehension
               © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services.                                                  Step Up to Writing • Intermediate   Tool 1-31d


Intermediate-sec1.indd 49                                                                                                                        4/9/07 10:01:45 AM
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                                                IVF Summary Topic Sentences
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                                                                        32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7)'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18
                                                                                                  Writing to Improve Reading and Listening Comprehension
                                  © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services.                                                  Step Up to Writing • Intermediate   Tool 1-31d


                   Intermediate-sec1.indd 49                                                                                                                        4/9/07 10:01:45 AM
Step One: SOURCE
                                                    IVF Summary Topic Sentences
The article “She’s a                    !"##$%&' ,-$#./)'0
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   Fashionista”                                                             92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7
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                                                                            7    92'75%+-'7EH-*.)7I'.7%.)712'7<-'$2%.1F71'--(732%172%$$'.(7
                                                                            32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7)'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18
                                                                                                      Writing to Improve Reading and Listening Comprehension
                                      © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services.                                                  Step Up to Writing • Intermediate   Tool 1-31d


                       Intermediate-sec1.indd 49                                                                                                                        4/9/07 10:01:45 AM
Step One: SOURCE
                                                    IVF Summary Topic Sentences
The article “She’s a                    !"##$%&' ,-$#./)'0
                                          ()%*+  4)'.1*56712'741'#8                                 >'-'!17%7?'&+8                         @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218


   Fashionista”                                                             92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7
                                                                            ;&'%#7+67<-"*('7
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                                                                            32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7)'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18
                                                                                                      Writing to Improve Reading and Listening Comprehension
                                      © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services.                                                  Step Up to Writing • Intermediate   Tool 1-31d


                       Intermediate-sec1.indd 49                                                                                                                        4/9/07 10:01:45 AM
Step One: SOURCE
                                                          IVF Summary Topic Sentences
   The article “She’s a                       !"##$%&' ,-$#./)'0
                                                ()%*+  4)'.1*56712'741'#8                                 >'-'!17%7?'&+8                         @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218


      Fashionista”                                                                92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7
                                                                                  ;&'%#7+67<-"*('7
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                                                                                  7    92'75%+-'7EH-*.)7I'.7%.)712'7<-'$2%.1F71'--(732%172%$$'.(7
                                                                                  32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7)'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18
                                                                                                            Writing to Improve Reading and Listening Comprehension
                                            © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services.                                                  Step Up to Writing • Intermediate   Tool 1-31d


                             Intermediate-sec1.indd 49                                                                                                                        4/9/07 10:01:45 AM
Step One: SOURCE
                                                          IVF Summary Topic Sentences
   The article “She’s a                       !"##$%&' ,-$#./)'0
                                                ()%*+  4)'.1*56712'741'#8                                 >'-'!17%7?'&+8                         @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218


      Fashionista”                                                                92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7
                                                                                  ;&'%#7+67<-"*('7
                                                                                  =&''.!7'-)7                     1'--(                        %+"B17%7/*&-732"7
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                                                                                                                                               0*(*1(7#%.67$-%!'(87

    Step Two: Select                              )'(!&*+'(                       7     92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7;&'%#7+67<-"*('7=&''.!  7'-)71'--(7%+"B17%7
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                                                                                  32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7)'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18
                                                                                                            Writing to Improve Reading and Listening Comprehension
                                            © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services.                                                  Step Up to Writing • Intermediate   Tool 1-31d


                             Intermediate-sec1.indd 49                                                                                                                        4/9/07 10:01:45 AM
Step One: SOURCE
                                                          IVF Summary Topic Sentences
   The article “She’s a                       !"##$%&' ,-$#./)'0
                                                ()%*+  4)'.1*56712'741'#8                                 >'-'!17%7?'&+8                         @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218


      Fashionista”                                                                92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7
                                                                                  ;&'%#7+67<-"*('7
                                                                                  =&''.!7'-)7                     1'--(                        %+"B17%7/*&-732"7
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                                                                                                                                               0*(*1(7#%.67$-%!'(87

    Step Two: Select                              )'(!&*+'(                       7     92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7;&'%#7+67<-"*('7=&''.!  7'-)71'--(7%+"B17%7
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                                                                                  32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7)'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18
                                                                                                            Writing to Improve Reading and Listening Comprehension
                                            © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services.                                                  Step Up to Writing • Intermediate   Tool 1-31d


                             Intermediate-sec1.indd 49                                                                                                                        4/9/07 10:01:45 AM
Step One: SOURCE
                                                          IVF Summary Topic Sentences
   The article “She’s a                       !"##$%&' ,-$#./)'0
                                                ()%*+  4)'.1*56712'741'#8                                 >'-'!17%7?'&+8                         @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218


      Fashionista”                                                                92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7
                                                                                  ;&'%#7+67<-"*('7
                                                                                  =&''.!7'-)7                     1'--(                        %+"B17%7/*&-732"7
                                                                                                                                               &'1B&.(71"7:5&*!%7%.)7
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                                                                                                                                               0*(*1(7#%.67$-%!'(87

    Step Two: Select                              )'(!&*+'(                       7     92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7;&'%#7+67<-"*('7=&''.!  7'-)71'--(7%+"B17%7
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 a young girl who designs                   © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services.
                                                                                                            Writing to Improve Reading and Listening Comprehension
                                                                                                                                      Step Up to Writing • Intermediate   Tool 1-31d




        clothing.
                             Intermediate-sec1.indd 49                                                                                                                        4/9/07 10:01:45 AM
Topic Sentence:

The article “She’s a Fashionista” describes a
     young girl who designs clothing.
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                                                             !"#$%&'()*+,(-".

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                                                             !"#$%&'()*+,(-".

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                                     !"#$%&'&&((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

                       The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of
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Intermediate-sec4.indd 12                                                                                                   4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
Planning for Information/
                                        Expository Writing
                                                             !"#$%&'()*+,(-".

                                                          Young Fashion Designer
                                     !"#$%&'&&((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

                       The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of
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               young girl who designs clothing.
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               .)/+$01")/&'&




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Intermediate-sec4.indd 12                                                                                                   4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
Planning for Information/
                                        Expository Writing
                                                             !"#$%&'()*+,(-".

                                                          Young Fashion Designer
                                     !"#$%&'&&((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

                       The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of
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               young girl who designs clothing.
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                                                                           Her clothes are sold
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                                                                            online and at t wo
               &       &                                          ,&              stores.
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                                                                         Celicia makes 25-30
               &       &                                          &    -
                                                                           dresses a week.
               &       &                                          &    -
               &       &                                          ,&
               &       &                                          &    -
               &       &                                          &    -
               .)/+$01")/&'&




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Intermediate-sec4.indd 12                                                                                                   4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
Planning for Information/
                                        Expository Writing
                                                             !"#$%&'()*+,(-".

                                                          Young Fashion Designer
                                     !"#$%&'&&((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

                       The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of
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               young girl who designs clothing.
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                                                                           dresses a week.
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               &       &                                          ,&
               &       &                                          &    -
                                                                           Her dream is to sell
               &       &                                          &    -
                                                                         her clothes around the
                                                                                 world.
               .)/+$01")/&'&




                                                                                Information/Expository Paragraphs
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Intermediate-sec4.indd 12                                                                                                   4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
Planning for Information/
                                        Expository Writing
                                                             !"#$%&'()*+,(-".

                                                          Young Fashion Designer
                                     !"#$%&'&&((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

                       The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of
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               young girl who designs clothing.
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                                                                         Celicia makes 25-30
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                                                                           dresses a week.
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               &       &                                          &    -
                                                                           Her dream is to sell
               &       &                                          &    -
                                                                         her clothes around the
                                                                                 world.
               .)/+$01")/&'&

                     “Fashionista” describes the successful life of
                     a girl who makes and sells her own clothing.
                                                                                Information/Expository Paragraphs
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Intermediate-sec4.indd 12                                                                                                   4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
Planning for Information/
                                        Expository Writing
                                                             !"#$%&'()*+,(-".

                                                          Young Fashion Designer
                                     !"#$%&'&&((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

                       The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of
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               young girl who designs clothing.
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                                                                         Celicia makes 25-30
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                                                                           dresses a week.
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               &       &                                          &    -
                                                                           Her dream is to sell
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                                                                         her clothes around the
                                                                                 world.
               .)/+$01")/&'&

                     “Fashionista” describes the successful life of
                     a girl who makes and sells her own clothing.
                                                                                Information/Expository Paragraphs
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Intermediate-sec4.indd 12                                                                                                   4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
Planning for Information/
                                        Expository Writing
                                                             !"#$%&'()*+,(-".

                                                          Young Fashion Designer
                                     !"#$%&'&&((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

                       The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of
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               young girl who designs clothing.
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                                                                           Her dream is to sell
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                                                                         her clothes around the
                                                                                 world.
               .)/+$01")/&'&

                     “Fashionista” describes the successful life of
                     a girl who makes and sells her own clothing.
                                                                                Information/Expository Paragraphs
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Intermediate-sec4.indd 12                                                                                                   4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
Planning for Information/
                                        Expository Writing
                                                             !"#$%&'()*+,(-".

                                                          Young Fashion Designer
                                     !"#$%&'&&((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

                       The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of
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               young girl who designs clothing.
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                                                                           Her dream is to sell
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                                                                         her clothes around the
                                                                                 world.
               .)/+$01")/&'&

                     “Fashionista” describes the successful life of
                     a girl who makes and sells her own clothing.
                                                                                Information/Expository Paragraphs
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Intermediate-sec4.indd 12                                                                                                   4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
Planning for Information/
                                        Expository Writing
                                                             !"#$%&'()*+,(-".

                                                          Young Fashion Designer
                                     !"#$%&'&&((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

                       The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of
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               young girl who designs clothing.
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                                                                           Her dream is to sell
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                                                                         her clothes around the
                                                                                 world.
               .)/+$01")/&'&

                     “Fashionista” describes the successful life of
                     a girl who makes and sells her own clothing.
                                                                                Information/Expository Paragraphs
               © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services.                              Step Up to Writing • Intermediate   Tool 4-5c



Intermediate-sec4.indd 12                                                                                                   4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
Planning for Information/
                                        Expository Writing
                                                             !"#$%&'()*+,(-".

                                                          Young Fashion Designer
                                     !"#$%&'&&((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

                       The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of
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               young girl who designs clothing.
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                                                                           Her dream is to sell
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               .)/+$01")/&'&

                     “Fashionista” describes the successful life of
                     a girl who makes and sells her own clothing.
                                                                                Information/Expository Paragraphs
               © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services.                              Step Up to Writing • Intermediate   Tool 4-5c



Intermediate-sec4.indd 12                                                                                                   4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
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                                        Expository Writing
                                                             !"#$%&'()*+,(-".

                                                          Young Fashion Designer
                                   !"#$%&'&&((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

                       The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of
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                                                                         her clothes around the
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               .)/+$01")/&'&

                     “Fashionista” describes the successful life of
                     a girl who makes and sells her own clothing.
                                                                                Information/Expository Paragraphs
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Intermediate-sec4.indd 12                                                                                                   4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
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                                        Expository Writing
                                                             !"#$%&'()*+,(-".

                                                          Young Fashion Designer
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                       The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of
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                                                                         her clothes around the
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               .)/+$01")/&'&

                     “Fashionista” describes the successful life of
                     a girl who makes and sells her own clothing.
                                                                                Information/Expository Paragraphs
               © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services.                              Step Up to Writing • Intermediate   Tool 4-5c



Intermediate-sec4.indd 12                                                                                                   4/10/07 10:27:20 AM

Fashionista

  • 1.
  • 2.
    For her sixthbirthday, Celicia Cassini, now 11, asked for a sewing machine. Since then, her passion for fashion has blossomed into a career as a designer. Her creations are sold online and in two stores in California. "I started making clothes for my sister and her friends, and word got around," she told TFK. Cecilia's next big plan is to start manufacturing her designs. Her dream is to have her clothes sold in stores around the world. For now, she is busy making 25 to 30 dresses each week. The young designer has a message for her peers: "Don't wait until you're an adult. You don't have to!"
  • 3.
    For her sixthbirthday, Celicia Cassini, now 11, asked for a sewing machine. Since then, her passion for fashion has blossomed into a career as a designer. Her creations are sold online and in two stores in California. "I started making clothes for my sister and her friends, and word got around," she told TFK. Cecilia's next big plan is to start manufacturing her designs. Her dream is to have her clothes sold in stores around the world. For now, she is busy making 25 to 30 dresses each week. The young designer has a message for her peers: "Don't wait until you're an adult. You don't have to!"
  • 4.
    For her sixthbirthday, Celicia Cassini, now 11, asked for a sewing machine. Since then, her passion for fashion has blossomed into a career as a designer. Her creations are sold online and in two stores in California. "I started making clothes for my sister and her friends, and word got around," she told TFK. Cecilia's next big plan is to start manufacturing her designs. Her dream is to have her clothes sold in stores around the world. For now, she is busy making 25 to 30 dresses each week. The young designer has a message for her peers: "Don't wait until you're an adult. You don't have to!"
  • 5.
    For her sixthbirthday, Celicia Cassini, now 11, asked for a sewing machine. Since then, her passion for fashion has blossomed into a career as a designer. Her creations are sold online and in two stores in California. "I started making clothes for my sister and her friends, and word got around," she told TFK. Cecilia's next big plan is to start manufacturing her designs. Her dream is to have her clothes sold in stores around the world. For now, she is busy making 25 to 30 dresses each week. The young designer has a message for her peers: "Don't wait until you're an adult. You don't have to!"
  • 6.
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  • 7.
    Step One: SOURCE IVF Summary Topic Sentences !"##$%&' ,-$#./)'0 ()%*+ 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7 ;&'%#7+67<-"*('7 =&''.!7'-)7 1'--( %+"B17%7/*&-732"7 &'1B&.(71"7:5&*!%7%.)7 !"#$%&'( 0*(*1(7#%.67$-%!'(87 )'(!&*+'( 7 92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7;&'%#7+67<-"*('7=&''.! 7'-)71'--(7%+"B17%7 /*&-732"7&'1B&.(71"7:5&*!%7%.)70*(*1(7#%.67$-%!'(8 ',$-%*.( ,-$#./)'1 /*0'( 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 C2%$1'&7@*0'D7 E<-'!1&".*!(DF7*. -*(1( #67(!*'.!'7+""G ',$-%*.( 2"37%7(*#$-'7 1'-'/&%$273"&G(8 $&'('.1( 7 C2%$1'&7@*0'D7E<-'!1&".*!(DF7*.7#67(!*'.!'7+""G7',$-%*.(7 2"37%7(*#$-'71'-'/&%$273"&G(8 $&"0*)'( ,-$#./)'2 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 (2"3( 92'75%+-'7EH-*.)7 I'.7%.)712'7 1'--( <-'$2%.1F 1'--( 32%172%$$'.(7 32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7 )'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18 7 92'75%+-'7EH-*.)7I'.7%.)712'7<-'$2%.1F71'--(732%172%$$'.(7 32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7)'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18 Writing to Improve Reading and Listening Comprehension © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 1-31d Intermediate-sec1.indd 49 4/9/07 10:01:45 AM
  • 8.
    Step One: SOURCE IVF Summary Topic Sentences The article “She’s a !"##$%&' ,-$#./)'0 ()%*+ 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 Fashionista”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riting to Improve Reading and Listening Comprehension © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 1-31d Intermediate-sec1.indd 49 4/9/07 10:01:45 AM
  • 9.
    Step One: SOURCE IVF Summary Topic Sentences The article “She’s a !"##$%&' ,-$#./)'0 ()%*+ 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 Fashionista” 92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7 ;&'%#7+67<-"*('7 =&''.!7'-)7 1'--( %+"B17%7/*&-732"7 &'1B&.(71"7:5&*!%7%.)7 !"#$%&'( 0*(*1(7#%.67$-%!'(87 Step Two: Select )'(!&*+'( 7 92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7;&'%#7+67<-"*('7=&''.! 7'-)71'--(7%+"B17%7 /*&-732"7&'1B&.(71"7:5&*!%7%.)70*(*1(7#%.67$-%!'(8 ACTION ',$-%*.( ,-$#./)'1 /*0'( 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 C2%$1'&7@*0'D7 E<-'!1&".*!(DF7*. -*(1( #67(!*'.!'7+""G ',$-%*.( 2"37%7(*#$-'7 1'-'/&%$273"&G(8 $&'('.1( 7 C2%$1'&7@*0'D7E<-'!1&".*!(DF7*.7#67(!*'.!'7+""G7',$-%*.(7 2"37%7(*#$-'71'-'/&%$273"&G(8 $&"0*)'( ,-$#./)'2 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 (2"3( 92'75%+-'7EH-*.)7 I'.7%.)712'7 1'--( <-'$2%.1F 1'--( 32%172%$$'.(7 32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7 )'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18 7 92'75%+-'7EH-*.)7I'.7%.)712'7<-'$2%.1F71'--(732%172%$$'.(7 32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7)'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18 Writing to Improve Reading and Listening Comprehension © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 1-31d Intermediate-sec1.indd 49 4/9/07 10:01:45 AM
  • 10.
    Step One: SOURCE IVF Summary Topic Sentences The article “She’s a !"##$%&' ,-$#./)'0 ()%*+ 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 Fashionista” 92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7 ;&'%#7+67<-"*('7 =&''.!7'-)7 1'--( %+"B17%7/*&-732"7 &'1B&.(71"7:5&*!%7%.)7 !"#$%&'( 0*(*1(7#%.67$-%!'(87 Step Two: Select )'(!&*+'( 7 92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7;&'%#7+67<-"*('7=&''.! 7'-)71'--(7%+"B17%7 /*&-732"7&'1B&.(71"7:5&*!%7%.)70*(*1(7#%.67$-%!'(8 ACTION ',$-%*.( ,-$#./)'1 /*0'( 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 compares, describes, -*(1( C2%$1'&7@*0'D7 E<-'!1&".*!(DF7*. #67(!*'.!'7+""G ',$-%*.( 2"37%7(*#$-'7 explains, gives, lists, $&'('.1( 7 1'-'/&%$273"&G(8 C2%$1'&7@*0'D7E<-'!1&".*!(DF7*.7#67(!*'.!'7+""G7',$-%*.(7 2"37%7(*#$-'71'-'/&%$273"&G(8 presents, provides, shows, $&"0*)'( ,-$#./)'2 tells 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 (2"3( 92'75%+-'7EH-*.)7 I'.7%.)712'7 1'--( <-'$2%.1F 1'--( 32%172%$$'.(7 32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7 )'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18 7 92'75%+-'7EH-*.)7I'.7%.)712'7<-'$2%.1F71'--(732%172%$$'.(7 32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7)'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18 Writing to Improve Reading and Listening Comprehension © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 1-31d Intermediate-sec1.indd 49 4/9/07 10:01:45 AM
  • 11.
    Step One: SOURCE IVF Summary Topic Sentences The article “She’s a !"##$%&' ,-$#./)'0 ()%*+ 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 Fashionista” 92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7 ;&'%#7+67<-"*('7 =&''.!7'-)7 1'--( %+"B17%7/*&-732"7 &'1B&.(71"7:5&*!%7%.)7 !"#$%&'( 0*(*1(7#%.67$-%!'(87 Step Two: Select )'(!&*+'( 7 92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7;&'%#7+67<-"*('7=&''.! 7'-)71'--(7%+"B17%7 /*&-732"7&'1B&.(71"7:5&*!%7%.)70*(*1(7#%.67$-%!'(8 ACTION ',$-%*.( ,-$#./)'1 /*0'( 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 compares, describes, -*(1( C2%$1'&7@*0'D7 E<-'!1&".*!(DF7*. #67(!*'.!'7+""G ',$-%*.( 2"37%7(*#$-'7 explains, gives, lists, $&'('.1( 7 1'-'/&%$273"&G(8 C2%$1'&7@*0'D7E<-'!1&".*!(DF7*.7#67(!*'.!'7+""G7',$-%*.(7 2"37%7(*#$-'71'-'/&%$273"&G(8 presents, provides, shows, $&"0*)'( ,-$#./)'2 tells 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 (2"3( 92'75%+-'7EH-*.)7 I'.7%.)712'7 1'--( <-'$2%.1F 1'--( 32%172%$$'.(7 32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7 )'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18 7 92'75%+-'7EH-*.)7I'.7%.)712'7<-'$2%.1F71'--(732%172%$$'.(7 32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7)'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18 Writing to Improve Reading and Listening Comprehension © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 1-31d Intermediate-sec1.indd 49 4/9/07 10:01:45 AM
  • 12.
    Step One: SOURCE IVF Summary Topic Sentences The article “She’s a !"##$%&' ,-$#./)'0 ()%*+ 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 Fashionista” 92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7 ;&'%#7+67<-"*('7 =&''.!7'-)7 1'--( %+"B17%7/*&-732"7 &'1B&.(71"7:5&*!%7%.)7 !"#$%&'( 0*(*1(7#%.67$-%!'(87 Step Two: Select )'(!&*+'( 7 92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7;&'%#7+67<-"*('7=&''.! 7'-)71'--(7%+"B17%7 /*&-732"7&'1B&.(71"7:5&*!%7%.)70*(*1(7#%.67$-%!'(8 ACTION ',$-%*.( ,-$#./)'1 /*0'( 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 compares, describes, -*(1( C2%$1'&7@*0'D7 E<-'!1&".*!(DF7*. #67(!*'.!'7+""G ',$-%*.( 2"37%7(*#$-'7 explains, gives, lists, $&'('.1( 7 1'-'/&%$273"&G(8 C2%$1'&7@*0'D7E<-'!1&".*!(DF7*.7#67(!*'.!'7+""G7',$-%*.(7 2"37%7(*#$-'71'-'/&%$273"&G(8 presents, provides, shows, $&"0*)'( ,-$#./)'2 tells 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 (2"3( 92'75%+-'7EH-*.)7 I'.7%.)712'7 1'--( <-'$2%.1F 1'--( 32%172%$$'.(7 32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7 )'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18 Step Three: MAIN IDEA 7 92'75%+-'7EH-*.)7I'.7%.)712'7<-'$2%.1F71'--(732%172%$$'.(7 32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7)'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18 Writing to Improve Reading and Listening Comprehension © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 1-31d Intermediate-sec1.indd 49 4/9/07 10:01:45 AM
  • 13.
    Step One: SOURCE IVF Summary Topic Sentences The article “She’s a !"##$%&' ,-$#./)'0 ()%*+ 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 Fashionista” 92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7 ;&'%#7+67<-"*('7 =&''.!7'-)7 1'--( %+"B17%7/*&-732"7 &'1B&.(71"7:5&*!%7%.)7 !"#$%&'( 0*(*1(7#%.67$-%!'(87 Step Two: Select )'(!&*+'( 7 92'7(1"&67:5&*!%.7;&'%#7+67<-"*('7=&''.! 7'-)71'--(7%+"B17%7 /*&-732"7&'1B&.(71"7:5&*!%7%.)70*(*1(7#%.67$-%!'(8 ACTION ',$-%*.( ,-$#./)'1 /*0'( 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 compares, describes, -*(1( C2%$1'&7@*0'D7 E<-'!1&".*!(DF7*. #67(!*'.!'7+""G ',$-%*.( 2"37%7(*#$-'7 explains, gives, lists, $&'('.1( 7 1'-'/&%$273"&G(8 C2%$1'&7@*0'D7E<-'!1&".*!(DF7*.7#67(!*'.!'7+""G7',$-%*.(7 2"37%7(*#$-'71'-'/&%$273"&G(8 presents, provides, shows, $&"0*)'( ,-$#./)'2 tells 4)'.1*56712'741'#8 >'-'!17%7?'&+8 @*.*(27A"B&792"B/218 (2"3( 92'75%+-'7EH-*.)7 I'.7%.)712'7 1'--( <-'$2%.1F 1'--( 32%172%$$'.(7 32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7 )'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18 Step Three: MAIN IDEA 7 92'75%+-'7EH-*.)7I'.7%.)712'7<-'$2%.1F71'--(732%172%$$'.(7 32'.7(*,7+-*.)7#'.7)'(!&*+'7%.7'-'$2%.18 a young girl who designs © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Writing to Improve Reading and Listening Comprehension Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 1-31d clothing. Intermediate-sec1.indd 49 4/9/07 10:01:45 AM
  • 15.
    Topic Sentence: The article“She’s a Fashionista” describes a young girl who designs clothing.
  • 16.
    Planning for Information/ Expository Writing !"#$%&'()*+,(-". !"#$%&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( !)*"+&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( & & ,& & & & - & & & - & & ,& & & & - & & & - & & ,& & & & - & & & - & & ,& & & & - & & & - .)/+$01")/&'& Information/Expository Paragraphs © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 4-5c Intermediate-sec4.indd 12 4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
  • 17.
    Planning for Information/ Expository Writing !"#$%&'()*+,(-". Young Fashion Designer !"#$%&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( !)*"+&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( & & ,& & & & - & & & - & & ,& & & & - & & & - & & ,& & & & - & & & - & & ,& & & & - & & & - .)/+$01")/&'& Information/Expository Paragraphs © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 4-5c Intermediate-sec4.indd 12 4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
  • 18.
    Planning for Information/ Expository Writing !"#$%&'()*+,(-". Young Fashion Designer !"#$%&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of !)*"+&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( a young girl who designs clothing. & & ,& & & & - & & & - & & ,& & & & - & & & - & & ,& & & & - & & & - & & ,& & & & - & & & - .)/+$01")/&'& Information/Expository Paragraphs © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 4-5c Intermediate-sec4.indd 12 4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
  • 19.
    Planning for Information/ Expository Writing !"#$%&'()*+,(-". Young Fashion Designer !"#$%&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of !)*"+&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( a young girl who designs clothing. & & ,& Her clothes are sold & & & - & & & - online and at t wo & & ,& stores. & & & - & & & - & & ,& & & & - & & & - & & ,& & & & - & & & - .)/+$01")/&'& Information/Expository Paragraphs © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 4-5c Intermediate-sec4.indd 12 4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
  • 20.
    Planning for Information/ Expository Writing !"#$%&'()*+,(-". Young Fashion Designer !"#$%&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of !)*"+&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( a young girl who designs clothing. & & ,& Her clothes are sold & & & - & & & - online and at t wo & & ,& stores. & & & - & & & - & & ,& Celicia makes 25-30 & & & - dresses a week. & & & - & & ,& & & & - & & & - .)/+$01")/&'& Information/Expository Paragraphs © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 4-5c Intermediate-sec4.indd 12 4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
  • 21.
    Planning for Information/ Expository Writing !"#$%&'()*+,(-". Young Fashion Designer !"#$%&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of !)*"+&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( a young girl who designs clothing. & & ,& Her clothes are sold & & & - & & & - online and at t wo & & ,& stores. & & & - & & & - & & ,& Celicia makes 25-30 & & & - dresses a week. & & & - & & ,& & & & - Her dream is to sell & & & - her clothes around the world. .)/+$01")/&'& Information/Expository Paragraphs © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 4-5c Intermediate-sec4.indd 12 4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
  • 22.
    Planning for Information/ Expository Writing !"#$%&'()*+,(-". Young Fashion Designer !"#$%&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of !)*"+&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( a young girl who designs clothing. & & ,& Her clothes are sold & & & - & & & - online and at t wo & & ,& stores. & & & - & & & - & & ,& Celicia makes 25-30 & & & - dresses a week. & & & - & & ,& & & & - Her dream is to sell & & & - her clothes around the world. .)/+$01")/&'& “Fashionista” describes the successful life of a girl who makes and sells her own clothing. Information/Expository Paragraphs © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 4-5c Intermediate-sec4.indd 12 4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
  • 23.
    Planning for Information/ Expository Writing !"#$%&'()*+,(-". Young Fashion Designer !"#$%&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of !)*"+&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( a young girl who designs clothing. & & ,& Her clothes are sold & & & - & & & - online and at t wo & & ,& stores. & & & - & & & - & & ,& Celicia makes 25-30 & & & - dresses a week. & & & - & & ,& & & & - Her dream is to sell & & & - her clothes around the world. .)/+$01")/&'& “Fashionista” describes the successful life of a girl who makes and sells her own clothing. Information/Expository Paragraphs © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 4-5c Intermediate-sec4.indd 12 4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
  • 24.
    Planning for Information/ Expository Writing !"#$%&'()*+,(-". Young Fashion Designer !"#$%&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of !)*"+&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( a young girl who designs clothing. & & ,& Her clothes are sold & & & - & & & - online and at t wo & & ,& stores. & & & - & & & - & & ,& Celicia makes 25-30 & & & - dresses a week. & & & - & & ,& & & & - Her dream is to sell & & & - her clothes around the world. .)/+$01")/&'& “Fashionista” describes the successful life of a girl who makes and sells her own clothing. Information/Expository Paragraphs © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 4-5c Intermediate-sec4.indd 12 4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
  • 25.
    Planning for Information/ Expository Writing !"#$%&'()*+,(-". Young Fashion Designer !"#$%&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of !)*"+&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( a young girl who designs clothing. & & ,& Her clothes are sold & & & - & & & - online and at t wo & & ,& stores. & & & - & & & - & & ,& Celicia makes 25-30 & & & - dresses a week. & & & - & & ,& & & & - Her dream is to sell & & & - her clothes around the world. .)/+$01")/&'& “Fashionista” describes the successful life of a girl who makes and sells her own clothing. Information/Expository Paragraphs © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 4-5c Intermediate-sec4.indd 12 4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
  • 26.
    Planning for Information/ Expository Writing !"#$%&'()*+,(-". Young Fashion Designer !"#$%&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of !)*"+&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( a young girl who designs clothing. & & ,& Her clothes are sold & & & - & & & - online and at t wo & & ,& stores. & & & - & & & - & & ,& Celicia makes 25-30 & & & - dresses a week. & & & - & & ,& & & & - Her dream is to sell & & & - her clothes around the world. .)/+$01")/&'& “Fashionista” describes the successful life of a girl who makes and sells her own clothing. Information/Expository Paragraphs © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 4-5c Intermediate-sec4.indd 12 4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
  • 27.
    Planning for Information/ Expository Writing !"#$%&'()*+,(-". Young Fashion Designer !"#$%&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of !)*"+&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( a young girl who designs clothing. & & ,& Her clothes are sold & & & - & & & - online and at t wo & & ,& stores. & & & - & & & - & & ,& Celicia makes 25-30 & & & - dresses a week. & & & - & & ,& & & & - Her dream is to sell & & & - her clothes around the world. .)/+$01")/&'& “Fashionista” describes the successful life of a girl who makes and sells her own clothing. Information/Expository Paragraphs © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 4-5c Intermediate-sec4.indd 12 4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
  • 28.
    Planning for Information/ Expository Writing !"#$%&'()*+,(-". Young Fashion Designer !"#$%&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of !)*"+&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( a young girl who designs clothing. & & ,& Her clothes are sold & & & - Celicia Cassini is online and at t wo & & & - a talented young stores. & & ,& fashion designer. & & & - & & & - & & ,& Celicia makes 25-30 & & & - dresses a week. & & & - & & ,& & & & - Her dream is to sell & & & - her clothes around the world. .)/+$01")/&'& “Fashionista” describes the successful life of a girl who makes and sells her own clothing. Information/Expository Paragraphs © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 4-5c Intermediate-sec4.indd 12 4/10/07 10:27:20 AM
  • 29.
    Planning for Information/ Expository Writing !"#$%&'()*+,(-". Young Fashion Designer !"#$%&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( The article “She’s a Fashionista” tells of !)*"+&'&&(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( a young girl who designs clothing. & & ,& Her clothes are sold & & & - Celicia Cassini is online and at t wo & & & - a talented young stores. & & ,& fashion designer. & & & - & & & - & & ,& Celicia makes 25-30 & & & - dresses a week. & & & - & & ,& & & & - Her dream is to sell & & & - her clothes around the world. .)/+$01")/&'& “Fashionista” describes the successful life of a girl who makes and sells her own clothing. Information/Expository Paragraphs © 2008 Sopris West Educational Services. Step Up to Writing • Intermediate Tool 4-5c Intermediate-sec4.indd 12 4/10/07 10:27:20 AM