The document summarizes feedback from an audience on a documentary about hair. The audience believed the documentary was suitable for its target age range of 16-60 based on the interviewees. They also felt the script anchored the topic well and the title sequence clearly illustrated hair as the topic. Interview positioning and attire matched the roles. Non-diegetic music suited the hair topic. The radio trailer was appealing and covered the documentary's topics in a way that would make people want to watch. The voiceover for the trailer was formal, clear and understandable.

1. Evaluation 3
What have you learned from your
audience feedback?

2. Question 1: As you can see, the audience watching our
documentary believed that it was 100% suitable to our target
audience. This is because they thought that the people within
the documentary (interviewees) were of this age category. They
also believed that the topic was relevant to everyone of this age
category.
100%
0%
Is the documentary relevant to the target
audience (16-60/both genders)? How?
Yes
No

3. Question 2:The chart below shows the results for question 2. The
question asks whether or not the script for the voice over
anchors the documentary. The pie chart clearly shows that
everyone who witnessed our documentary felt that the script did
anchor the documentary. Certain phrases and words used
related very much to the topic and the whole script flowed with
ease.
100%
0%
Does the script anchor the topic of the
documentary?
yes
no

4. Question 3:The chart below demonstrates how our title
sequence illustrates the topic of the documentary. The majority
of people who watched our documentary believed that the title
sequence did illustrate the topic as we used hair to create the
title sequence and the title that we wrote with the hair was ‘All
Things Hair’. The quotes that we have taken from the
documentary are that the voice over was “very clear” and “very
understandable”.
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yes no
Numberofpeople
Response
Does the title sequence clearly illustrate the
topic of the documentary? how?

5. Question 6: The chart below is showing the results to the
question on whether the interviews were in the right positions
and whether the mise-en-scene and attire was appropriate for
the topic of the documentary. As you can see from the results,
the audience give the feedback that all of these were correct
when related to the topic of the documentary and that the
interviewees were situated in the right position.
100%
0%
Is the positioning of the interviewees correct? does the
mise-en-scene and attire link to their role in the
documentary?
yes
no

6. Question 8: The graph below shows the questionnaire from our
questionnaire ‘does the non diegetic sound relate to the topic of
the documentary?’. The graph demonstrates that all of the
audience who have given us feedback that it was a good use of
music to go with the topic of the documentary as it was hair
related and that it was a good idea having the musical ‘Hair’
soundtrack.
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Numberofpeople
Response
Does the non diagetic sound (backing track on title
sequence) relate to the topic of the doucmentary?
why? was it a good choice for the documentary?

7. Question 9: The next question was about the radio trailer and whether or not
by listening to it, it would make you want to watch the documentary. From
the results we gathered from our audience feedback, we found that the
majority of people found that the radio trailer was appealing and it would
make them want to watch our documentary. 3 people out the audience who
listened to it felt differently and that the radio trailer was appealing enough
to drag the viewers in to watch it.
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of people
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Would the radio trailer make you want to watch
the documentary? Why?

8. Question 10: With our documentary, we tried to cover all aspects of
hair further than just getting a haircut. So we based a question on
whether we covered all of the topics we set out to do back when we
were planning the documentary. Topics such as hairstyles, phobias
and self-esteem were all tried to be incorporated into our
documentary. Everyone believed that the documentary had all of
these in it apart from one who thought otherwise.
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Does the radio trailer cover all three aspects of the
documentary (hairstyles, phobia of hair, self-esteem)?
Yes no

9. Question 11: The final question was based on the radio trailer. In
the radio trailer we used the same voice over as the one in
documentary, recorded by Connor Robson. The question asked
whether or not the voice was formal, clear and understandable.
The results show that most people in the audience believed that
Connor’s Voice was a suitable voice for the radio trailer and that
he spoke in a formal, clear and understanding way.
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of people
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Is the voiceover for the radio trailer formal, clear and
understandable? if so why?